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第四部分:书面表达(共一节,满分20分)
76. 为了帮助英国姐妹学校的学生更好地了解杭州,你校组织学生参加英文短视频制作活动,主题为"用镜头说杭州景点"。假如你是张华,请仔细阅读下表中的信息,选择其中一个地点完成一则脚本(video script),为后期的短视频制作做准备。
注意:
(1)脚本需包含所选地点对应的全部信息,可以适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80~100左右;脚本的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Nihao! It's Zhang Hua from Hangzhou! Right now I'm visiting
76. 为了帮助英国姐妹学校的学生更好地了解杭州,你校组织学生参加英文短视频制作活动,主题为"用镜头说杭州景点"。假如你是张华,请仔细阅读下表中的信息,选择其中一个地点完成一则脚本(video script),为后期的短视频制作做准备。
注意:
(1)脚本需包含所选地点对应的全部信息,可以适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80~100左右;脚本的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Nihao! It's Zhang Hua from Hangzhou! Right now I'm visiting
答案
76. One possible version:
Nihao! It's Zhang Hua from Hangzhou! Right now I'm visiting the West Lake.
Today, the weather is sunny and perfect for outdoor fun. Look! There are lots of people here. Some people are boating on the calm water, some are jogging along the lake, and others are drinking coffee in coffee shops. The fresh air and lovely sight make me feel relaxed. But remember, when visiting here, do not play with the water or litter around. We must stay safe and keep the lake clean!
The West Lake is like a painting. Come to see it for yourself one day!
Nihao! It's Zhang Hua from Hangzhou! Right now I'm visiting the West Lake.
Today, the weather is sunny and perfect for outdoor fun. Look! There are lots of people here. Some people are boating on the calm water, some are jogging along the lake, and others are drinking coffee in coffee shops. The fresh air and lovely sight make me feel relaxed. But remember, when visiting here, do not play with the water or litter around. We must stay safe and keep the lake clean!
The West Lake is like a painting. Come to see it for yourself one day!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达（短视频脚本写作），要求从表格中选一个杭州景点，将地点、天气、活动、感受、规则等信息全部融入，结合给定开头适当发挥，词数控制在80-100左右。解题思路：1. 确定所选地点（参考答案选西湖）；2. 对应表格信息：天气sunny、活动boating/jogging、感受放松、规则不玩水；3. 补充合理细节（如湖边咖啡店），用现在进行时描述当下场景，确保信息完整、语言流畅，符合脚本要求。
【解析】
本题需完成英文短视频脚本，步骤如下：
1. 承接开头，明确所选地点为the West Lake；
2. 描述天气：Today, the weather is sunny and perfect for outdoor fun；
3. 描述活动：结合表格的boating、jogging，补充合理场景，用现在进行时展开：Some people are boating on the calm water, some are jogging along the lake, and others are drinking coffee in coffee shops；
4. 表达感受：The fresh air and lovely sight make me feel relaxed；
5. 说明规则：对应表格的not play with water，补充保持清洁的内容：But remember, when visiting here, do not play with the water or litter around. We must stay safe and keep the lake clean；
6. 结尾邀请呼应主题：The West Lake is like a painting. Come to see it for yourself one day!
确保包含所有表格信息，语言流畅，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Nihao! It's Zhang Hua from Hangzhou! Right now I'm visiting the West Lake.
Today, the weather is sunny and perfect for outdoor fun. Look! There are lots of people here. Some people are boating on the calm water, some are jogging along the lake, and others are drinking coffee in coffee shops. The fresh air and lovely sight make me feel relaxed. But remember, when visiting here, do not play with the water or litter around. We must stay safe and keep the lake clean!
The West Lake is like a painting. Come to see it for yourself one day!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、场景描述
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整融入表格中西湖的全部信息，适当补充细节丰富内容；语言流畅，时态运用准确，符合脚本口语化特点，词数达标，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达（短视频脚本写作），要求从表格中选一个杭州景点，将地点、天气、活动、感受、规则等信息全部融入，结合给定开头适当发挥，词数控制在80-100左右。解题思路：1. 确定所选地点（参考答案选西湖）；2. 对应表格信息：天气sunny、活动boating/jogging、感受放松、规则不玩水；3. 补充合理细节（如湖边咖啡店），用现在进行时描述当下场景，确保信息完整、语言流畅，符合脚本要求。
【解析】
本题需完成英文短视频脚本，步骤如下：
1. 承接开头，明确所选地点为the West Lake；
2. 描述天气：Today, the weather is sunny and perfect for outdoor fun；
3. 描述活动：结合表格的boating、jogging，补充合理场景，用现在进行时展开：Some people are boating on the calm water, some are jogging along the lake, and others are drinking coffee in coffee shops；
4. 表达感受：The fresh air and lovely sight make me feel relaxed；
5. 说明规则：对应表格的not play with water，补充保持清洁的内容：But remember, when visiting here, do not play with the water or litter around. We must stay safe and keep the lake clean；
6. 结尾邀请呼应主题：The West Lake is like a painting. Come to see it for yourself one day!
确保包含所有表格信息，语言流畅，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Nihao! It's Zhang Hua from Hangzhou! Right now I'm visiting the West Lake.
Today, the weather is sunny and perfect for outdoor fun. Look! There are lots of people here. Some people are boating on the calm water, some are jogging along the lake, and others are drinking coffee in coffee shops. The fresh air and lovely sight make me feel relaxed. But remember, when visiting here, do not play with the water or litter around. We must stay safe and keep the lake clean!
The West Lake is like a painting. Come to see it for yourself one day!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、场景描述
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整融入表格中西湖的全部信息，适当补充细节丰富内容；语言流畅，时态运用准确，符合脚本口语化特点，词数达标，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
