七 书面表达。(8分)
假如你是学校杂志编辑Diana,你在学校建议栏里看到了李华的求助信。请阅读李华的信件,并参考下面的提示,给他回信。不少于40词。
提示:have a face-to-face(面对面的) talk with him,tell ... it's not honest,help ... understand the work
My friend Peter finds Maths very difficult. I want to say no when he asks to copy my homework, because it's not honest. But I'm afraid Peter will get in trouble with his parents. They told him to work hard. He does work hard—he just doesn't understand Maths.
Li Hua
假如你是学校杂志编辑Diana,你在学校建议栏里看到了李华的求助信。请阅读李华的信件,并参考下面的提示,给他回信。不少于40词。
提示:have a face-to-face(面对面的) talk with him,tell ... it's not honest,help ... understand the work
My friend Peter finds Maths very difficult. I want to say no when he asks to copy my homework, because it's not honest. But I'm afraid Peter will get in trouble with his parents. They told him to work hard. He does work hard—he just doesn't understand Maths.
Li Hua
答案
示例:
Dear Li Hua,
First, you should have a face-to-face talk with your friend Peter. Tell him that it's not honest for him to copy others' homework. If he does that, his Maths may get worse and worse(越来越差). If Peter wants to get better marks, he must work hard by himself. Second, you can use your free time to help him understand the work. You can do your homework and review(复习) your lessons together. Besides, you can tell Peter to talk with his parents about his problems, I think they will understand and help him. I hope I can help you.
Yours,
Diana
Dear Li Hua,
First, you should have a face-to-face talk with your friend Peter. Tell him that it's not honest for him to copy others' homework. If he does that, his Maths may get worse and worse(越来越差). If Peter wants to get better marks, he must work hard by himself. Second, you can use your free time to help him understand the work. You can do your homework and review(复习) your lessons together. Besides, you can tell Peter to talk with his parents about his problems, I think they will understand and help him. I hope I can help you.
Yours,
Diana
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,需以学校杂志编辑Diana的身份给李华写回信。解题思路:1. 明确书信的基本格式(称呼、正文、落款);2. 紧扣李华的问题(朋友Peter数学差想抄作业,李华担心Peter与父母产生矛盾),结合给定提示(面对面谈话、说明抄作业不诚实、帮助理解作业)组织内容;3. 补充贴合李华顾虑的建议,使内容更完整;4. 确保词数达标,语言通顺自然。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:① 开头写称呼“Dear Li Hua,”,点明身份;② 正文第一点:建议李华与Peter面对面谈话,告知抄作业不诚实,会导致数学成绩越来越差;③ 正文第二点:建议李华利用空闲时间帮助Peter理解数学作业,可一起学习;④ 补充建议:让Peter和父母沟通数学问题,父母会理解;⑤ 结尾表达希望帮助到李华,落款“Yours, Diana”。
【答案】
Dear Li Hua,
First, you should have a face-to-face talk with your friend Peter. Tell him that it's not honest for him to copy others' homework. If he does that, his Maths may get worse and worse. If Peter wants to get better marks, he must work hard by himself. Second, you can use your free time to help him understand the work. You can do your homework and review your lessons together. Besides, you can tell Peter to talk with his parents about his problems, I think they will understand and help him. I hope I can help you.
Yours,
Diana
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类书面表达、英语常用短语运用
【点评】
本题为初中英语常见的建议类书信写作题,要求结合问题背景和给定提示完成,格式规范,内容逻辑清晰,能考查学生的英语表达与解决问题的能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题,需以学校杂志编辑Diana的身份给李华写回信。解题思路:1. 明确书信的基本格式(称呼、正文、落款);2. 紧扣李华的问题(朋友Peter数学差想抄作业,李华担心Peter与父母产生矛盾),结合给定提示(面对面谈话、说明抄作业不诚实、帮助理解作业)组织内容;3. 补充贴合李华顾虑的建议,使内容更完整;4. 确保词数达标,语言通顺自然。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:① 开头写称呼“Dear Li Hua,”,点明身份;② 正文第一点:建议李华与Peter面对面谈话,告知抄作业不诚实,会导致数学成绩越来越差;③ 正文第二点:建议李华利用空闲时间帮助Peter理解数学作业,可一起学习;④ 补充建议:让Peter和父母沟通数学问题,父母会理解;⑤ 结尾表达希望帮助到李华,落款“Yours, Diana”。
【答案】
Dear Li Hua,
First, you should have a face-to-face talk with your friend Peter. Tell him that it's not honest for him to copy others' homework. If he does that, his Maths may get worse and worse. If Peter wants to get better marks, he must work hard by himself. Second, you can use your free time to help him understand the work. You can do your homework and review your lessons together. Besides, you can tell Peter to talk with his parents about his problems, I think they will understand and help him. I hope I can help you.
Yours,
Diana
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类书面表达、英语常用短语运用
【点评】
本题为初中英语常见的建议类书信写作题,要求结合问题背景和给定提示完成,格式规范,内容逻辑清晰,能考查学生的英语表达与解决问题的能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
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