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五、书面表达。（共20分）
又是新的一学期，安娜知道我进入了新的年级、新的班级，她写信向我询问有关新学期的事情。根据以下提示代我给她写一封回信。
Dear Sally,
How time flies! I know that now you are in Grade 8. And you are in a new class. Could you introduce one of your best friends to me? What are his/her best qualities? How do you feel about him/her?
In the new term, what's special about your school life? And do you have any suggestions on how to improve school life?
I want to do better in my Chinese. Could you give me some advice on how to improve it?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Anna
要求:1. 必须包括来函询问的要点信息,可适当发挥。2. 词数 100 左右(已给出部分不计入总词数)。
Dear Anna,
I'm very glad to hear from you.
Sally
又是新的一学期，安娜知道我进入了新的年级、新的班级，她写信向我询问有关新学期的事情。根据以下提示代我给她写一封回信。
Dear Sally,
How time flies! I know that now you are in Grade 8. And you are in a new class. Could you introduce one of your best friends to me? What are his/her best qualities? How do you feel about him/her?
In the new term, what's special about your school life? And do you have any suggestions on how to improve school life?
I want to do better in my Chinese. Could you give me some advice on how to improve it?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Anna
要求:1. 必须包括来函询问的要点信息,可适当发挥。2. 词数 100 左右(已给出部分不计入总词数)。
Dear Anna,
I'm very glad to hear from you.
Let me share my new school life with you.
One of my best friends is Lin Xin. She is very kind and always helps classmates with homework. I feel lucky to have her as a friend. She brings warmth to our class. This term, our school has new outdoor activities like sports festivals. To improve school life, I suggest joining clubs—they help you meet friends and learn new things.
For your Chinese, try reading books in Chinese and watching Chinese shows. Also, practise speaking with others in Chinese as much as possible. I hope you can develop good learning habits.
One of my best friends is Lin Xin. She is very kind and always helps classmates with homework. I feel lucky to have her as a friend. She brings warmth to our class. This term, our school has new outdoor activities like sports festivals. To improve school life, I suggest joining clubs—they help you meet friends and learn new things.
For your Chinese, try reading books in Chinese and watching Chinese shows. Also, practise speaking with others in Chinese as much as possible. I hope you can develop good learning habits.
Sally
答案
One possible version:
Dear Anna,
I'm very glad to hear from you. Let me share my new school life with you.
One of my best friends is Lin Xin. She is very kind and always helps classmates with homework. I feel lucky to have her as a friend. She brings warmth to our class. This term, our school has new outdoor activities like sports festivals. To improve school life, I suggest joining clubs—they help you meet friends and learn new things.
For your Chinese, try reading books in Chinese and watching Chinese shows. Also, practise speaking with others in Chinese as much as possible. I hope you can develop good learning habits.
Sally
Dear Anna,
I'm very glad to hear from you. Let me share my new school life with you.
One of my best friends is Lin Xin. She is very kind and always helps classmates with homework. I feel lucky to have her as a friend. She brings warmth to our class. This term, our school has new outdoor activities like sports festivals. To improve school life, I suggest joining clubs—they help you meet friends and learn new things.
For your Chinese, try reading books in Chinese and watching Chinese shows. Also, practise speaking with others in Chinese as much as possible. I hope you can develop good learning habits.
Sally
解析
【分析】
首先进行审题，明确这是一封写给好友的回信，核心要求是完整覆盖Anna来信提出的全部问题，不能遗漏得分要点。第一步先把所有必填信息点逐一梳理出来：1. 介绍一位自己的挚友，说明对方的优秀品质，以及你对这段友谊的感受；2. 点明新学期校园生活的特别之处，同时给出优化校园生活的可行建议；3. 给Anna提供提升中文水平的实用方法。第二步搭建行文逻辑，用自然的口语化表达把几个部分串联起来，控制总词数在100左右，适当补充少量细节让内容更真实，避免行文空洞。最后写完后核对所有要点是否覆盖，排查语法错误调整流畅度即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 搭建写作框架：开篇承接收到来信的内容，自然引出下文对新学期相关内容的介绍，中间分模块依次回应Anna的三个问题，模块之间用过渡表达衔接，避免生硬跳转，整体符合好友通信的轻松语气。
2. 确定时态与人称：全文以第一人称书写，描述日常人物、校园规则、学习建议都使用一般现在时，完全贴合语境要求。
3. 逐一落实得分要点：
① 好友介绍部分：设定好友姓名，点明其善良、常帮同学补习功课的品质，说明自己很幸运能拥有这位朋友；
② 校园生活部分：点明新学期新增体育节这类户外活动，建议大家多参加社团来丰富课余生活；
③ 中文学习建议部分：给出读中文书籍、看中文节目、多开口练习的可操作建议，贴合实际学习场景。
4. 最终调整语句，将总词数控制在100左右，排查语法错误即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Anna,
I'm very glad to hear from you. Let me share my new school life with you.
