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【写作导引】
本单元以“让我们庆祝吧！”为话题，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“节日”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①谈论各种节日和庆祝活动；②对比不同文化中的节日；③探寻节日的重要性。
【写作任务】
你校校报正在进行以“A Festival that I’ll Never Forget”为题的英语征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文，向校报投稿，分享一次令你难以忘怀的节日经历，并分享它给你带来的感悟，或简单谈谈某个特定节日的重要性。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
本单元以“让我们庆祝吧！”为话题，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“节日”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①谈论各种节日和庆祝活动；②对比不同文化中的节日；③探寻节日的重要性。
【写作任务】
你校校报正在进行以“A Festival that I’ll Never Forget”为题的英语征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文，向校报投稿，分享一次令你难以忘怀的节日经历，并分享它给你带来的感悟，或简单谈谈某个特定节日的重要性。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
答案
A Festival that I’ll Never Forget
Of all the festival experiences I have had, the Mid-Autumn Festival last year is the one I will never forget.
My parents used to be too busy with their work to spend the full festival with me, but last year we drove to my grandparents’ home in the countryside together. We picked fresh pomelos from the tree in the yard first, then made sweet mooncakes ourselves under my grandma’s guidance. After dinner, we sat around the table in the open air, enjoyed the bright full moon and listened to my grandpa’s old stories about the origin of the Mid-Autumn Festival. None of us played with mobile phones that warm night.
That day I finally understood the true meaning of festivals: they are not just for eating delicious food, but for bringing all family members together to share love and warmth. That special Mid-Autumn Festival will stay in my mind forever.
Of all the festival experiences I have had, the Mid-Autumn Festival last year is the one I will never forget.
My parents used to be too busy with their work to spend the full festival with me, but last year we drove to my grandparents’ home in the countryside together. We picked fresh pomelos from the tree in the yard first, then made sweet mooncakes ourselves under my grandma’s guidance. After dinner, we sat around the table in the open air, enjoyed the bright full moon and listened to my grandpa’s old stories about the origin of the Mid-Autumn Festival. None of us played with mobile phones that warm night.
That day I finally understood the true meaning of festivals: they are not just for eating delicious food, but for bringing all family members together to share love and warmth. That special Mid-Autumn Festival will stay in my mind forever.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题为“A Festival that I’ll Never Forget”，属于“人与社会”主题下的节日话题。解题思路：1. 审题确定需分享难忘的节日经历及感悟；2. 选取具体节日（如范文中的中秋节），开头直接点题引出难忘的节日；3. 主体段叙述具体经历，补充细节（如家人相聚的场景、具体活动），突出难忘的原因；4. 结尾段升华主题，点明节日的真正意义，呼应题目。
【解析】
按照英语写作规范步骤：1. 开篇段：直接点明去年的中秋节是自己难忘的节日；2. 主体段：交代背景（父母此前忙碌），详细叙述去年和家人去乡下爷爷奶奶家的具体活动（摘柚子、做月饼、赏月听故事，突出无手机的温馨场景）；3. 结尾段：总结感悟，点明节日的意义是家人相聚共享爱与温暖，呼应题目。
【答案】
A Festival that I’ll Never Forget
Of all the festival experiences I have had, the Mid-Autumn Festival last year is the one I will never forget.
My parents used to be too busy with their work to spend the full festival with me, but last year we drove to my grandparents’ home in the countryside together. We picked fresh pomelos from the tree in the yard first, then made sweet mooncakes ourselves under my grandma’s guidance. After dinner, we sat around the table in the open air, enjoyed the bright full moon and listened to my grandpa’s old stories about the origin of the Mid-Autumn Festival. None of us played with mobile phones that warm night.
That day I finally understood the true meaning of festivals: they are not just for eating delicious food, but for bringing all family members together to share love and warmth. That special Mid-Autumn Festival will stay in my mind forever.
【知识点】
英语写作、节日话题表达、记叙文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文要求，选取具体节日经历，细节生动，情感真挚，结尾升华了节日的意义，语言流畅，词数达标，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作主题为“A Festival that I’ll Never Forget”，属于“人与社会”主题下的节日话题。解题思路：1. 审题确定需分享难忘的节日经历及感悟；2. 选取具体节日（如范文中的中秋节），开头直接点题引出难忘的节日；3. 主体段叙述具体经历，补充细节（如家人相聚的场景、具体活动），突出难忘的原因；4. 结尾段升华主题，点明节日的真正意义，呼应题目。
【解析】
按照英语写作规范步骤：1. 开篇段：直接点明去年的中秋节是自己难忘的节日；2. 主体段：交代背景（父母此前忙碌），详细叙述去年和家人去乡下爷爷奶奶家的具体活动（摘柚子、做月饼、赏月听故事，突出无手机的温馨场景）；3. 结尾段：总结感悟，点明节日的意义是家人相聚共享爱与温暖，呼应题目。
【答案】
A Festival that I’ll Never Forget
Of all the festival experiences I have had, the Mid-Autumn Festival last year is the one I will never forget.
