Ⅲ. Writing(作文)
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
假如你是李华,计划在“五一”期间进行一次以“体验中国文化”为主题的旅行。请根据下图提示,用英语写一份文化旅游计划,并在英语课上与同学们分享。

注意:(1)计划需包含至少三个活动,以上活动仅供参考;
(2)文章不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(3)照抄语篇不得分。
Hi,class. I'm glad to share my plan about May Day cultural tour with you.
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Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
假如你是李华,计划在“五一”期间进行一次以“体验中国文化”为主题的旅行。请根据下图提示,用英语写一份文化旅游计划,并在英语课上与同学们分享。
注意:(1)计划需包含至少三个活动,以上活动仅供参考;
(2)文章不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(3)照抄语篇不得分。
Hi,class. I'm glad to share my plan about May Day cultural tour with you.
During the holiday, I'm going to visit Hangzhou with my parents by high-speed train. It's a city known for its history and beautiful scenery.
I plan to visit West Lake and Lingyin Temple, try local food like Dongpo Pork, and watch a traditional show about Chinese stories. I also want to go to a museum to learn more about tea culture.
I choose these activities because I want to learn about Chinese history and enjoy the beauty of our culture. I believe this trip will be unforgettable and meaningful.
(60)
答案
One possible version:
Hi, class. I'm glad to share my plan about May Day cultural tour with you.
During the holiday, I'm going to visit Hangzhou with my parents by high-speed train. It's a city known for its history and beautiful scenery.
I plan to visit West Lake and Lingyin Temple, try local food like Dongpo Pork, and watch a traditional show about Chinese stories. I also want to go to a museum to learn more about tea culture.
I choose these activities because I want to learn about Chinese history and enjoy the beauty of our culture. I believe this trip will be unforgettable and meaningful.
Hi, class. I'm glad to share my plan about May Day cultural tour with you.
During the holiday, I'm going to visit Hangzhou with my parents by high-speed train. It's a city known for its history and beautiful scenery.
I plan to visit West Lake and Lingyin Temple, try local food like Dongpo Pork, and watch a traditional show about Chinese stories. I also want to go to a museum to learn more about tea culture.
I choose these activities because I want to learn about Chinese history and enjoy the beauty of our culture. I believe this trip will be unforgettable and meaningful.
解析
【分析】本题要求以李华的身份写五一文化旅游计划,需结合图示的三个核心维度(目的地与交通、文化活动、活动原因),同时满足至少三个活动、不少于60词、无真实信息的要求。解题思路为:先以给定句子引出分享主题,接着说明目的地和交通方式,再列举具体的文化相关活动,然后阐述选择这些活动的原因,最后总结旅行意义,确保内容紧扣“体验中国文化”的主题,语言准确流畅。
【解析】写作时,首先使用题目给定的开头句引出计划;然后确定符合文化主题的目的地(如杭州)及合理的交通方式(高铁);再安排至少三个文化活动,如参观历史景点、品尝当地特色美食、观看传统表演等;接着说明活动原因是学习中国历史、感受文化魅力;最后总结旅行的意义,确保字数达标,无真实姓名、校名等信息。
【答案】Hi, class. I'm glad to share my plan about May Day cultural tour with you.
During the holiday, I'm going to visit Hangzhou with my parents by high-speed train. It's a city known for its history and beautiful scenery.
I plan to visit West Lake and Lingyin Temple, try local food like Dongpo Pork, and watch a traditional show about Chinese stories. I also want to go to a museum to learn more about tea culture.
I choose these activities because I want to learn about Chinese history and enjoy the beauty of our culture. I believe this trip will be unforgettable and meaningful.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般将来时、文化话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣“五一文化旅游”主题,结构清晰完整,涵盖了目的地、交通、活动、原因等所有要求内容,活动具体贴合文化主题,语言流畅自然,符合初中英语写作的规范要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时,首先使用题目给定的开头句引出计划;然后确定符合文化主题的目的地(如杭州)及合理的交通方式(高铁);再安排至少三个文化活动,如参观历史景点、品尝当地特色美食、观看传统表演等;接着说明活动原因是学习中国历史、感受文化魅力;最后总结旅行的意义,确保字数达标,无真实姓名、校名等信息。
【答案】Hi, class. I'm glad to share my plan about May Day cultural tour with you.
During the holiday, I'm going to visit Hangzhou with my parents by high-speed train. It's a city known for its history and beautiful scenery.
I plan to visit West Lake and Lingyin Temple, try local food like Dongpo Pork, and watch a traditional show about Chinese stories. I also want to go to a museum to learn more about tea culture.
I choose these activities because I want to learn about Chinese history and enjoy the beauty of our culture. I believe this trip will be unforgettable and meaningful.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般将来时、文化话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣“五一文化旅游”主题,结构清晰完整,涵盖了目的地、交通、活动、原因等所有要求内容,活动具体贴合文化主题,语言流畅自然,符合初中英语写作的规范要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
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