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十五、书面表达。（5分）
同学们，在六年小学生活中，我们肯定发生了不少变化吧。这些变化值得我们珍藏和记录。请根据表格，完成A版块“Sam’s change”小短文，介绍Sam的成长。或者以“My change”为题，完成B版块，写写自己的变化，内容不少于5句话。
温馨提示：A、B版块选择其一即可！
A Sam’s change
Sam is my good friend. He is so different now. Before, he was
同学们，在六年小学生活中，我们肯定发生了不少变化吧。这些变化值得我们珍藏和记录。请根据表格，完成A版块“Sam’s change”小短文，介绍Sam的成长。或者以“My change”为题，完成B版块，写写自己的变化，内容不少于5句话。
温馨提示：A、B版块选择其一即可！
A Sam’s change
Sam is my good friend. He is so different now. Before, he was
short and fat
. He was quiet too. Now he is tall and strong. He is very active
in class. Before, he liked playing computer games. But now he likes playing basketball
and reading books
. Before, he couldn’t cook
. Now he can cook very well.答案
A.
short and fat
active
playing basketball
reading books
cook
B.参考范文:
My change
I'm so different now. Before, I was short and thin. I was shy too. Now I am taller and stronger. I'm more active in class. Before I liked watching TV. Now I like reading books. Before I couldn't ride bikes. Now I go cycling every day.
short and fat
active
playing basketball
reading books
cook
B.参考范文:
My change
I'm so different now. Before, I was short and thin. I was shy too. Now I am taller and stronger. I'm more active in class. Before I liked watching TV. Now I like reading books. Before I couldn't ride bikes. Now I go cycling every day.
解析
【分析】
本题要求选择A（Sam的变化）或B（自己的变化）完成书面表达，需通过对比过去与现在的状态、性格、爱好、能力来写作。对于A版块，要结合上下文的对比逻辑和时态变化（过去用一般过去时，现在用一般现在时）填写符合语境的词汇；对于B版块，需围绕自身变化，用不少于5句话，清晰呈现过去与现在的不同，符合英语表达规范。
【解析】
A版块：根据“Now he is tall and strong”可知，过去Sam的外貌是short and fat；由“He was quiet too”可知，现在他在课堂上是active；对应过去喜欢玩电脑游戏，现在的两个爱好可填playing basketball和reading books；由“Now he can cook very well”可知，过去他不会cook。
B版块：以“My change”为题，先写过去的状态（short and thin、shy、liked watching TV、couldn't ride bikes），再写现在的变化（taller and stronger、more active、liked reading books、go cycling every day），用一般过去时和一般现在时对比，语句连贯，满足不少于5句的要求。
【答案】
A. short and fat active playing basketball reading books cook
B. My change
I'm so different now. Before, I was short and thin. I was shy too. Now I am taller and stronger. I'm more active in class. Before I liked watching TV. Now I like reading books. Before I couldn't ride bikes. Now I go cycling every day.
【知识点】
英语书面表达（人物变化类）；一般过去时与一般现在时的运用；词汇运用
【点评】
本题贴近小学生活实际，围绕“成长变化”展开，既考查学生对时态的掌握，又锻炼书面表达能力，选择A或B均可降低写作难度，符合小学英语的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求选择A（Sam的变化）或B（自己的变化）完成书面表达，需通过对比过去与现在的状态、性格、爱好、能力来写作。对于A版块，要结合上下文的对比逻辑和时态变化（过去用一般过去时，现在用一般现在时）填写符合语境的词汇；对于B版块，需围绕自身变化，用不少于5句话，清晰呈现过去与现在的不同，符合英语表达规范。
【解析】
A版块：根据“Now he is tall and strong”可知，过去Sam的外貌是short and fat；由“He was quiet too”可知，现在他在课堂上是active；对应过去喜欢玩电脑游戏，现在的两个爱好可填playing basketball和reading books；由“Now he can cook very well”可知，过去他不会cook。
B版块：以“My change”为题，先写过去的状态（short and thin、shy、liked watching TV、couldn't ride bikes），再写现在的变化（taller and stronger、more active、liked reading books、go cycling every day），用一般过去时和一般现在时对比，语句连贯，满足不少于5句的要求。
【答案】
A. short and fat active playing basketball reading books cook
B. My change
I'm so different now. Before, I was short and thin. I was shy too. Now I am taller and stronger. I'm more active in class. Before I liked watching TV. Now I like reading books. Before I couldn't ride bikes. Now I go cycling every day.
【知识点】
英语书面表达（人物变化类）；一般过去时与一般现在时的运用；词汇运用
【点评】
本题贴近小学生活实际，围绕“成长变化”展开，既考查学生对时态的掌握，又锻炼书面表达能力，选择A或B均可降低写作难度，符合小学英语的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
