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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D32
假如你是李华,请给你的美国笔友 Andy 写一封信,介绍一下你的朋友 Joe 的收藏品。
内容包括:1.What is his collection? 2.When did he start his collection?
3.What does he learn from his collection? 4.What do you think of his collection?
要求:1.词数 60—80,开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅。
Dear Andy,
You told me that you wanted to learn something about Joe’s collection. Now I will introduce it to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,请给你的美国笔友 Andy 写一封信,介绍一下你的朋友 Joe 的收藏品。
内容包括:1.What is his collection? 2.When did he start his collection?
3.What does he learn from his collection? 4.What do you think of his collection?
要求:1.词数 60—80,开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅。
Dear Andy,
You told me that you wanted to learn something about Joe’s collection. Now I will introduce it to you.
Joe loves collecting books very much. He began collecting books when he was 5. Now he has more than 200 books. He loves reading books and he reads every day. He thinks it is important to read books. He will collect more books in the future. He believes he can learn a lot of knowledge from reading and collecting books.
I think his collection is really great.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Andy,
You told me that you wanted to learn something about Joe's collection. Now I will introduce it to you.
Joe loves collecting books very much. He began collecting books when he was 5. Now he has more than 200 books. He loves reading books and he reads every day. He thinks it is important to read books. He will collect more books in the future. He believes he can learn a lot of knowledge from reading and collecting books.
I think his collection is really great.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Andy,
You told me that you wanted to learn something about Joe's collection. Now I will introduce it to you.
Joe loves collecting books in his free time. He began collecting books when he was 5 years old. Now he has over 200 books. He loves reading books and he spends an hour reading books every day. He thinks it is important to read books. He is going to collect more books in the future. He is sure that he can learn a lot of knowledge from reading and collecting books.
I think he has a really meaningful collection.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Andy,
You told me that you wanted to learn something about Joe's collection. Now I will introduce it to you.
Joe loves collecting books very much. He began collecting books when he was 5. Now he has more than 200 books. He loves reading books and he reads every day. He thinks it is important to read books. He will collect more books in the future. He believes he can learn a lot of knowledge from reading and collecting books.
I think his collection is really great.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Andy,
You told me that you wanted to learn something about Joe's collection. Now I will introduce it to you.
Joe loves collecting books in his free time. He began collecting books when he was 5 years old. Now he has over 200 books. He loves reading books and he spends an hour reading books every day. He thinks it is important to read books. He is going to collect more books in the future. He is sure that he can learn a lot of knowledge from reading and collecting books.
I think he has a really meaningful collection.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题书信写作题，要求以李华的身份给美国笔友Andy写信，介绍朋友Joe的收藏品，需涵盖四个指定要点：收藏品类型、开始收集的时间、从收藏中的收获、个人对收藏的看法，同时要符合书信格式，控制词数60-80，语言流畅自然。
【解析】
1. 确定收藏品：选择书籍作为Joe的收藏品，符合常见话题设定；
2. 按要点组织内容：先点明Joe的收藏是书籍，接着说明5岁开始收集，再写他每日阅读、从收藏中学习知识，最后表达个人对收藏的看法；
3. 用词贴合初中英语水平，控制词数，确保内容紧扣要求、逻辑通顺。
【答案】
Dear Andy,
You told me that you wanted to learn something about Joe's collection. Now I will introduce it to you.
Joe loves collecting books very much. He began collecting books when he was 5. Now he has more than 200 books. He loves reading books and he reads every day. He thinks it is important to read books. He will collect more books in the future. He believes he can learn a lot of knowledge from reading and collecting books.
I think his collection is really great.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题写作、要点式表达
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书信写作能力，要求紧扣指定要点，语言通顺，符合词数要求，是初中阶段常见的话题写作题型，注重学生的语言组织和话题拓展能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题书信写作题，要求以李华的身份给美国笔友Andy写信，介绍朋友Joe的收藏品，需涵盖四个指定要点：收藏品类型、开始收集的时间、从收藏中的收获、个人对收藏的看法，同时要符合书信格式，控制词数60-80，语言流畅自然。
【解析】
1. 确定收藏品：选择书籍作为Joe的收藏品，符合常见话题设定；
2. 按要点组织内容：先点明Joe的收藏是书籍，接着说明5岁开始收集，再写他每日阅读、从收藏中学习知识，最后表达个人对收藏的看法；
3. 用词贴合初中英语水平，控制词数，确保内容紧扣要求、逻辑通顺。
【答案】
Dear Andy,
You told me that you wanted to learn something about Joe's collection. Now I will introduce it to you.
Joe loves collecting books very much. He began collecting books when he was 5. Now he has more than 200 books. He loves reading books and he reads every day. He thinks it is important to read books. He will collect more books in the future. He believes he can learn a lot of knowledge from reading and collecting books.
I think his collection is really great.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题写作、要点式表达
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书信写作能力，要求紧扣指定要点，语言通顺，符合词数要求，是初中阶段常见的话题写作题型，注重学生的语言组织和话题拓展能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
