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76. 假设你是Teng Fei,将参加主题为“New Year, New Me”的寒假英语项目活动，请你根据以下提示分享你的个人寒假计划。
要求:(1)短文中应包含至少两方面的内容要点 ,可适当发挥(参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考 )。
(2)词数80左右;短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
New Year, New Me
Hi, everyone! I’m glad to share my plan with you.
Dream big, plan well, smile often, and good things will happen. Thank you!
质量反馈
亲爱的同学:
感谢你使用作业本。为了更好地为你服务,提高作业本的质量,我们恳切希望你在使用后,对作业本编写内容的科学性、题目的新颖性、题目的难易程度以及本书的版面设计、印刷质量等方面做出反馈,我们将认真地对待每条意见,并及时加以改进。
来信请寄:浙江省教育厅教研室课程部收(地址:杭州市学院路35号浙江教育综合大楼,邮编:310012),也可发送电子邮件到:zjjyskcb@163.com。
浙江省教育厅教研室
《英语作业本 九年级上册》质量跟踪表
我所在的学校:
要求:(1)短文中应包含
(2)词数80左右;短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
New Year, New Me
Hi, everyone! I’m glad to share my plan with you.
To start with, I want to be a smart learner. I plan to take notes carefully in class and review what I've learnt every day. I'll also discuss problems with my classmates to get better at learning. As I look ahead to the future, I hope to build it with creativity. I am all interested in space, so I will read more books about space and even make small model rockets. I believe these activities will help me grow into the better version of myself.
Dream big, plan well, smile often, and good things will happen. Thank you!
质量反馈
亲爱的同学:
感谢你使用作业本。为了更好地为你服务,提高作业本的质量,我们恳切希望你在使用后,对作业本编写内容的科学性、题目的新颖性、题目的难易程度以及本书的版面设计、印刷质量等方面做出反馈,我们将认真地对待每条意见,并及时加以改进。
来信请寄:浙江省教育厅教研室课程部收(地址:杭州市学院路35号浙江教育综合大楼,邮编:310012),也可发送电子邮件到:zjjyskcb@163.com。
浙江省教育厅教研室
《英语作业本 九年级上册》质量跟踪表
我所在的学校:
答案
76. Possible version 1:
Hi, everyone! I'm glad to share my plan with you.
To start with, I want to be a smart learner. I plan to take notes carefully in class and review what I've learnt every day. I'll also discuss problems with my classmates to get better at learning. As I look ahead to the future, I hope to build it with creativity. I am all interested in space, so I will read more books about space and even make small model rockets. I believe these activities will help me grow into the better version of myself.
Dream big, plan well, smile often, and good things will happen. Thank you!
Possible version 2:
Hi, everyone! I'm glad to share my plan with you.
For the "New Year, New Me" project, I have two main plans. I want to shape myself better first. Inspired by sports stars, I will exercise for at least 30 minutes every day to keep healthy. I also hope to learn from great musicians to become more patient. Besides working on myself, I will also try to be a smart learner. I will use study apps to help me learn English words and make a study plan every week. I believe these small changes will make a big difference.
Dream big, plan well, smile often, and good things will happen. Thank you!
Hi, everyone! I'm glad to share my plan with you.
To start with, I want to be a smart learner. I plan to take notes carefully in class and review what I've learnt every day. I'll also discuss problems with my classmates to get better at learning. As I look ahead to the future, I hope to build it with creativity. I am all interested in space, so I will read more books about space and even make small model rockets. I believe these activities will help me grow into the better version of myself.
Dream big, plan well, smile often, and good things will happen. Thank you!
Possible version 2:
Hi, everyone! I'm glad to share my plan with you.
For the "New Year, New Me" project, I have two main plans. I want to shape myself better first. Inspired by sports stars, I will exercise for at least 30 minutes every day to keep healthy. I also hope to learn from great musicians to become more patient. Besides working on myself, I will also try to be a smart learner. I will use study apps to help me learn English words and make a study plan every week. I believe these small changes will make a big difference.
Dream big, plan well, smile often, and good things will happen. Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题为九年级英语书面表达题，要求围绕“New Year, New Me”主题分享寒假计划，需包含至少两方面内容，词数80左右，开头已给出。解题思路：①先确定两个贴合学生生活的计划方向（如学习提升、兴趣发展）；②针对每个计划补充具体行动细节，让内容充实；③使用恰当衔接词串联内容，控制词数，确保语言准确流畅，符合九年级英语水平。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 明确两个核心计划：学习提升与兴趣发展；2. 围绕学习提升，描述具体行动（认真记笔记、每日复习、与同学讨论问题）；3. 围绕兴趣发展，结合自身对太空的兴趣，写具体安排（读太空书籍、制作火箭模型）；4. 用衔接词（如To start with）连接内容，控制词数，完成短文。
【答案】
Hi, everyone! I'm glad to share my plan with you.
To start with, I want to be a smart learner. I plan to take notes carefully in class and review what I've learnt every day. I'll also discuss problems with my classmates to get better at learning. As I look ahead to the future, I hope to build it with creativity. I am all interested in space, so I will read more books about space and even make small model rockets. I believe these activities will help me grow into the better version of myself.
Dream big, plan well, smile often, and good things will happen. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达；计划类话题写作；常用句型运用
【点评】
本题主题贴近学生生活，既考查英语语言表达能力，又引导学生树立自我规划意识，符合初中英语教学要求，题目设置合理。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为九年级英语书面表达题，要求围绕“New Year, New Me”主题分享寒假计划，需包含至少两方面内容，词数80左右，开头已给出。解题思路：①先确定两个贴合学生生活的计划方向（如学习提升、兴趣发展）；②针对每个计划补充具体行动细节，让内容充实；③使用恰当衔接词串联内容，控制词数，确保语言准确流畅，符合九年级英语水平。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 明确两个核心计划：学习提升与兴趣发展；2. 围绕学习提升，描述具体行动（认真记笔记、每日复习、与同学讨论问题）；3. 围绕兴趣发展，结合自身对太空的兴趣，写具体安排（读太空书籍、制作火箭模型）；4. 用衔接词（如To start with）连接内容，控制词数，完成短文。
【答案】
Hi, everyone! I'm glad to share my plan with you.
To start with, I want to be a smart learner. I plan to take notes carefully in class and review what I've learnt every day. I'll also discuss problems with my classmates to get better at learning. As I look ahead to the future, I hope to build it with creativity. I am all interested in space, so I will read more books about space and even make small model rockets. I believe these activities will help me grow into the better version of myself.
Dream big, plan well, smile often, and good things will happen. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达；计划类话题写作；常用句型运用
【点评】
本题主题贴近学生生活，既考查英语语言表达能力，又引导学生树立自我规划意识，符合初中英语教学要求，题目设置合理。
【难度系数】
0.5
