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【写作导引】
本单元以“地球之外”为话题，属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“天体与宇宙”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①谈论太空成就；②描绘你的太空梦；③介绍太空探索的意义与原因。
【写作任务】
太空是浩瀚的、神秘的。人类一直在探索宇宙，请根据你所学的太空知识，描述一下你心目中的宇宙。再结合你自己的感想，向同学们说
说你未来的打算。
参考词汇：universe, galaxy, solar system, do research about, space station, astronaut
要求：1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名；2. 语句连贯，词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everybody! It’s my turn to tell you something about space.
本单元以“地球之外”为话题，属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“天体与宇宙”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①谈论太空成就；②描绘你的太空梦；③介绍太空探索的意义与原因。
【写作任务】
太空是浩瀚的、神秘的。人类一直在探索宇宙，请根据你所学的太空知识，描述一下你心目中的宇宙。再结合你自己的感想，向同学们说
说你未来的打算。
参考词汇：universe, galaxy, solar system, do research about, space station, astronaut
要求：1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名；2. 语句连贯，词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everybody! It’s my turn to tell you something about space.
As you know, the universe is very large. There are many galaxies in the universe. For example, the galaxy contains billions of stars. The sun is one of them in the solar system. The earth goes round the sun and the moon goes round the earth.
So far, scientists have done a lot of research about space. Especially, our astronauts have been to space many times. A great space station has been built. Now, they are working in our own space station. I am very proud of our country.
So I will study hard. I will be an astronaut in the future. What about you?
Thanks.
So far, scientists have done a lot of research about space. Especially, our astronauts have been to space many times. A great space station has been built. Now, they are working in our own space station. I am very proud of our country.
So I will study hard. I will be an astronaut in the future. What about you?
Thanks.
答案
【精彩范文】
Hello, everybody! It's my turn to tell you something about space.⁴ As you know, the universe is very large. There are many galaxies in the universe. For example, the galaxy contains billions of¹ stars. The sun is one of them in the solar system. The earth goes round the sun and the moon goes round the earth.
So far², scientists have done a lot of research about space. Especially, our astronauts have been to space many times. A great space station has been built. Now, they are working in our own space station. I am very proud of³ our country.
So I will study hard. I will be an astronaut in the future. What about you?
Thanks.
亮点词块
① billions of 数十亿的
② so far 迄今为止
③ be proud of 感到骄傲
高分句子
④ It's my turn to tell you something about space.（It's one's turn to do sth. 轮到某人做某事）
Hello, everybody! It's my turn to tell you something about space.⁴ As you know, the universe is very large. There are many galaxies in the universe. For example, the galaxy contains billions of¹ stars. The sun is one of them in the solar system. The earth goes round the sun and the moon goes round the earth.
So far², scientists have done a lot of research about space. Especially, our astronauts have been to space many times. A great space station has been built. Now, they are working in our own space station. I am very proud of³ our country.
So I will study hard. I will be an astronaut in the future. What about you?
Thanks.
亮点词块
① billions of 数十亿的
② so far 迄今为止
③ be proud of 感到骄傲
高分句子
④ It's my turn to tell you something about space.（It's one's turn to do sth. 轮到某人做某事）
解析
【分析】首先承接给定开头，第一步运用参考词汇描述宇宙的构成（如universe、galaxy、solar system），说明宇宙的浩瀚及天体运行情况；第二步结合太空知识，介绍人类太空探索的成果（如科学家的研究、宇航员进入太空、空间站的建成）；第三步表达个人感想，最后说明自己未来的打算，确保语句连贯，词数不少于80，不出现真实信息。
【解析】按照写作思路，先描述宇宙的基本情况：宇宙很大，包含许多星系，每个星系有数十亿恒星，太阳系是其中之一，地球绕太阳转；再介绍人类太空探索的成就：科学家已做大量太空研究，宇航员多次进入太空，建成空间站；接着表达对国家航天成就的骄傲，最后说明自己要努力学习，未来成为宇航员，符合写作要求。
【答案】Hello, everybody! It's my turn to tell you something about space. As you know, the universe is very large. There are many galaxies in the universe. For example, the galaxy contains billions of stars. The sun is one of them in the solar system. The earth goes round the sun and the moon goes round the earth. So far, scientists have done a lot of research about space. Especially, our astronauts have been to space many times. A great space station has been built. Now, they are working in our own space station. I am very proud of our country. So I will study hard. I will be an astronaut in the future. What about you? Thanks.
