【写作主题】本单元的话题是“环保”,要求学生学会运用本单元所学知识写一篇关于如何保护环境、践行绿色生活的文章。
【范文赏析】
We are facing many environmental problems now. The environment is becoming worse and worse. There is a lot of rubbish in the river and a lot of dust in the air. So we have less clean water and the air is not as fresh as before. (描述身边的环境问题)
It’s our duty to protect the environment. First, we can go to school and have short trips by bike. Besides, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don’t need them. Last but not least, remember to go shopping with cloth bags rather than plastic bags. I believe the environment will be better and better if we can do these things. (介绍保护环境的措施)
Low-carbon life is good for everyone. Let’s take action now. (呼吁一起保护环境)
☑体裁:
☑佳词佳句积累:
1. 越来越差
3. 低碳生活
5. 保护环境是我们的责任。
6. 当我们不需要用水和电时,应该及时关闭水龙头和电灯,从而节省水电。
☑写作提升:使用所给短语并参考其在范文中的句子,根据中文提示翻译句子。
1. 我们应该过低碳生活。(low-carbon life)
2. 人们正在采取行动保护濒危动物。(take action)
【范文赏析】
We are facing many environmental problems now. The environment is becoming worse and worse. There is a lot of rubbish in the river and a lot of dust in the air. So we have less clean water and the air is not as fresh as before. (描述身边的环境问题)
It’s our duty to protect the environment. First, we can go to school and have short trips by bike. Besides, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don’t need them. Last but not least, remember to go shopping with cloth bags rather than plastic bags. I believe the environment will be better and better if we can do these things. (介绍保护环境的措施)
Low-carbon life is good for everyone. Let’s take action now. (呼吁一起保护环境)
☑体裁:
说明文
☑人称:第一人称
☑时态:一般现在时
☑佳词佳句积累:
1. 越来越差
worse and worse
2. 而不是 rather than
3. 低碳生活
low-carbon life
4. 采取行动 take action
5. 保护环境是我们的责任。
It's our duty to protect the environment.
6. 当我们不需要用水和电时,应该及时关闭水龙头和电灯,从而节省水电。
We should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don't need them.
☑写作提升:使用所给短语并参考其在范文中的句子,根据中文提示翻译句子。
1. 我们应该过低碳生活。(low-carbon life)
We should live a low-carbon life.
2. 人们正在采取行动保护濒危动物。(take action)
People are taking action to protect endangered animals.
答案
体裁:说明文
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
佳词佳句积累:
1. worse and worse
2. rather than
3. low-carbon life
4. take action
5. It's our duty to protect the environment.
6. We should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don't need them.
写作提升:
1. We should live a low-carbon life.
2. People are taking action to protect endangered animals.
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
佳词佳句积累:
1. worse and worse
2. rather than
3. low-carbon life
4. take action
5. It's our duty to protect the environment.
6. We should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don't need them.
写作提升:
1. We should live a low-carbon life.
2. People are taking action to protect endangered animals.
假设你的家乡正在开展“美丽家乡”建设行动,为发动家乡人民从点滴做起,保护环境,让家乡变得更美,请你以“Build a beautiful hometown”为题,写一篇倡议书。

注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】(以下
部分仅供参考,希望同学们可以多开动脑筋、发散思维)

【实战演练】
Build a beautiful hometown
Hello, everyone. As we all know,
【写作评价】(评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页)

注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】(以下
【实战演练】
Build a beautiful hometown
Hello, everyone. As we all know,
【写作评价】(评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页)
答案
a good environment is important to our lives. It's our duty to protect the environment and make our hometown more beautiful. Here're some things we can do.
To begin with, we should save energy. For example, we should never forget to turn off the lights before leaving the room. Second, we need to learn to reuse things more and throw away less. In addition, it's important to stop factories from polluting the rivers and lakes. Last but not least, we should plant more trees and flowers.
To sum up, let's take action now to make our hometown become more beautiful.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“Build a beautiful hometown”为题写一篇环保倡议书,标题和开头已给出,需补充正文内容。解题思路:首先承接开头点明环境对生活的重要性,接着列举具体的环保行动(如节约能源、重复利用物品、阻止污染、植树等),最后发出行动呼吁,注意词数80左右,语句连贯,避免真实信息。
【解析】
首先承接开头说明环境的重要性,再分点提出具体环保措施,最后总结呼吁行动,确保内容紧扣主题、结构清晰:
A good environment is important to our lives. It's our duty to protect the environment and make our hometown more beautiful. Here're some things we can do.
To begin with, we should save energy. For example, we should never forget to turn off the lights before leaving the room. Second, we need to learn to reuse things more and throw away less. In addition, it's important to stop factories from polluting the rivers and lakes. Last but not least, we should plant more trees and flowers.
To sum up, let's take action now to make our hometown become more beautiful.
【答案】
a good environment is important to our lives. It's our duty to protect the environment and make our hometown more beautiful. Here're some things we can do.
To begin with, we should save energy. For example, we should never forget to turn off the lights before leaving the room. Second, we need to learn to reuse things more and throw away less. In addition, it's important to stop factories from polluting the rivers and lakes. Last but not least, we should plant more trees and flowers.
To sum up, let's take action now to make our hometown become more beautiful.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、环境保护主题表达
【点评】
本文为环保倡议书,结构清晰,分点明确,紧扣主题,语言简洁连贯,符合初中英语写作要求,能有效传递环保理念,适合作为倡议书范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“Build a beautiful hometown”为题写一篇环保倡议书,标题和开头已给出,需补充正文内容。解题思路:首先承接开头点明环境对生活的重要性,接着列举具体的环保行动(如节约能源、重复利用物品、阻止污染、植树等),最后发出行动呼吁,注意词数80左右,语句连贯,避免真实信息。
【解析】
首先承接开头说明环境的重要性,再分点提出具体环保措施,最后总结呼吁行动,确保内容紧扣主题、结构清晰:
A good environment is important to our lives. It's our duty to protect the environment and make our hometown more beautiful. Here're some things we can do.
To begin with, we should save energy. For example, we should never forget to turn off the lights before leaving the room. Second, we need to learn to reuse things more and throw away less. In addition, it's important to stop factories from polluting the rivers and lakes. Last but not least, we should plant more trees and flowers.
To sum up, let's take action now to make our hometown become more beautiful.
【答案】
a good environment is important to our lives. It's our duty to protect the environment and make our hometown more beautiful. Here're some things we can do.
To begin with, we should save energy. For example, we should never forget to turn off the lights before leaving the room. Second, we need to learn to reuse things more and throw away less. In addition, it's important to stop factories from polluting the rivers and lakes. Last but not least, we should plant more trees and flowers.
To sum up, let's take action now to make our hometown become more beautiful.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、环境保护主题表达
【点评】
本文为环保倡议书,结构清晰,分点明确,紧扣主题,语言简洁连贯,符合初中英语写作要求,能有效传递环保理念,适合作为倡议书范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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