十三、兰兰居住的城市有不少变化,她写了一篇短文并进行分享。你也试着写一写你所在的城市发生了什么变化吧。(共7分)
请以“The changes in my city”为题,根据以下思维导图,写一写你所在城市各方面的变化。
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确。2. 不少于6句话。

The changes in my city
请以“The changes in my city”为题,根据以下思维导图,写一写你所在城市各方面的变化。
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确。2. 不少于6句话。
The changes in my city
答案
One possible version:
The changes in my city
Ten years ago, life in my city was different. People usually went out by bike or by bus. They shopped only in small shops and paid in cash. There were not many trees. During holidays, most people just stayed at home.
Now, great changes have taken place. We can take the metro or drive the car when we go out. We can buy almost everything online and pay with our smartphones easily. The streets are clean and there are many green trees everywhere. On holidays, we often go to the park or travel with our family. I love these new changes in my city.
The changes in my city
Ten years ago, life in my city was different. People usually went out by bike or by bus. They shopped only in small shops and paid in cash. There were not many trees. During holidays, most people just stayed at home.
Now, great changes have taken place. We can take the metro or drive the car when we go out. We can buy almost everything online and pay with our smartphones easily. The streets are clean and there are many green trees everywhere. On holidays, we often go to the park or travel with our family. I love these new changes in my city.
解析
【分析】本题要求以“The changes in my city”为题写英语作文,需结合思维导图的四个方面(交通工具、购物方式、周围环境、假期活动),通过对比过去与现在的变化完成写作。解题思路为:先总述城市发生了巨大变化,再分别从四个方面逐一对比过去和现在的不同,最后总结表达对城市变化的喜爱,确保语句通顺、语法正确、不少于6句话。
【解析】写作采用“总-分-总”结构:1. 开头点明城市发生了很大变化;2. 分述四个方面的变化:交通工具(过去骑自行车/公交,现在地铁/开车)、购物方式(过去实体店现金支付,现在网购手机支付)、周围环境(过去树木少,现在街道干净绿树多)、假期活动(过去待在家,现在去公园或旅行);3. 结尾表达对城市变化的喜爱,注意使用正确时态(过去时表过去,现在时表现在),保证语句连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
The changes in my city
Ten years ago, life in my city was different. People usually went out by bike or by bus. They shopped only in small shops and paid in cash. There were not many trees. During holidays, most people just stayed at home.
Now, great changes have taken place. We can take the metro or drive the car when we go out. We can buy almost everything online and pay with our smartphones easily. The streets are clean and there are many green trees everywhere. On holidays, we often go to the park or travel with our family. I love these new changes in my city.
【知识点】英语话题写作、时态运用、话题词汇
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,结合思维导图的四个要点,通过对比过去与现在的变化清晰展现城市发展,语句通顺、语法正确,符合字数要求,是一篇优秀的话题作文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作采用“总-分-总”结构:1. 开头点明城市发生了很大变化;2. 分述四个方面的变化:交通工具(过去骑自行车/公交,现在地铁/开车)、购物方式(过去实体店现金支付,现在网购手机支付)、周围环境(过去树木少,现在街道干净绿树多)、假期活动(过去待在家,现在去公园或旅行);3. 结尾表达对城市变化的喜爱,注意使用正确时态(过去时表过去,现在时表现在),保证语句连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
The changes in my city
Ten years ago, life in my city was different. People usually went out by bike or by bus. They shopped only in small shops and paid in cash. There were not many trees. During holidays, most people just stayed at home.
Now, great changes have taken place. We can take the metro or drive the car when we go out. We can buy almost everything online and pay with our smartphones easily. The streets are clean and there are many green trees everywhere. On holidays, we often go to the park or travel with our family. I love these new changes in my city.
【知识点】英语话题写作、时态运用、话题词汇
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,结合思维导图的四个要点,通过对比过去与现在的变化清晰展现城市发展,语句通顺、语法正确,符合字数要求,是一篇优秀的话题作文。
【难度系数】0.5
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