【知识点】英语话题写作、太空主题英语表达
【点评】本文紧扣“地球之外”话题，运用了指定参考词汇，结构清晰，先介绍宇宙相关知识，再阐述人类太空探索成果，最后表达个人感想与未来规划，语句连贯，词数达标，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照写作思路，先描述宇宙的基本情况：宇宙很大，包含许多星系，每个星系有数十亿恒星，太阳系是其中之一，地球绕太阳转；再介绍人类太空探索的成就：科学家已做大量太空研究，宇航员多次进入太空，建成空间站；接着表达对国家航天成就的骄傲，最后说明自己要努力学习，未来成为宇航员，符合写作要求。
【答案】Hello, everybody! It's my turn to tell you something about space. As you know, the universe is very large. There are many galaxies in the universe. For example, the galaxy contains billions of stars. The sun is one of them in the solar system. The earth goes round the sun and the moon goes round the earth. So far, scientists have done a lot of research about space. Especially, our astronauts have been to space many times. A great space station has been built. Now, they are working in our own space station. I am very proud of our country. So I will study hard. I will be an astronaut in the future. What about you? Thanks.
【知识点】英语话题写作、太空主题英语表达
【点评】本文紧扣“地球之外”话题，运用了指定参考词汇，结构清晰，先介绍宇宙相关知识，再阐述人类太空探索成果，最后表达个人感想与未来规划，语句连贯，词数达标，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
跟踪演练
假如你是李辉，你校在4月24日举办了以“校园航天日”为主题的活动来激发你们对太空的兴趣。请你结合提示信息，给你的英国笔友David写一封邮件，分享此次活动的过程和感受。
要求：1. 邮件须包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 词数不少于80（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear David,
How are you doing? I’m writing to share an unforgettable activity with you.
Yours,
Li Hui
假如你是李辉，你校在4月24日举办了以“校园航天日”为主题的活动来激发你们对太空的兴趣。请你结合提示信息，给你的英国笔友David写一封邮件，分享此次活动的过程和感受。
要求：1. 邮件须包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 词数不少于80（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear David,
How are you doing? I’m writing to share an unforgettable activity with you.
In order to make us show an interest in space, our school held an activity named School Space Day in the school hall on April 24th.
First, we attended a lecture given by a well-known space expert at 10 a.m. During the lecture, we had a deep understanding of the secrets of space. Then, we visited a space exhibition at 2 p.m. There, we saw some spacesuits at close quarters and learned about the history of human space exploration by watching some videos. One of my favourite parts was taking part in the water rocket launching contest at 4 p.m. What made it special was that it enabled us to express our creativity.
First, we attended a lecture given by a well-known space expert at 10 a.m. During the lecture, we had a deep understanding of the secrets of space. Then, we visited a space exhibition at 2 p.m. There, we saw some spacesuits at close quarters and learned about the history of human space exploration by watching some videos. One of my favourite parts was taking part in the water rocket launching contest at 4 p.m. What made it special was that it enabled us to express our creativity.
The activity not only taught us about the mysteries of space and broadened our horizons, but also brought science to life. Looking forward to hearing about your recent interesting activities as well.
Yours,
Li Hui
答案
写作提优练
范文：
Dear David,
How are you doing? I'm writing to share an unforgettable activity with you. In order to make us show an interest in space, our school held an activity named School Space Day in the school hall on April 24th.
First, we attended a lecture given by a well-known space expert at 10 a.m. During the lecture, we had a deep understanding of the secrets of space. Then, we visited a space exhibition at 2 p.m. There, we saw some spacesuits at close quarters and learned about the history of human space exploration by watching some videos. One of my favourite parts was taking part in the water rocket launching contest at 4 p.m. What made it special was that it enabled us to express our creativity.