My parents used to be too busy with their work to spend the full festival with me, but last year we drove to my grandparents’ home in the countryside together. We picked fresh pomelos from the tree in the yard first, then made sweet mooncakes ourselves under my grandma’s guidance. After dinner, we sat around the table in the open air, enjoyed the bright full moon and listened to my grandpa’s old stories about the origin of the Mid-Autumn Festival. None of us played with mobile phones that warm night.
That day I finally understood the true meaning of festivals: they are not just for eating delicious food, but for bringing all family members together to share love and warmth. That special Mid-Autumn Festival will stay in my mind forever.
【知识点】
英语写作、节日话题表达、记叙文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文要求，选取具体节日经历，细节生动，情感真挚，结尾升华了节日的意义，语言流畅，词数达标，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
跟踪演练
春节、清明节、端午节、中秋节……中华民族上下五千年形成了内涵丰富、形式多样的节日文化。
学校英语社团决定开展“多彩的传统节日”主题宣传活动，请用英语介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
1. 话题作文。
2. 词数：80-100之间。
3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
春节、清明节、端午节、中秋节……中华民族上下五千年形成了内涵丰富、形式多样的节日文化。
学校英语社团决定开展“多彩的传统节日”主题宣传活动，请用英语介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
1. 话题作文。
2. 词数：80-100之间。
3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
答案
写作提优练
范文:
My favourite traditional festival is the Spring Festival. Let me introduce it to you.
It is on the first day of the first lunar month. Family members usually get together to eat a big dinner. We can see red things everywhere, because they mean happiness and good fortune. Children will get lucky money from their parents. People always have a long holiday to relax. It's a new beginning of the year. It not only means the family reunion, but also shows traditional Chinese culture.
I like the Spring Festival very much.
范文:
My favourite traditional festival is the Spring Festival. Let me introduce it to you.
It is on the first day of the first lunar month. Family members usually get together to eat a big dinner. We can see red things everywhere, because they mean happiness and good fortune. Children will get lucky money from their parents. People always have a long holiday to relax. It's a new beginning of the year. It not only means the family reunion, but also shows traditional Chinese culture.
I like the Spring Festival very much.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题作文，要求介绍最喜欢的中国传统节日。解题思路：① 选取代表性强、易展开内容的传统节日（如春节）；② 梳理写作要点：节日时间、核心习俗、节日意义；③ 组织语言，确保语法正确、语句连贯，词数控制在80-100之间，适当发挥。
【解析】
写作时，先开篇点明最喜欢的节日是春节；接着说明春节的时间（农历正月初一），列举家人团聚吃年夜饭、红色装饰寓意幸福好运、孩子得压岁钱、人们放长假等习俗；再阐述春节的意义（家庭团圆、传承中国传统文化）；最后表达对春节的喜爱，注意用词准确，符合英语表达习惯，控制词数。
【答案】
My favourite traditional festival is the Spring Festival. Let me introduce it to you.
It is on the first day of the first lunar month. Family members usually get together to eat a big dinner. We can see red things everywhere, because they mean happiness and good fortune. Children will get lucky money from their parents. People always have a long holiday to relax. It's a new beginning of the year. It not only means the family reunion, but also shows traditional Chinese culture.
I like the Spring Festival very much.
【知识点】
英语话题作文写作、中国传统节日英语表达
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，涵盖了春节的时间、习俗与文化意义，语句通顺，语法正确，符合词数要求，清晰传达了对春节的喜爱，体现了中国传统节日的文化内涵，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语话题作文，要求介绍最喜欢的中国传统节日。解题思路：① 选取代表性强、易展开内容的传统节日（如春节）；② 梳理写作要点：节日时间、核心习俗、节日意义；③ 组织语言，确保语法正确、语句连贯，词数控制在80-100之间，适当发挥。
【解析】
写作时，先开篇点明最喜欢的节日是春节；接着说明春节的时间（农历正月初一），列举家人团聚吃年夜饭、红色装饰寓意幸福好运、孩子得压岁钱、人们放长假等习俗；再阐述春节的意义（家庭团圆、传承中国传统文化）；最后表达对春节的喜爱，注意用词准确，符合英语表达习惯，控制词数。
【答案】
My favourite traditional festival is the Spring Festival. Let me introduce it to you.
It is on the first day of the first lunar month. Family members usually get together to eat a big dinner. We can see red things everywhere, because they mean happiness and good fortune. Children will get lucky money from their parents. People always have a long holiday to relax. It's a new beginning of the year. It not only means the family reunion, but also shows traditional Chinese culture.
I like the Spring Festival very much.
【知识点】
英语话题作文写作、中国传统节日英语表达
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，涵盖了春节的时间、习俗与文化意义，语句通顺，语法正确，符合词数要求，清晰传达了对春节的喜爱，体现了中国传统节日的文化内涵，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
