[2025 山西太原调研]假如你是李华，你正在为太原文旅创作短视频脚本，你想为这座历史悠久的城市拍摄哪些画面呢？漫步迎泽公园，捕捉晨练者踏歌而行；移步汾河之畔，可见垂钓者静守一杆悠然；骑行者追风掠影而过，野餐家庭铺展美食共享温馨……请选择一个时间点，描述一下当时的天气及人们的活动与感受。太原的鲜活与诗意，正在你的笔下慢慢展开。
要点：
(1)What time is it now and how's the weather in Taiyuan?
(2)What are people doing and how do they feel?
(3)What do you think of Taiyuan?
要求：
(1)内容包括以上所有要点，可适当补充，语句通顺，行文连贯；
(2)词数不少于 60；
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【参考范文】
It's eight o'clock on Sunday morning. The
weather is sunny.
I am walking in Yingze Park. There are many
people in the park. They all feel relaxed and
comfortable. Some people are doing morning
exercises. Some people are playing the erhu. Some
people are dancing. Some people are playing
basketball. Some people are running. Some people
are playing ping-pong.
I like Taiyuan very much. I think it is both
beautiful and suitable for living.

【分析】
首先拿到这道写作题先明确核心要求：围绕太原的城市日常场景完成创作，必须覆盖题干给出的三个指定要点。第一步先选定一个贴合题干素材的时间点，比如周日清晨八点，搭配晴朗舒适的天气，符合晨练场景的设定，完成第一个要点的输出；第二步结合题干给出的迎泽公园、汾河沿岸等场景，用现在进行时列举不同市民的休闲活动，同时点明大家放松惬意的感受，覆盖第二个要点；第三步最后输出自己对太原的评价，突出城市宜居、有烟火诗意的特点，完成第三个要点，最后检查词数达标，没有出现真实人名校名，行文通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇直接回应第一个要点：清晰点明当前时间是周日早上八点，天气晴朗，开门见山切入场景。
2. 主体部分回应第二个要点：以漫步迎泽公园为切入场景，用现在进行时列举不同市民的晨练休闲活动，同时点明所有人都处于放松舒适的状态，符合题干给出的太原鲜活有烟火气的设定。
3. 结尾部分回应第三个要点：直接表达自己对太原的喜爱，点明太原既美丽又宜居的特点，呼应文旅创作的主题。
4. 最后核查：所有要点全部覆盖，词数远超60，没有出现真实人名校名，符合题目全部要求。
【答案】
It's eight o'clock on Sunday morning. The weather is sunny.
I am walking in Yingze Park. There are many people in the park. They all feel relaxed and comfortable. Some people are doing morning exercises. Some people are playing the erhu. Some people are dancing. Some people are playing basketball. Some people are running. Some people are playing ping-pong.
I like Taiyuan very much. I think it is both beautiful and suitable for living.
【知识点】
现在进行时，情景类写作，城市介绍表达
【点评】
本题属于基础提示类半开放写作，题干已经给出了大量可直接使用的场景素材，学生不容易跑题，只要按顺序覆盖三个指定要点，正确使用现在进行时描述正在发生的活动，就能顺利完成写作，基础较好的学生还可以补充汾河骑行、家庭野餐等细节让内容更丰富生动。
【难度系数】
0.8