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Ⅲ.结合Ⅰ和Ⅱ的内容完成习作
The unforgettable experience of
taking responsibility
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. I am a student in
Grade 9.
The unforgettable experience of
taking responsibility
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. I am a student in
Grade 9.
Last Sunday, I had an unforgettable experience in my neighbourhood.
On that afternoon, I saw an elderly grandma standing by the road and looking quite worried. There was no one around to help her. I walked up to her and found out that she was lost. I helped her calm down gently and asked for her family's phone number. Finally, I tried hard to get in touch with her family. Then her son came to take her home. I felt proud and warm after helping her.
From this experience, I learned that teenagers should be kind and responsible. We should try our best to help people in need and take responsibility in our daily lives.
答案
One possible version:
The unforgettable experience of taking responsibility
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. I am a student in Grade 9. Last Sunday, I had an unforgettable experience in my neighbourhood.
On that afternoon, I saw an elderly grandma standing by the road and looking quite worried. There was no one around to help her. I walked up to her and found out that she was lost. I helped her calm down gently and asked for her family's phone number. Finally, I tried hard to get in touch with her family. Then her son came to take her home. I felt proud and warm after helping her.
From this experience, I learned that teenagers should be kind and responsible. We should try our best to help people in need and take responsibility in our daily lives.
The unforgettable experience of taking responsibility
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. I am a student in Grade 9. Last Sunday, I had an unforgettable experience in my neighbourhood.
On that afternoon, I saw an elderly grandma standing by the road and looking quite worried. There was no one around to help her. I walked up to her and found out that she was lost. I helped her calm down gently and asked for her family's phone number. Finally, I tried hard to get in touch with her family. Then her son came to take her home. I felt proud and warm after helping her.
From this experience, I learned that teenagers should be kind and responsible. We should try our best to help people in need and take responsibility in our daily lives.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语记叙文写作题，主题为“承担责任的难忘经历”，要求以九年级学生李华的身份完成。解题思路：首先明确写作核心是围绕“责任”展开个人难忘经历，需包含经历的起因、经过、结果，最后点明感悟；其次结合生活实际选择贴合主题的小事（如帮助迷路老人，符合责任主题）；最后确保语言通顺、结构完整，呼应开头的自我介绍。
【解析】
需补充经历内容与感悟，按以下步骤完成：
1. 补充经历背景：点明时间、地点及事件的引入；
2. 叙述经历经过：详细描述看到的场景、自己的行动、事件的发展与结果；
3. 点明感悟：结合经历阐述对“责任”的理解，呼应主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
The unforgettable experience of taking responsibility
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. I am a student in Grade 9. Last Sunday, I had an unforgettable experience in my neighbourhood.
On that afternoon, I saw an elderly grandma standing by the road and looking quite worried. There was no one around to help her. I walked up to her and found out that she was lost. I helped her calm down gently and asked for her family's phone number. Finally, I tried hard to get in touch with her family. Then her son came to take her home. I felt proud and warm after helping her.
From this experience, I learned that teenagers should be kind and responsible. We should try our best to help people in need and take responsibility in our daily lives.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、主题表达
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求围绕“承担责任”的主题完成记叙文，结合自身经历，内容需完整、逻辑清晰，语言符合九年级学生的英语水平，能体现对“责任”的理解。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一道英语记叙文写作题，主题为“承担责任的难忘经历”，要求以九年级学生李华的身份完成。解题思路：首先明确写作核心是围绕“责任”展开个人难忘经历，需包含经历的起因、经过、结果，最后点明感悟；其次结合生活实际选择贴合主题的小事（如帮助迷路老人，符合责任主题）；最后确保语言通顺、结构完整，呼应开头的自我介绍。
【解析】
需补充经历内容与感悟，按以下步骤完成：
1. 补充经历背景：点明时间、地点及事件的引入；
2. 叙述经历经过：详细描述看到的场景、自己的行动、事件的发展与结果；
3. 点明感悟：结合经历阐述对“责任”的理解，呼应主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
The unforgettable experience of taking responsibility
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. I am a student in Grade 9. Last Sunday, I had an unforgettable experience in my neighbourhood.
On that afternoon, I saw an elderly grandma standing by the road and looking quite worried. There was no one around to help her. I walked up to her and found out that she was lost. I helped her calm down gently and asked for her family's phone number. Finally, I tried hard to get in touch with her family. Then her son came to take her home. I felt proud and warm after helping her.
From this experience, I learned that teenagers should be kind and responsible. We should try our best to help people in need and take responsibility in our daily lives.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、主题表达
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求围绕“承担责任”的主题完成记叙文，结合自身经历，内容需完整、逻辑清晰，语言符合九年级学生的英语水平，能体现对“责任”的理解。
【难度系数】
0.6
