十、书面表达。(10分)
假如你是学校报社记者,请根据以下思维导图提示,写一篇介绍航天员在太空生活的报道。不少于40词。

假如你是学校报社记者,请根据以下思维导图提示,写一篇介绍航天员在太空生活的报道。不少于40词。
答案
范文:
Taikonauts' Life in Space
Taikonauts have a special life in space. They get up early every morning and do exercise first to keep their bodies healthy. During the work time, they grow vegetables and rice, take beautiful photos of Earth and check the space station carefully. Sometimes they have fun too—they eat special space food and talk with their families on Earth. Their life is busy but meaningful. They work hard to help our country's space dream come true.
Taikonauts' Life in Space
Taikonauts have a special life in space. They get up early every morning and do exercise first to keep their bodies healthy. During the work time, they grow vegetables and rice, take beautiful photos of Earth and check the space station carefully. Sometimes they have fun too—they eat special space food and talk with their families on Earth. Their life is busy but meaningful. They work hard to help our country's space dream come true.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“Taikonauts' Life in Space”,身份是学校报社记者,需结合思维导图中的活动要点(左侧:get up early、do exercise、grow vegetables;右侧:take photos、check the space station),将要点串联成逻辑通顺的短文,词数不少于40,用一般现在时介绍航天员的太空生活,开头点题,中间分述日常活动,结尾适当总结。
【解析】写作时,先确定标题为“Taikonauts' Life in Space”,开头点明航天员在太空的生活很特别;接着按顺序介绍日常:早起锻炼保持健康,工作时种植蔬菜、拍摄地球照片、检查空间站;可补充和家人交流等细节,最后总结生活忙碌但有意义,为航天梦努力。注意语句连贯,符合英语表达习惯,覆盖所有思维导图要点。
【答案】Taikonauts' Life in Space
Taikonauts have a special life in space. They get up early every morning and do exercise first to keep their bodies healthy. During the work time, they grow vegetables and rice, take beautiful photos of Earth and check the space station carefully. Sometimes they have fun too—they eat special space food and talk with their families on Earth. Their life is busy but meaningful. They work hard to help our country's space dream come true.
【知识点】英语书面表达、信息整合写作
【点评】本题考查学生对思维导图信息的提取与整合能力,以及英语写作的基本表达能力,要求围绕主题组织要点,语言通顺,符合写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时,先确定标题为“Taikonauts' Life in Space”,开头点明航天员在太空的生活很特别;接着按顺序介绍日常:早起锻炼保持健康,工作时种植蔬菜、拍摄地球照片、检查空间站;可补充和家人交流等细节,最后总结生活忙碌但有意义,为航天梦努力。注意语句连贯,符合英语表达习惯,覆盖所有思维导图要点。
【答案】Taikonauts' Life in Space
Taikonauts have a special life in space. They get up early every morning and do exercise first to keep their bodies healthy. During the work time, they grow vegetables and rice, take beautiful photos of Earth and check the space station carefully. Sometimes they have fun too—they eat special space food and talk with their families on Earth. Their life is busy but meaningful. They work hard to help our country's space dream come true.
【知识点】英语书面表达、信息整合写作
【点评】本题考查学生对思维导图信息的提取与整合能力,以及英语写作的基本表达能力,要求围绕主题组织要点,语言通顺,符合写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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