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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D8
假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，题目是“我心目中的英雄”。请根据以下要点提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——“共和国勋章”获得者黄旭华。
(1)黄旭华于1926年出生在广东省。
(2)19岁那年，他考入上海交通大学造船专业学习。
(3)从1958年起，为了工作他隐姓埋名，三十年未与父母见面。
(4)他默默无闻地为国家研制核潜艇。
(5)你认为……
要求:(1)词数:80—100。
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:上海交通大学 Shanghai Jiao Tong University 造船专业 shipbuilding
隐姓埋名 hide one’s identity 默默无闻 without fame 核潜艇 nuclear submarine
The Hero in My Heart
The hero in my heart is Huang Xuhua, a winner of the Medal of the Republic.
Thank you for listening!
假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，题目是“我心目中的英雄”。请根据以下要点提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——“共和国勋章”获得者黄旭华。
(1)黄旭华于1926年出生在广东省。
(2)19岁那年，他考入上海交通大学造船专业学习。
(3)从1958年起，为了工作他隐姓埋名，三十年未与父母见面。
(4)他默默无闻地为国家研制核潜艇。
(5)你认为……
要求:(1)词数:80—100。
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:上海交通大学 Shanghai Jiao Tong University 造船专业 shipbuilding
隐姓埋名 hide one’s identity 默默无闻 without fame 核潜艇 nuclear submarine
The Hero in My Heart
The hero in my heart is Huang Xuhua, a winner of the Medal of the Republic.
He was born in Guangdong Province in 1926. At the age of 19, he entered Shanghai Jiao Tong University to study shipbuilding.
From 1958 on, he hid his identity for his work and didn't meet his parents for 30 years.
Without fame, he worked hard to develop nuclear submarines for our country.
I think he is a great hero because he devoted his whole life to science and our country. His sacrifice and hard work inspire me to study harder and make a contribution to society.
Thank you for listening!
答案
主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
The Hero in My Heart
The hero in my heart is Huang Xuhua, a winner of the Medal of the Republic.
He was born in Guangdong Province in 1926. At the age of 19, he entered Shanghai Jiao Tong University to study shipbuilding. From 1958 on, he hid his identity for his work and didn't meet his parents for 30 years. Without fame, he worked hard to develop nuclear submarines for our country.
I think he is a great hero because he devoted his whole life to science and our country. His sacrifice and hard work inspire me to study harder and make a contribution to society.
Thank you for listening!
＞ 进阶版范文
The Hero in My Heart
The hero in my heart is Huang Xuhua, a winner of the Medal of the Republic.
Born in Guangdong Province in 1926, he was admitted to Shanghai Jiao Tong University to major in shipbuilding at the age of 19. He sacrificed a lot while he was working for our country. For example, from 1958 on, he hid his identity for his work and didn't reunite with his parents for 30 years. Never once did he complain; instead, he dedicated his life to the development of China's nuclear submarines, seeking no fame or reward.
In my opinion, he is a truly inspiring hero who devoted his whole life to science and our country. His selfless sacrifice and persistent efforts inspire me to study harder, so I can make my own contribution to society in the future.
Thank you for listening!
＞ 基础版范文
The Hero in My Heart
The hero in my heart is Huang Xuhua, a winner of the Medal of the Republic.
He was born in Guangdong Province in 1926. At the age of 19, he entered Shanghai Jiao Tong University to study shipbuilding. From 1958 on, he hid his identity for his work and didn't meet his parents for 30 years. Without fame, he worked hard to develop nuclear submarines for our country.
I think he is a great hero because he devoted his whole life to science and our country. His sacrifice and hard work inspire me to study harder and make a contribution to society.
Thank you for listening!
＞ 进阶版范文
The Hero in My Heart
The hero in my heart is Huang Xuhua, a winner of the Medal of the Republic.
Born in Guangdong Province in 1926, he was admitted to Shanghai Jiao Tong University to major in shipbuilding at the age of 19. He sacrificed a lot while he was working for our country. For example, from 1958 on, he hid his identity for his work and didn't reunite with his parents for 30 years. Never once did he complain; instead, he dedicated his life to the development of China's nuclear submarines, seeking no fame or reward.
In my opinion, he is a truly inspiring hero who devoted his whole life to science and our country. His selfless sacrifice and persistent efforts inspire me to study harder, so I can make my own contribution to society in the future.
Thank you for listening!
