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[2026 盐城景山中学月考]作为初三的学生,在学习生活中难免会经历挫折和困难,但生活中也总会出现一道光,再次照亮前方的道路,使我们振作、助我们前行。这道光可能是困惑时老师的一句话,也可能是一个伟人故事、一本侦探小说、一部电影、一首曲子、一种颜色、一档节目、一项爱好……请以“It Raised Me Up”为题和大家分享你生活中曾出现的“一道光”。
写作要点:
1. What raised you up?
2. How did it raise you up?
3. What do you think of it?
写作要求:
1. 主题意义积极向上;
2. 词数 100 左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文中必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
It Raised Me Up
It's common to meet with difficulties. However, there will always be a ray of light in life, which cheers us up and helps us move forward. As for me, the light is
[2026 盐城景山中学月考]作为初三的学生,在学习生活中难免会经历挫折和困难,但生活中也总会出现一道光,再次照亮前方的道路,使我们振作、助我们前行。这道光可能是困惑时老师的一句话,也可能是一个伟人故事、一本侦探小说、一部电影、一首曲子、一种颜色、一档节目、一项爱好……请以“It Raised Me Up”为题和大家分享你生活中曾出现的“一道光”。
写作要点:
1. What raised you up?
2. How did it raise you up?
3. What do you think of it?
写作要求:
1. 主题意义积极向上;
2. 词数 100 左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文中必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
It Raised Me Up
It's common to meet with difficulties. However, there will always be a ray of light in life, which cheers us up and helps us move forward. As for me, the light is
答案
It Raised Me Up
It's common to meet with difficulties. However, there will always be a ray of light in life, which cheers us up and helps us move forward. As for me, the light is the popular film *Forrest Gump*.
Last month, I did very badly in my mid-term math exam and lost all confidence in myself. I watched the film by chance at that time. The main character Forrest, who never gave up no matter what trouble he met, told me I should keep trying instead of being upset. Then I adjusted my learning methods and worked harder, and I got satisfying scores soon.
I think this film is really a precious treasure for me. It gives me endless courage whenever I get into trouble later.
It's common to meet with difficulties. However, there will always be a ray of light in life, which cheers us up and helps us move forward. As for me, the light is the popular film *Forrest Gump*.
Last month, I did very badly in my mid-term math exam and lost all confidence in myself. I watched the film by chance at that time. The main character Forrest, who never gave up no matter what trouble he met, told me I should keep trying instead of being upset. Then I adjusted my learning methods and worked harder, and I got satisfying scores soon.
I think this film is really a precious treasure for me. It gives me endless courage whenever I get into trouble later.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语主题写作题，需围绕“成长中的‘一道光’”展开，解题思路为：1. 确定具体的“光”（如书籍、电影、老师的鼓励等，需贴近自身经历）；2. 结合初三学生常见挫折（如考试失利），叙述该“光”出现的契机；3. 阐述“光”如何帮助自己振作前行（如传递精神力量、指引行动）；4. 表达对“光”的积极评价，确保覆盖所有写作要点，主题积极，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作时需遵循以下步骤：1. 补全开头，明确“光”的具体内容（如范文中的电影《阿甘正传》）；2. 叙述挫折事件（如数学期中考试失利，失去信心）；3. 说明遇到“光”的契机，结合“光”的内涵（如阿甘永不放弃的精神）阐述其对自己的激励；4. 写自己的改变（调整学习方法、努力学习）及结果（取得满意成绩）；5. 表达对“光”的看法（如珍贵的宝藏，带来勇气），确保连贯通顺，覆盖所有要点。
【答案】
It Raised Me Up
It's common to meet with difficulties. However, there will always be a ray of light in life, which cheers us up and helps us move forward. As for me, the light is the popular film *Forrest Gump*.
Last month, I did very badly in my mid-term math exam and lost all confidence in myself. I watched the film by chance at that time. The main character Forrest, who never gave up no matter what trouble he met, told me I should keep trying instead of being upset. Then I adjusted my learning methods and worked harder, and I got satisfying scores soon.
I think this film is really a precious treasure for me. It gives me endless courage whenever I get into trouble later.
【知识点】
英语写作、要点覆盖、情感表达
【点评】
本题结合初三学生的学习生活实际，以“成长中的正能量”为主题，考查学生的叙事能力与情感抒发，要求紧扣写作要点，主题积极向上，符合初中英语写作的考查目标，能引导学生反思成长经历，传递积极态度。
【难度系数】
0.4
这是一道英语主题写作题，需围绕“成长中的‘一道光’”展开，解题思路为：1. 确定具体的“光”（如书籍、电影、老师的鼓励等，需贴近自身经历）；2. 结合初三学生常见挫折（如考试失利），叙述该“光”出现的契机；3. 阐述“光”如何帮助自己振作前行（如传递精神力量、指引行动）；4. 表达对“光”的积极评价，确保覆盖所有写作要点，主题积极，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作时需遵循以下步骤：1. 补全开头，明确“光”的具体内容（如范文中的电影《阿甘正传》）；2. 叙述挫折事件（如数学期中考试失利，失去信心）；3. 说明遇到“光”的契机，结合“光”的内涵（如阿甘永不放弃的精神）阐述其对自己的激励；4. 写自己的改变（调整学习方法、努力学习）及结果（取得满意成绩）；5. 表达对“光”的看法（如珍贵的宝藏，带来勇气），确保连贯通顺，覆盖所有要点。
【答案】
It Raised Me Up
It's common to meet with difficulties. However, there will always be a ray of light in life, which cheers us up and helps us move forward. As for me, the light is the popular film *Forrest Gump*.
Last month, I did very badly in my mid-term math exam and lost all confidence in myself. I watched the film by chance at that time. The main character Forrest, who never gave up no matter what trouble he met, told me I should keep trying instead of being upset. Then I adjusted my learning methods and worked harder, and I got satisfying scores soon.
I think this film is really a precious treasure for me. It gives me endless courage whenever I get into trouble later.
【知识点】
英语写作、要点覆盖、情感表达
【点评】
本题结合初三学生的学习生活实际，以“成长中的正能量”为主题，考查学生的叙事能力与情感抒发，要求紧扣写作要点，主题积极向上，符合初中英语写作的考查目标，能引导学生反思成长经历，传递积极态度。
【难度系数】
0.4
