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76. 假设你是李华,要写一封自荐信去参加校英语俱乐部的“Teenager Star(青少年之星)”评选活动。请你挑选一个角度说明自己的特质,并分享有关经历。
要求:
(1) 自荐稿须包含所选品质的相关信息,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3) 词数80左右(自荐稿的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear teachers,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to recommend myself for the Teenager Star.
Yours,
Li Hua
要求:
(1) 自荐稿须包含所选品质的相关信息,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3) 词数80左右(自荐稿的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear teachers,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to recommend myself for the Teenager Star.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
76. Possible version 1: Responsible
Dear teachers,
I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to recommend myself for the Teenager Star. I choose the quality "responsible".
Being responsible means caring for others, our class and the earth. It is the key to growing up well. I always finish my class duties carefully and keep our classroom clean and tidy. At home, I help my parents with housework, recycle waste and save energy to protect the environment. At school, I often help my classmates with study and small problems. I try my best to keep promises and take things seriously.
I strongly believe a responsible person can make our world better.
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2: Wise with money
Dear teachers,
I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to recommend myself for the Teenager Star. I choose the quality "wise with money".
I believe money is important in our daily life, but it isn't everything. Being wise with money helps me become more independent and teaches me to respect hard work. I always make a clear plan for my pocket money and lucky money. I save most of them for future use and spend the rest on useful books, school things and helpful courses. I never waste money on expensive snacks or unnecessary toys. I also share my ideas with my friends to help them manage money well.
I hope I can set a good example and get your support.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear teachers,
I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to recommend myself for the Teenager Star. I choose the quality "responsible".
Being responsible means caring for others, our class and the earth. It is the key to growing up well. I always finish my class duties carefully and keep our classroom clean and tidy. At home, I help my parents with housework, recycle waste and save energy to protect the environment. At school, I often help my classmates with study and small problems. I try my best to keep promises and take things seriously.
I strongly believe a responsible person can make our world better.
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2: Wise with money
Dear teachers,
I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to recommend myself for the Teenager Star. I choose the quality "wise with money".
I believe money is important in our daily life, but it isn't everything. Being wise with money helps me become more independent and teaches me to respect hard work. I always make a clear plan for my pocket money and lucky money. I save most of them for future use and spend the rest on useful books, school things and helpful courses. I never waste money on expensive snacks or unnecessary toys. I also share my ideas with my friends to help them manage money well.
I hope I can set a good example and get your support.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：需以李华的身份写自荐信参加“Teenager Star”评选，要从表格中选一个品质，结合相关经历，适当发挥，词数80左右，不得出现真实信息。解题思路：1. 先确定要选择的品质（如“Responsible”或“Wise with money”）；2. 解释该品质的意义；3. 结合表格中的经历，再适当补充细节；4. 最后表达自荐意愿，确保符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 确定所选品质，这里以“Responsible”为例；2. 开篇说明选择该品质，解释负责任的含义（关心他人、班级和地球，是成长的关键）；3. 结合经历：认真完成班级值日保持教室整洁，在家帮父母做家务、回收废物节约能源，在学校帮助同学解决学习和小问题，尽力信守承诺、认真对待事情；4. 结尾表达相信负责任的人能让世界更好，完成自荐。
【答案】
Possible version 1: Responsible
Dear teachers,
I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to recommend myself for the Teenager Star. I choose the quality "responsible".
Being responsible means caring for others, our class and the earth. It is the key to growing up well. I always finish my class duties carefully and keep our classroom clean and tidy. At home, I help my parents with housework, recycle waste and save energy to protect the environment. At school, I often help my classmates with study and small problems. I try my best to keep promises and take things seriously.
I strongly believe a responsible person can make our world better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；品质描述；书信格式
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求结合给定素材完成自荐信，内容紧扣所选品质，语言连贯，符合字数要求，能有效考查学生的语言组织和应用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求：需以李华的身份写自荐信参加“Teenager Star”评选，要从表格中选一个品质，结合相关经历，适当发挥，词数80左右，不得出现真实信息。解题思路：1. 先确定要选择的品质（如“Responsible”或“Wise with money”）；2. 解释该品质的意义；3. 结合表格中的经历，再适当补充细节；4. 最后表达自荐意愿，确保符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 确定所选品质，这里以“Responsible”为例；2. 开篇说明选择该品质，解释负责任的含义（关心他人、班级和地球，是成长的关键）；3. 结合经历：认真完成班级值日保持教室整洁，在家帮父母做家务、回收废物节约能源，在学校帮助同学解决学习和小问题，尽力信守承诺、认真对待事情；4. 结尾表达相信负责任的人能让世界更好，完成自荐。
【答案】
Possible version 1: Responsible
Dear teachers,
I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to recommend myself for the Teenager Star. I choose the quality "responsible".
Being responsible means caring for others, our class and the earth. It is the key to growing up well. I always finish my class duties carefully and keep our classroom clean and tidy. At home, I help my parents with housework, recycle waste and save energy to protect the environment. At school, I often help my classmates with study and small problems. I try my best to keep promises and take things seriously.
I strongly believe a responsible person can make our world better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；品质描述；书信格式
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求结合给定素材完成自荐信，内容紧扣所选品质，语言连贯，符合字数要求，能有效考查学生的语言组织和应用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
