Ⅷ. 书面表达。(共1小题,计20分)
64. 动物是人类的朋友。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My Favourite Animal”的征文比赛,请结合下列提示,写一篇短文参赛。
(1)What does it look like?
(2)What's its lifestyle?
(3)Why do you love it?
注意事项:
(1)词数:80词左右;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(3)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。

64. 动物是人类的朋友。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My Favourite Animal”的征文比赛,请结合下列提示,写一篇短文参赛。
(1)What does it look like?
(2)What's its lifestyle?
(3)Why do you love it?
注意事项:
(1)词数:80词左右;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(3)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
答案
64.【范文】
My Favourite Animal
Hello, guys. I'm Liu Tao from Class 1, Grade 7. I'd like to introduce my favourite animal. My favourite animal is a dog. It has a lovely face with big eyes and a small nose. Its fur is soft and fluffy, and it's usually brown in colour. My dog is very friendly and loves to play with me. It's also very smart and can do many tricks like fetching the ball or sitting on command. I love it because it's not only my pet but also my best friend. It brings me joy and keeps me company. I take care of it and play with it every day. I hope everyone can love and protect animals.
My Favourite Animal
Hello, guys. I'm Liu Tao from Class 1, Grade 7. I'd like to introduce my favourite animal. My favourite animal is a dog. It has a lovely face with big eyes and a small nose. Its fur is soft and fluffy, and it's usually brown in colour. My dog is very friendly and loves to play with me. It's also very smart and can do many tricks like fetching the ball or sitting on command. I love it because it's not only my pet but also my best friend. It brings me joy and keeps me company. I take care of it and play with it every day. I hope everyone can love and protect animals.
解析
【分析】
本题是七年级英语书面表达题,主题为“My Favourite Animal”,需围绕三个提示要点(外形、生活/特点、喜爱原因)完成短文,要求词数80左右,内容连贯,不得出现真实信息。解题思路:先确定易描述且贴近生活的动物(如狗),再按提示依次组织内容:先介绍动物外形,再说明其特点/生活习性,最后阐述喜爱的原因,适当补充细节使文章流畅,符合写作要求。
【解析】
1. 确定写作对象:选择常见的狗作为描述对象,便于展开内容;
2. 紧扣要点写作:①外形:描述“有可爱的脸、大眼睛、小鼻子,毛发柔软蓬松,棕色”;②特点:说明狗友好、聪明,会玩球、听指令等;③喜爱原因:指出狗是朋友,带来快乐和陪伴;
3. 衔接语句,控制词数,确保无真实信息,使短文连贯通顺。
【答案】
My Favourite Animal
Hello, guys. I'm Liu Tao from Class 1, Grade 7. I'd like to introduce my favourite animal. My favourite animal is a dog. It has a lovely face with big eyes and a small nose. Its fur is soft and fluffy, and it's usually brown in colour. My dog is very friendly and loves to play with me. It's also very smart and can do many tricks like fetching the ball or sitting on command. I love it because it's not only my pet but also my best friend. It brings me joy and keeps me company. I take care of it and play with it every day. I hope everyone can love and protect animals.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、动物话题描述、句子连贯表达
【点评】
本题为初中英语基础话题写作,考查学生围绕主题组织要点、用简单语句描述事物的能力,贴近学生生活,易于上手,符合七年级英语写作的能力要求,需注意要点齐全和语句通顺。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是七年级英语书面表达题,主题为“My Favourite Animal”,需围绕三个提示要点(外形、生活/特点、喜爱原因)完成短文,要求词数80左右,内容连贯,不得出现真实信息。解题思路:先确定易描述且贴近生活的动物(如狗),再按提示依次组织内容:先介绍动物外形,再说明其特点/生活习性,最后阐述喜爱的原因,适当补充细节使文章流畅,符合写作要求。
【解析】
1. 确定写作对象:选择常见的狗作为描述对象,便于展开内容;
2. 紧扣要点写作:①外形:描述“有可爱的脸、大眼睛、小鼻子,毛发柔软蓬松,棕色”;②特点:说明狗友好、聪明,会玩球、听指令等;③喜爱原因:指出狗是朋友,带来快乐和陪伴;
3. 衔接语句,控制词数,确保无真实信息,使短文连贯通顺。
【答案】
My Favourite Animal
Hello, guys. I'm Liu Tao from Class 1, Grade 7. I'd like to introduce my favourite animal. My favourite animal is a dog. It has a lovely face with big eyes and a small nose. Its fur is soft and fluffy, and it's usually brown in colour. My dog is very friendly and loves to play with me. It's also very smart and can do many tricks like fetching the ball or sitting on command. I love it because it's not only my pet but also my best friend. It brings me joy and keeps me company. I take care of it and play with it every day. I hope everyone can love and protect animals.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、动物话题描述、句子连贯表达
【点评】
本题为初中英语基础话题写作,考查学生围绕主题组织要点、用简单语句描述事物的能力,贴近学生生活,易于上手,符合七年级英语写作的能力要求,需注意要点齐全和语句通顺。
【难度系数】
0.6
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