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描述自己的兴趣爱好，可按“三步三要素法”写作。第一步，开头，说出自己的兴趣爱好；第二步，正文，具体介绍开始喜欢的时间、喜欢的原因以及该兴趣爱好带来的影响三要素；第三步，结尾，描述自己的感想。
二 素材积累
三 以读促写（阅读范文，补全思维导图，体悟写法）
My name is Bob. I like playing basketball. It’s very interesting. I started to play basketball when I was six. I often play basketball with my friends. It’s a team game. Playing basketball is good for working together with others. I can also make new friends in the game. I want to be a basketball player one day.
四 小试身手（参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧）同学们，你们平时都有些什么爱好呢？请以“My Hobby”为题，写一篇关于自己兴趣爱好的小短文。
提示词：swimming, flying kites, have a good time, make me strong
My Hobby
描述自己的兴趣爱好，可按“三步三要素法”写作。第一步，开头，说出自己的兴趣爱好；第二步，正文，具体介绍开始喜欢的时间、喜欢的原因以及该兴趣爱好带来的影响三要素；第三步，结尾，描述自己的感想。
二 素材积累
三 以读促写（阅读范文，补全思维导图，体悟写法）
My name is Bob. I like playing basketball. It’s very interesting. I started to play basketball when I was six. I often play basketball with my friends. It’s a team game. Playing basketball is good for working together with others. I can also make new friends in the game. I want to be a basketball player one day.
四 小试身手（参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧）同学们，你们平时都有些什么爱好呢？请以“My Hobby”为题，写一篇关于自己兴趣爱好的小短文。
提示词：swimming, flying kites, have a good time, make me strong
My Hobby
Everyone has his own hobby. Today I am going to talk about my hobby. My hobby is swimming. I started to swim when I was eight. I like swimming very much. I often go swimming with my classmates after class.
When we go to the swimming pool in our school, we usually have many "water games". Girls are in one group, and boys are in the other group. We always have a good time.
I think swimming is very interesting. It is good for health. Swimming brings me much happiness. It can relax my body and make me strong.
I want to be a swimmer in the future.
答案
1. playing basketball
2. interesting
3. make new friends
4. to be a basketball player
四范文：
My Hobby
Everyone has his own hobby. Today I am going to talk about my hobby. My hobby is swimming. I started to swim when I was eight. I like swimming very much. I often go swimming with my classmates after class. When we go to the swimming pool in our school, we usually have many "water games". Girls are in one group, and boys are in the other group. We always have a good time.
I think swimming is very interesting. It is good for health. Swimming brings me much happiness. It can relax my body and make me strong. I want to be a swimmer in the future.
2. interesting
3. make new friends
4. to be a basketball player
四范文：
My Hobby
Everyone has his own hobby. Today I am going to talk about my hobby. My hobby is swimming. I started to swim when I was eight. I like swimming very much. I often go swimming with my classmates after class. When we go to the swimming pool in our school, we usually have many "water games". Girls are in one group, and boys are in the other group. We always have a good time.
I think swimming is very interesting. It is good for health. Swimming brings me much happiness. It can relax my body and make me strong. I want to be a swimmer in the future.
解析
【分析】本题为英语写作题，要求以“My Hobby”为题，遵循给定的“三步三要素法”完成短文创作。第一步需开头点明自身兴趣爱好；第二步正文要涵盖喜欢该爱好的时间、原因、带来的影响三个要素，同时需运用提示词；第三步结尾表达个人感想。需结合范文结构，合理组织语言，确保内容完整、结构清晰。
【解析】按照“三步三要素法”分步写作：1. 开头：直接点明爱好，如“My hobby is swimming.”；2. 正文：说明开始喜欢的时间（如“I started to swim when I was seven.”）、喜欢的原因（如“It’s very interesting.”）、带来的影响（如“I often go swimming with friends, we always have a good time, and it makes me strong.”）；3. 结尾：表达感想，如“I hope to keep this hobby forever.”，确保用到提示词，符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】My Hobby
Everyone has their own hobby. My hobby is swimming. I started to swim when I was seven. I like it because it’s interesting. I often go swimming with my classmates on weekends. We always have a good time in the swimming pool. Swimming can make me strong and help me relax. I hope I can stick to this hobby and enjoy it forever.
【知识点】英语写作 兴趣爱好表达 提示词运用
【点评】本题考查学生运用英语表达个人兴趣爱好的能力，要求遵循指定结构写作，既锻炼了写作的逻辑性，又考查了提示词的运用，是基础的英语写作练习，适合学生巩固相关写作方法。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照“三步三要素法”分步写作：1. 开头：直接点明爱好，如“My hobby is swimming.”；2. 正文：说明开始喜欢的时间（如“I started to swim when I was seven.”）、喜欢的原因（如“It’s very interesting.”）、带来的影响（如“I often go swimming with friends, we always have a good time, and it makes me strong.”）；3. 结尾：表达感想，如“I hope to keep this hobby forever.”，确保用到提示词，符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】My Hobby
Everyone has their own hobby. My hobby is swimming. I started to swim when I was seven. I like it because it’s interesting. I often go swimming with my classmates on weekends. We always have a good time in the swimming pool. Swimming can make me strong and help me relax. I hope I can stick to this hobby and enjoy it forever.
【知识点】英语写作 兴趣爱好表达 提示词运用
【点评】本题考查学生运用英语表达个人兴趣爱好的能力，要求遵循指定结构写作，既锻炼了写作的逻辑性，又考查了提示词的运用，是基础的英语写作练习，适合学生巩固相关写作方法。
【难度系数】0.6
