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(2025·江苏苏州草桥中学期中)学校的英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请你根据下面的要点提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
【要点】
1. Why should we read? (for fun...)
2. What are your reading habits? (how often...)
3. What’s your favourite book? (name, type, content“内容”)
4. What can you learn from your favourite book? (1—2点)
Reference(参考)：*Gulliver’s Travel* *Alice in Wonderland* *Treasure Island*
Journey to the West* *Harry Potter* series *The Long March* ...
【要求】
1. 根据上面所给提示，适当发挥。
2. 词数 90 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名.
I often read books in my free time.
(2025·江苏苏州草桥中学期中)学校的英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请你根据下面的要点提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
【要点】
1. Why should we read? (for fun...)
2. What are your reading habits? (how often...)
3. What’s your favourite book? (name, type, content“内容”)
4. What can you learn from your favourite book? (1—2点)
Reference(参考)：*Gulliver’s Travel* *Alice in Wonderland* *Treasure Island*
Journey to the West* *Harry Potter* series *The Long March* ...
【要求】
1. 根据上面所给提示，适当发挥。
2. 词数 90 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名.
I often read books in my free time.
答案
I often read books in my free time. Reading not only brings me great fun but also opens up a whole new world to me. I read for at least half an hour every day, usually before going to bed.
My favourite book is *Journey to the West*, a classic Chinese novel. It tells a story of Monkey King and his three companions who overcome countless difficulties to get Buddhist scriptures.
From this book, I learn that we should never give up no matter how hard things get. Also, teamwork is really important to achieve our goals.
My favourite book is *Journey to the West*, a classic Chinese novel. It tells a story of Monkey King and his three companions who overcome countless difficulties to get Buddhist scriptures.
From this book, I learn that we should never give up no matter how hard things get. Also, teamwork is really important to achieve our goals.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道阅读主题的征文写作题，首先要明确题干要求的4个核心要点，不能出现遗漏：第一点要阐述阅读的意义，结合提示的for fun合理拓展阅读的其他好处；第二点要说明自身阅读习惯，明确交代阅读频率；第三点从给出的参考书目中选熟悉的作品，点明书名、作品类型和核心内容；第四点写出从这本书中得到的1-2点感悟。写作时注意语句衔接自然，控制总词数在90左右，避开真实姓名、校名等敏感信息，承接好题目给出的开头即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，回应第一个写作要点：用not only...but also...结构点明阅读既能带来乐趣，又能打开全新的视野，清晰说明阅读的价值。
2. 紧接着回应第二个写作要点：明确说明自己每天至少阅读半小时，通常在睡前进行，清晰交代阅读频率和日常阅读习惯。
3. 过渡到第三个写作要点：选择参考书目里的经典作品《西游记》，点明它是中国经典小说，简要介绍核心内容：美猴王和三位同伴克服无数困难取得佛经的故事，内容简洁不冗余。
4. 最后回应第四个写作要点：点明从书中学到的两个道理：无论遇到多大困难都不要放弃，同时实现目标离不开团队协作，符合题干1-2点的要求。
5. 整体通读调整语句流畅度，检查总词数符合要求，没有出现违规的真实个人信息，完成全文。
【答案】
I often read books in my free time. Reading not only brings me great fun but also opens up a whole new world to me. I read for at least half an hour every day, usually before going to bed.
My favourite book is *Journey to the West*, a classic Chinese novel. It tells a story of Monkey King and his three companions who overcome countless difficulties to get Buddhist scriptures.
From this book, I learn that we should never give up no matter how hard things get. Also, teamwork is really important to achieve our goals.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
阅读主题作文
并列复合句运用
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部四个写作要点，要点衔接自然流畅，没有生硬堆砌内容，用到了not only...but also...、no matter how等加分句式，表达地道贴合征文的投稿语境，词数控制精准符合90词左右的要求，没有出现任何违规的真实个人信息，是一篇符合初中英语写作评分标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道阅读主题的征文写作题，首先要明确题干要求的4个核心要点，不能出现遗漏：第一点要阐述阅读的意义，结合提示的for fun合理拓展阅读的其他好处；第二点要说明自身阅读习惯，明确交代阅读频率；第三点从给出的参考书目中选熟悉的作品，点明书名、作品类型和核心内容；第四点写出从这本书中得到的1-2点感悟。写作时注意语句衔接自然，控制总词数在90左右，避开真实姓名、校名等敏感信息，承接好题目给出的开头即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，回应第一个写作要点：用not only...but also...结构点明阅读既能带来乐趣，又能打开全新的视野，清晰说明阅读的价值。
2. 紧接着回应第二个写作要点：明确说明自己每天至少阅读半小时，通常在睡前进行，清晰交代阅读频率和日常阅读习惯。
3. 过渡到第三个写作要点：选择参考书目里的经典作品《西游记》，点明它是中国经典小说，简要介绍核心内容：美猴王和三位同伴克服无数困难取得佛经的故事，内容简洁不冗余。
4. 最后回应第四个写作要点：点明从书中学到的两个道理：无论遇到多大困难都不要放弃，同时实现目标离不开团队协作，符合题干1-2点的要求。
5. 整体通读调整语句流畅度，检查总词数符合要求，没有出现违规的真实个人信息，完成全文。
【答案】
I often read books in my free time. Reading not only brings me great fun but also opens up a whole new world to me. I read for at least half an hour every day, usually before going to bed.
My favourite book is *Journey to the West*, a classic Chinese novel. It tells a story of Monkey King and his three companions who overcome countless difficulties to get Buddhist scriptures.
From this book, I learn that we should never give up no matter how hard things get. Also, teamwork is really important to achieve our goals.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
阅读主题作文
并列复合句运用
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部四个写作要点，要点衔接自然流畅，没有生硬堆砌内容，用到了not only...but also...、no matter how等加分句式，表达地道贴合征文的投稿语境，词数控制精准符合90词左右的要求，没有出现任何违规的真实个人信息，是一篇符合初中英语写作评分标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
