八、书面表达。10分
海伦Helen生病了,请根据以下病历卡,写出Helen的病情,并结合自己的想法给出一些适当
的建议。
要求:1. 需包含所给信息,可适当发挥想象;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确,书写工整;
3. 不少于5句话。

范文：
Helen is a 12-year-old girl. She feels cold and has a headache. She has a cold. She should drink warm water and take some medicine. She shouldn't run or jump. She needs to rest well. She should see a doctor if she doesn't feel better.

【分析】
首先明确题目任务：根据病历卡内容，写出Helen的病情并给出适当建议，需包含给定信息、适当发挥、不少于5句话且语句通顺。解题思路：1. 先介绍Helen的基本信息（年龄）；2. 描述病历卡中的症状；3. 说明病因；4. 写出病历卡给出的建议；5. 补充合理的额外建议，确保符合句子数量要求，语法正确。
【解析】
写作时采用一般现在时组织内容：①开头介绍Helen的基本情况：“Helen is a 12-year-old girl.”；②描述症状：“She feels cold and has a headache.”；③说明病因：“She has a cold.”；④列出病历卡的建议：“She should drink warm water and take some medicine. She shouldn't run.”；⑤补充合理建议使内容完整，如休息、必要时看医生，最终形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】
Helen is a 12-year-old girl. She feels cold and has a headache. She has a cold. She should drink warm water and take some medicine. She shouldn't run or jump. She needs to rest well. She should see a doctor if she doesn't feel better.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时、健康话题表达
【点评】
该范文完全符合题目要求，包含了病历卡的所有给定信息，补充了合理的健康建议，语句通顺、语法正确，句子数量达标，是一篇合格的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6