2026年上海作业五年级英语上册沪教版五四制第61页答案
Ⅸ. Writing(写作)5%
请以“My health tips”为题,写一篇不少于50词的短文。
内容:1.你遇到了什么健康问题?
2.你应该怎么做?
要求:语句通顺,书写规范。
My health tips
These days, I have a bad toothache. It hurts a lot when I eat or drink something cold or sweet. I feel uncomfortable and can't sleep well at night.

Here are my health tips for myself. First, I should eat less candy and chocolate. Second, I need to brush my teeth twice a day.

Third, I must go to see a dentist and take medicine on time. I hope my tooth will get better soon.


答案

参考范文:
My health tips
These days, I have a bad toothache. It hurts a lot when I eat or drink something cold or sweet. I feel uncomfortable and can't sleep well at night.
Here are my health tips for myself. First, I should eat less candy and chocolate. Second, I need to brush my teeth twice a day. Third, I must go to see a dentist and take medicine on time. I hope my tooth will get better soon.

解析

【分析】首先明确写作主题为“My health tips”,需完成两个核心内容:一是描述自身遇到的健康问题,二是给出对应的健康建议,要求语句通顺、字数不少于50词。写作时需先点明具体健康问题(如牙疼),再分点列出可行的改善建议,最后可补充对健康好转的期望,确保内容贴合要求、逻辑清晰。
【解析】本题为英语话题写作,需围绕“健康小贴士”展开:第一步,说明自身健康问题(如牙疼,描述疼痛的具体表现);第二步,分点提出具体的改善措施(如少吃甜食、按时刷牙、看牙医等);第三步,表达对健康好转的期望,确保内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【答案】My health tips
These days, I have a bad toothache. It hurts a lot when I eat or drink something cold or sweet. I feel uncomfortable and can't sleep well at night.
Here are my health tips for myself. First, I should eat less candy and chocolate. Second, I need to brush my teeth twice a day. Third, I must go to see a dentist and take medicine on time. I hope my tooth will get better soon.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、健康话题英语表达
【点评】本题考查学生围绕指定话题进行英语写作的能力,要求学生能清晰描述问题并给出合理建议,注重语言的通顺性和逻辑性,是基础英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.6