The activity not only taught us about the mysteries of space and broadened our horizons, but also brought science to life. Looking forward to hearing about your recent interesting activities as well.
Yours,
Li Hui
范文：
Dear David,
How are you doing? I'm writing to share an unforgettable activity with you. In order to make us show an interest in space, our school held an activity named School Space Day in the school hall on April 24th.
First, we attended a lecture given by a well-known space expert at 10 a.m. During the lecture, we had a deep understanding of the secrets of space. Then, we visited a space exhibition at 2 p.m. There, we saw some spacesuits at close quarters and learned about the history of human space exploration by watching some videos. One of my favourite parts was taking part in the water rocket launching contest at 4 p.m. What made it special was that it enabled us to express our creativity.
The activity not only taught us about the mysteries of space and broadened our horizons, but also brought science to life. Looking forward to hearing about your recent interesting activities as well.
Yours,
Li Hui
解析
【分析】这是一篇给英国笔友的邮件写作题，需包含所有提示要点：活动日期（4月24日）、地点（学校礼堂）、三项活动（讲座、航天展、水火箭发射比赛）及个人感受。解题思路：先承接已给开头，点明活动的基本信息（主题、时间、地点）；再按顺序描述活动过程，补充合理细节让内容连贯；最后总结活动意义并呼应开头，注意邮件的语气和格式，确保词数达标。
【解析】1. 开头部分：承接已给内容，说明学校举办校园航天日活动的目的，点明活动的时间（April 24th）和地点（the school hall）；2. 活动描述：按时间顺序依次写参加讲座（介绍讲座的内容和收获）、参观航天展（补充航天展的见闻）、参加水火箭发射比赛（说明比赛的特别之处）；3. 结尾部分：总结活动的意义，表达期待对方分享有趣活动，符合邮件的语气要求。
【答案】Dear David,
How are you doing? I'm writing to share an unforgettable activity with you. In order to make us show an interest in space, our school held an activity named School Space Day in the school hall on April 24th.
First, we attended a lecture given by a well-known space expert at 10 a.m. During the lecture, we had a deep understanding of the secrets of space. Then, we visited a space exhibition at 2 p.m. There, we saw some spacesuits at close quarters and learned about the history of human space exploration by watching some videos. One of my favourite parts was taking part in the water rocket launching contest at 4 p.m. What made it special was that it enabled us to express our creativity.
The activity not only taught us about the mysteries of space and broadened our horizons, but also brought science to life. Looking forward to hearing about your recent interesting activities as well.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】英语书信写作、要点整合、话题表达
【点评】范文完整覆盖所有提示要点，按时间顺序叙述活动，逻辑清晰；补充了合理细节（如讲座的专家、航天展的内容、比赛的意义），语言流畅自然，符合邮件亲切的语气，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开头部分：承接已给内容，说明学校举办校园航天日活动的目的，点明活动的时间（April 24th）和地点（the school hall）；2. 活动描述：按时间顺序依次写参加讲座（介绍讲座的内容和收获）、参观航天展（补充航天展的见闻）、参加水火箭发射比赛（说明比赛的特别之处）；3. 结尾部分：总结活动的意义，表达期待对方分享有趣活动，符合邮件的语气要求。
【答案】Dear David,
How are you doing? I'm writing to share an unforgettable activity with you. In order to make us show an interest in space, our school held an activity named School Space Day in the school hall on April 24th.
First, we attended a lecture given by a well-known space expert at 10 a.m. During the lecture, we had a deep understanding of the secrets of space. Then, we visited a space exhibition at 2 p.m. There, we saw some spacesuits at close quarters and learned about the history of human space exploration by watching some videos. One of my favourite parts was taking part in the water rocket launching contest at 4 p.m. What made it special was that it enabled us to express our creativity.
The activity not only taught us about the mysteries of space and broadened our horizons, but also brought science to life. Looking forward to hearing about your recent interesting activities as well.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】英语书信写作、要点整合、话题表达
【点评】范文完整覆盖所有提示要点，按时间顺序叙述活动，逻辑清晰；补充了合理细节（如讲座的专家、航天展的内容、比赛的意义），语言流畅自然，符合邮件亲切的语气，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.5
