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良好的生活习惯对于青少年的健康成长至关重要。近日,第一中学校刊正在举办以“My healthy lifestyle”为题的英语征文活动。假如你是该校学生彼得,请你根据以下思维导图,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文投稿。
写作要求:
1. 短文需涵盖思维导图的所有要点,可适当拓展。2. 不能出现个人真实信息。
[思路点拨]1. 文体:记叙文。2. 时态:以一般现在时为主。3. 人称:以第一人称为主。
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My healthy lifestyle
实战练笔.夯实写作功底
良好的生活习惯对于青少年的健康成长至关重要。近日,第一中学校刊正在举办以“My healthy lifestyle”为题的英语征文活动。假如你是该校学生彼得,请你根据以下思维导图,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文投稿。
写作要求:
1. 短文需涵盖思维导图的所有要点,可适当拓展。2. 不能出现个人真实信息。
[思路点拨]1. 文体:记叙文。2. 时态:以一般现在时为主。3. 人称:以第一人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone! I'm going to tell you my life habits.
First, for breakfast, I usually have bread and milk.
Then I often eat rice, chicken and vegetables for lunch.
Finally, I often have vegetables and soup for dinner.
My favourite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy. I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. I go swimming every weekend. I go to bed at 9 o'clock every day. So let's do sports and eat healthily, and we will become healthier and stronger.
答案
One possible version：
My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone! I'm going to tell you my life habits.
First, for breakfast, I usually have bread and milk.
Then I often eat rice, chicken and vegetables for lunch.
Finally, I often have vegetables and soup for dinner.
My favourite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy. I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. I go swimming every weekend. I go to bed at 9 o'clock every day.
So let's do sports and eat healthily, and we will become healthier and stronger.
My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone! I'm going to tell you my life habits.
First, for breakfast, I usually have bread and milk.
Then I often eat rice, chicken and vegetables for lunch.
Finally, I often have vegetables and soup for dinner.
My favourite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy. I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. I go swimming every weekend. I go to bed at 9 o'clock every day.
So let's do sports and eat healthily, and we will become healthier and stronger.
解析
【分析】本题要求以第一中学学生彼得的身份，围绕“My healthy lifestyle”写一篇80词左右的英语征文，需涵盖饮食、运动、作息等健康生活要点，时态以一般现在时为主，第一人称。解题思路：1. 开头点明主题，引出自己的健康生活习惯；2. 主体部分分述饮食（早中晚的健康食物）、运动（爱好及频率）、作息（早睡）；3. 结尾发出健康生活的呼吁，确保内容完整、符合要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头用“Hello, everyone! I'm going to tell you my life habits.”引出主题；2. 饮食部分：分别说明早餐吃面包和牛奶，午餐吃米饭、鸡肉和蔬菜，晚餐吃蔬菜和汤；3. 运动部分：介绍最喜欢的运动是游泳，6岁开始学习，每周去游泳；4. 作息部分：说明每天9点睡觉；5. 结尾呼吁大家健康饮食、运动，变得更健康强壮。控制词数在80左右，无真实个人信息，符合要求。
【答案】One possible version：
My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone! I'm going to tell you my life habits.
First, for breakfast, I usually have bread and milk.
Then I often eat rice, chicken and vegetables for lunch.
Finally, I often have vegetables and soup for dinner.
My favourite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy. I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. I go swimming every weekend. I go to bed at 9 o'clock every day.
So let's do sports and eat healthily, and we will become healthier and stronger.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时、健康生活主题表达
【点评】短文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，涵盖了饮食、运动、作息等健康生活的核心要点，时态正确，第一人称使用恰当，语言简洁流畅，符合80词左右的要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头用“Hello, everyone! I'm going to tell you my life habits.”引出主题；2. 饮食部分：分别说明早餐吃面包和牛奶，午餐吃米饭、鸡肉和蔬菜，晚餐吃蔬菜和汤；3. 运动部分：介绍最喜欢的运动是游泳，6岁开始学习，每周去游泳；4. 作息部分：说明每天9点睡觉；5. 结尾呼吁大家健康饮食、运动，变得更健康强壮。控制词数在80左右，无真实个人信息，符合要求。
【答案】One possible version：
My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone! I'm going to tell you my life habits.
First, for breakfast, I usually have bread and milk.
Then I often eat rice, chicken and vegetables for lunch.
Finally, I often have vegetables and soup for dinner.
My favourite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy. I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. I go swimming every weekend. I go to bed at 9 o'clock every day.
So let's do sports and eat healthily, and we will become healthier and stronger.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时、健康生活主题表达
【点评】短文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，涵盖了饮食、运动、作息等健康生活的核心要点，时态正确，第一人称使用恰当，语言简洁流畅，符合80词左右的要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】0.7
