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76. 梯田(terraced fields)作为一种独特的耕作方式,在我国丘陵山区和干旱地区广泛存在,它不仅为人类提供了丰富的食物来源,还在生态环境保护方面发挥着重要作用。请你根据下表内容介绍梯田、其作用以及它如何帮助实现人与自然和谐相处。
要求:(1)须包含上表所有内容,可适当发挥;(2)文中不能出现个人的真实信息;(3)不少于80词。
要求:(1)须包含上表所有内容,可适当发挥;(2)文中不能出现个人的真实信息;(3)不少于80词。
答案
One possible version:
On mountains in Zhejiang, like Lishui and Wenzhou, there are special terraced fields. They look like "stairways to the sky" on hillsides and have a history of hundreds of years.
These fields work in a smart way. Small earth banks make flat platforms. When it rains, the banks stop water from running down. This waters crops and keeps soil from being washed away. Local people grow rice and vegetables for food and money here. The fields make the lives of the locals better. Terraced fields are considered our ancestors' wisdom and play an important role in improving the environment.
To respect nature, we need to protect these fields and farm in green ways. Only by being kind to nature can we live in harmony with nature forever.
On mountains in Zhejiang, like Lishui and Wenzhou, there are special terraced fields. They look like "stairways to the sky" on hillsides and have a history of hundreds of years.
These fields work in a smart way. Small earth banks make flat platforms. When it rains, the banks stop water from running down. This waters crops and keeps soil from being washed away. Local people grow rice and vegetables for food and money here. The fields make the lives of the locals better. Terraced fields are considered our ancestors' wisdom and play an important role in improving the environment.
To respect nature, we need to protect these fields and farm in green ways. Only by being kind to nature can we live in harmony with nature forever.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语写作题，要求根据给定表格的四个模块（梯田的介绍、功能、重要性、保护方法）完成短文，需覆盖所有表格内容，体现人与自然和谐的主题。解题思路：先梳理表格各部分核心要点：①介绍：外观像“天空的阶梯”、历史悠久；②功能：下雨时阻挡水流保护土壤、种植水稻和蔬菜；③重要性：改善环境、展现古代智慧；④保护：合理保护、绿色耕作。再按照“引入-功能-重要性-保护-升华”的结构组织语言，确保词数达标、无真实个人信息、语句通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头点明梯田的分布（如浙江山区），介绍其外观（像“stairways to the sky”）和悠久历史；2. 说明梯田功能：通过田埂阻挡雨水冲刷，保护土壤，种植水稻和蔬菜，改善当地人生活；3. 阐述梯田重要性：改善生态环境，体现古代劳动人民的智慧；4. 提出保护梯田的方法，最后升华主题，说明保护梯田是实现人与自然和谐的方式。
【答案】
One possible version:
On mountains in Zhejiang, like Lishui and Wenzhou, there are special terraced fields. They look like "stairways to the sky" on hillsides and have a history of hundreds of years.
These fields work in a smart way. Small earth banks make flat platforms. When it rains, the banks stop water from running down. This waters crops and keeps soil from being washed away. Local people grow rice and vegetables for food and money here. The fields make the lives of the locals better. Terraced fields are considered our ancestors' wisdom and play an important role in improving the environment.
To respect nature, we need to protect these fields and farm in green ways. Only by being kind to nature can we live in harmony with nature forever.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，信息整合写作，人与自然主题写作
【点评】
本题结合传统文化（梯田）与生态理念，考查学生的信息梳理、语言组织和书面表达能力，要求将表格信息转化为连贯短文，同时渗透环保意识，符合英语学科育人目标。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语写作题，要求根据给定表格的四个模块（梯田的介绍、功能、重要性、保护方法）完成短文，需覆盖所有表格内容，体现人与自然和谐的主题。解题思路：先梳理表格各部分核心要点：①介绍：外观像“天空的阶梯”、历史悠久；②功能：下雨时阻挡水流保护土壤、种植水稻和蔬菜；③重要性：改善环境、展现古代智慧；④保护：合理保护、绿色耕作。再按照“引入-功能-重要性-保护-升华”的结构组织语言，确保词数达标、无真实个人信息、语句通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头点明梯田的分布（如浙江山区），介绍其外观（像“stairways to the sky”）和悠久历史；2. 说明梯田功能：通过田埂阻挡雨水冲刷，保护土壤，种植水稻和蔬菜，改善当地人生活；3. 阐述梯田重要性：改善生态环境，体现古代劳动人民的智慧；4. 提出保护梯田的方法，最后升华主题，说明保护梯田是实现人与自然和谐的方式。
【答案】
One possible version:
On mountains in Zhejiang, like Lishui and Wenzhou, there are special terraced fields. They look like "stairways to the sky" on hillsides and have a history of hundreds of years.
These fields work in a smart way. Small earth banks make flat platforms. When it rains, the banks stop water from running down. This waters crops and keeps soil from being washed away. Local people grow rice and vegetables for food and money here. The fields make the lives of the locals better. Terraced fields are considered our ancestors' wisdom and play an important role in improving the environment.
To respect nature, we need to protect these fields and farm in green ways. Only by being kind to nature can we live in harmony with nature forever.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，信息整合写作，人与自然主题写作
【点评】
本题结合传统文化（梯田）与生态理念，考查学生的信息梳理、语言组织和书面表达能力，要求将表格信息转化为连贯短文，同时渗透环保意识，符合英语学科育人目标。
【难度系数】
0.5
