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假设你是陈杰，你的好友戴维（David）在邮件中已向你介绍了他的学校，他希望了解一下你的学校。请从学校场所名称、位置关系、你喜欢的地点及原因等方面，给戴维回复一封邮件，介绍并描述你的学校。70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Thank you for your email. I'd like to tell you about my school.
Bye for now,
Chen Jie
假设你是陈杰，你的好友戴维（David）在邮件中已向你介绍了他的学校，他希望了解一下你的学校。请从学校场所名称、位置关系、你喜欢的地点及原因等方面，给戴维回复一封邮件，介绍并描述你的学校。70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Thank you for your email. I'd like to tell you about my school.
It isn't big, but it's nice. The school hall is in the middle of the school. We can see it when we come into the school gate.
There is a big sports field behind the school hall. After class, we often play basketball there.
My favourite place is the library. It's next to the school hall. I can read books there. I love reading because it helps me know about the world.
Bye for now,
Chen Jie
答案
One possible version:
Dear David,
Thank you for your email. I'd like to tell you about my school.
It isn't big, but it's nice. The school hall is in the middle of the school. We can see it when we come into the school gate. There is a big sports field behind the school hall. After class, we often play basketball there. My favourite place is the library. It's next to the school hall. I can read books there. I love reading because it helps me know about the world.
Bye for now,
Chen Jie
Dear David,
Thank you for your email. I'd like to tell you about my school.
It isn't big, but it's nice. The school hall is in the middle of the school. We can see it when we come into the school gate. There is a big sports field behind the school hall. After class, we often play basketball there. My favourite place is the library. It's next to the school hall. I can read books there. I love reading because it helps me know about the world.
Bye for now,
Chen Jie
解析
【分析】
本题是给好友的回信，需围绕“介绍学校”展开，要覆盖三个核心要求：学校场所名称及位置关系、自己喜欢的地点及原因，还要控制在70词左右，用适合好友间的口语化英语表达。写作时先确定常用学校场所（如大厅、操场、图书馆），理清方位逻辑，再说明喜欢的场所及原因，确保内容连贯、符合初中英语水平。
【解析】
1. 先总起介绍学校整体特点（不大但很好）；
2. 依次说明场所及位置：学校大厅在中间，进门就能看到；操场在大厅后面，课后常去打球；
3. 点明最喜欢的图书馆，说明其位置（在大厅旁）及喜欢的原因（能读书、了解世界）；
4. 控制字数，用简单句型（there be、because从句），衔接自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear David,
Thank you for your email. I'd like to tell you about my school.
It isn't big, but it's nice. The school hall is in the middle of the school. We can see it when we come into the school gate. There is a big sports field behind the school hall. After class, we often play basketball there. My favourite place is the library. It's next to the school hall. I can read books there. I love reading because it helps me know about the world.
Bye for now,
Chen Jie
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、方位介词运用、学校词汇表达
【点评】
本题是初中英语基础话题写作，考查学生用英语描述事物、组织信息的能力，要求覆盖指定要点，语言简洁通顺，符合日常邮件语气，是实用的写作训练题。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是给好友的回信，需围绕“介绍学校”展开，要覆盖三个核心要求：学校场所名称及位置关系、自己喜欢的地点及原因，还要控制在70词左右，用适合好友间的口语化英语表达。写作时先确定常用学校场所（如大厅、操场、图书馆），理清方位逻辑，再说明喜欢的场所及原因，确保内容连贯、符合初中英语水平。
【解析】
1. 先总起介绍学校整体特点（不大但很好）；
2. 依次说明场所及位置：学校大厅在中间，进门就能看到；操场在大厅后面，课后常去打球；
3. 点明最喜欢的图书馆，说明其位置（在大厅旁）及喜欢的原因（能读书、了解世界）；
4. 控制字数，用简单句型（there be、because从句），衔接自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear David,
Thank you for your email. I'd like to tell you about my school.
It isn't big, but it's nice. The school hall is in the middle of the school. We can see it when we come into the school gate. There is a big sports field behind the school hall. After class, we often play basketball there. My favourite place is the library. It's next to the school hall. I can read books there. I love reading because it helps me know about the world.
Bye for now,
Chen Jie
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、方位介词运用、学校词汇表达
【点评】
本题是初中英语基础话题写作，考查学生用英语描述事物、组织信息的能力，要求覆盖指定要点，语言简洁通顺，符合日常邮件语气，是实用的写作训练题。
【难度系数】
0.6