One of my best friends is Lin Xin. She is very kind and always helps classmates with homework. I feel lucky to have her as a friend. She brings warmth to our class. This term, our school has new outdoor activities like sports festivals. To improve school life, I suggest joining clubs—they help you meet friends and learn new things.
For your Chinese, try reading books in Chinese and watching Chinese shows. Also, practise speaking with others in Chinese as much as possible. I hope you can develop good learning habits.
Sally
【知识点】
英文书信写作，要点型书面表达，建议类句型运用
【点评】
本题是八年级常规的应用文书信写作题，核心得分逻辑非常清晰，只要完整覆盖所有题干指定的信息点就可以拿到大部分分数，同学们写作时不需要刻意堆砌复杂长难句，用简单地道的表达把内容说清楚，逻辑衔接自然就很容易拿高分，要注意避免漏写提问要点导致不必要的丢分。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先进行审题，明确这是一封写给好友的回信，核心要求是完整覆盖Anna来信提出的全部问题，不能遗漏得分要点。第一步先把所有必填信息点逐一梳理出来：1. 介绍一位自己的挚友，说明对方的优秀品质，以及你对这段友谊的感受；2. 点明新学期校园生活的特别之处，同时给出优化校园生活的可行建议；3. 给Anna提供提升中文水平的实用方法。第二步搭建行文逻辑，用自然的口语化表达把几个部分串联起来，控制总词数在100左右，适当补充少量细节让内容更真实，避免行文空洞。最后写完后核对所有要点是否覆盖，排查语法错误调整流畅度即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 搭建写作框架：开篇承接收到来信的内容，自然引出下文对新学期相关内容的介绍，中间分模块依次回应Anna的三个问题，模块之间用过渡表达衔接，避免生硬跳转，整体符合好友通信的轻松语气。
2. 确定时态与人称：全文以第一人称书写，描述日常人物、校园规则、学习建议都使用一般现在时，完全贴合语境要求。
3. 逐一落实得分要点：
① 好友介绍部分：设定好友姓名，点明其善良、常帮同学补习功课的品质，说明自己很幸运能拥有这位朋友；
② 校园生活部分：点明新学期新增体育节这类户外活动，建议大家多参加社团来丰富课余生活；
③ 中文学习建议部分：给出读中文书籍、看中文节目、多开口练习的可操作建议，贴合实际学习场景。
4. 最终调整语句，将总词数控制在100左右，排查语法错误即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Anna,
I'm very glad to hear from you. Let me share my new school life with you.
One of my best friends is Lin Xin. She is very kind and always helps classmates with homework. I feel lucky to have her as a friend. She brings warmth to our class. This term, our school has new outdoor activities like sports festivals. To improve school life, I suggest joining clubs—they help you meet friends and learn new things.
For your Chinese, try reading books in Chinese and watching Chinese shows. Also, practise speaking with others in Chinese as much as possible. I hope you can develop good learning habits.
Sally
【知识点】
英文书信写作，要点型书面表达，建议类句型运用
【点评】
本题是八年级常规的应用文书信写作题，核心得分逻辑非常清晰，只要完整覆盖所有题干指定的信息点就可以拿到大部分分数，同学们写作时不需要刻意堆砌复杂长难句，用简单地道的表达把内容说清楚，逻辑衔接自然就很容易拿高分，要注意避免漏写提问要点导致不必要的丢分。
【难度系数】
0.7
