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Ⅲ. 书面表达
假定你是李华，校英文报刊开展主题征文 “My Family’s Green Living Report”，请根据提示撰写环保报告。写作要点：
1. 日常优点：全家坚持节约水电，出行优先乘坐公交，改造废旧物件做成生活用品；
2. 现存问题：采购时常随手选购一次性包装袋，随意处理垃圾；
3. 整改方案：努力践行可持续的生活方式。
参考词汇：一次性的 disposable；可持续的 sustainable
写作要求：
（1）词数：80-100；
（2）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
My Family’s Green Living Report
Hello, everyone. Today, I’m going to report on
假定你是李华，校英文报刊开展主题征文 “My Family’s Green Living Report”，请根据提示撰写环保报告。写作要点：
1. 日常优点：全家坚持节约水电，出行优先乘坐公交，改造废旧物件做成生活用品；
2. 现存问题：采购时常随手选购一次性包装袋，随意处理垃圾；
3. 整改方案：努力践行可持续的生活方式。
参考词汇：一次性的 disposable；可持续的 sustainable
写作要求：
（1）词数：80-100；
（2）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
My Family’s Green Living Report
Hello, everyone. Today, I’m going to report on
my family’s environmental living habits.
答案
( One possible version )
My Family’s Green Living Report
Hello, everyone. Today, I’m going to report on my family’s environmental living habits.
In my family, everyone keeps good daily living habits. We save water and electricity in the daily life. We prefer taking buses to driving private cars when we go out. We upcycle old things that we no longer need to make something new. However, we sometimes use disposable bags and drop litter carelessly.
To live a greener life, I suggest we should give up these bad habits to develop a sustainable lifestyle. In conclusion, my family is improving our environmental habits step by step, and I believe we can take action to live a much greener life.
My Family’s Green Living Report
Hello, everyone. Today, I’m going to report on my family’s environmental living habits.
In my family, everyone keeps good daily living habits. We save water and electricity in the daily life. We prefer taking buses to driving private cars when we go out. We upcycle old things that we no longer need to make something new. However, we sometimes use disposable bags and drop litter carelessly.
To live a greener life, I suggest we should give up these bad habits to develop a sustainable lifestyle. In conclusion, my family is improving our environmental habits step by step, and I believe we can take action to live a much greener life.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题为“My Family’s Green Living Report”，需承接给定开头，围绕三个核心写作要点展开：1. 家庭日常绿色优点（节水节电、优先公交出行、旧物改造）；2. 现存环保问题（使用一次性包装袋、随意处理垃圾）；3. 整改方案（践行可持续生活方式）。需注意词数80-100，行文连贯，正确使用参考词汇（disposable、sustainable），结构清晰，逻辑通顺。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，点明报告主题为家庭环保生活习惯；
2. 阐述日常优点：用“save water and electricity”“prefer taking buses to driving”“upcycle old things”对应要点；
3. 转折说明现存问题：用“use disposable bags”“drop litter carelessly”体现；
4. 提出整改方案：建议改掉坏习惯，践行可持续生活，最后总结家庭在进步，表达对绿色生活的信心；
5. 检查词数与要点，确保符合要求。
【答案】
My Family’s Green Living Report
Hello, everyone. Today, I’m going to report on my family’s environmental living habits.
In my family, everyone keeps good daily living habits. We save water and electricity in the daily life. We prefer taking buses to driving private cars when we go out. We upcycle old things that we no longer need to make something new. However, we sometimes use disposable bags and drop litter carelessly.
To live a greener life, I suggest we should give up these bad habits to develop a sustainable lifestyle. In conclusion, my family is improving our environmental habits step by step, and I believe we can take action to live a much greener life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环保主题英语写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣征文主题，要点齐全，准确使用参考词汇，结构清晰（优点-问题-方案），行文连贯，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文，适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作主题为“My Family’s Green Living Report”，需承接给定开头，围绕三个核心写作要点展开：1. 家庭日常绿色优点（节水节电、优先公交出行、旧物改造）；2. 现存环保问题（使用一次性包装袋、随意处理垃圾）；3. 整改方案（践行可持续生活方式）。需注意词数80-100，行文连贯，正确使用参考词汇（disposable、sustainable），结构清晰，逻辑通顺。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，点明报告主题为家庭环保生活习惯；
2. 阐述日常优点：用“save water and electricity”“prefer taking buses to driving”“upcycle old things”对应要点；
3. 转折说明现存问题：用“use disposable bags”“drop litter carelessly”体现；
4. 提出整改方案：建议改掉坏习惯，践行可持续生活，最后总结家庭在进步，表达对绿色生活的信心；
5. 检查词数与要点，确保符合要求。
【答案】
My Family’s Green Living Report
Hello, everyone. Today, I’m going to report on my family’s environmental living habits.
In my family, everyone keeps good daily living habits. We save water and electricity in the daily life. We prefer taking buses to driving private cars when we go out. We upcycle old things that we no longer need to make something new. However, we sometimes use disposable bags and drop litter carelessly.
To live a greener life, I suggest we should give up these bad habits to develop a sustainable lifestyle. In conclusion, my family is improving our environmental habits step by step, and I believe we can take action to live a much greener life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环保主题英语写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣征文主题，要点齐全，准确使用参考词汇，结构清晰（优点-问题-方案），行文连贯，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文，适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.5
