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【写作导引】
本单元以“谈论鼓舞人心的人”为话题，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“著名人物”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①介绍人物的姓名、身份、时代背景；②描述人物的关键成就与具体事件；③探究人物的核心品质与精神内涵；④说明人物对社会、行业或个人的影响，以及从中获得的启示。
【写作任务】
用英语向世界传播中国文化是学习英语的重要作用之一。请你以“A great Chinese scientist I admire most”为题，用英语写一篇短文，参加学校组织的“用英语讲中国故事”征文比赛。
要点：1. 他/她是谁；2. 他/她做出了什么贡献；3. 你向他/她学习什么。
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；2. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
A great Chinese scientist I admire most
This term, we learned about many great Chinese scientists.
本单元以“谈论鼓舞人心的人”为话题，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“著名人物”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①介绍人物的姓名、身份、时代背景；②描述人物的关键成就与具体事件；③探究人物的核心品质与精神内涵；④说明人物对社会、行业或个人的影响，以及从中获得的启示。
【写作任务】
用英语向世界传播中国文化是学习英语的重要作用之一。请你以“A great Chinese scientist I admire most”为题，用英语写一篇短文，参加学校组织的“用英语讲中国故事”征文比赛。
要点：1. 他/她是谁；2. 他/她做出了什么贡献；3. 你向他/她学习什么。
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；2. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
A great Chinese scientist I admire most
This term, we learned about many great Chinese scientists.
答案
A great Chinese scientist I admire most
This term, we learned about many great Chinese scientists.
The one I admire most is Yuan Longping, widely known as the "Father of Hybrid Rice". He devoted nearly all his life to developing high-yield hybrid rice. His research greatly lifted rice output, helping Chinese people get rid of the problem of hunger. His technology also helps many other food-short countries around the world.
I will learn from him the spirit of facing difficulties bravely and never giving up. I will study hard to make my own contribution to our society later.
This term, we learned about many great Chinese scientists.
The one I admire most is Yuan Longping, widely known as the "Father of Hybrid Rice". He devoted nearly all his life to developing high-yield hybrid rice. His research greatly lifted rice output, helping Chinese people get rid of the problem of hunger. His technology also helps many other food-short countries around the world.
I will learn from him the spirit of facing difficulties bravely and never giving up. I will study hard to make my own contribution to our society later.
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是围绕“我最敬佩的中国科学家”撰写英语短文，用于“用英语讲中国故事”征文比赛。需紧扣三个核心要点：①点明敬佩的科学家身份；②阐述其关键贡献；③说明要学习的品质。写作时需选取中国著名科学家的典型事迹，语言简洁，符合词数要求，不得出现真实信息，传递正能量。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接给定开头，点明最敬佩的科学家是袁隆平，介绍其“杂交水稻之父”的身份；2. 阐述其毕生致力于高产杂交稻研发，核心贡献为解决中国饥饿问题，同时帮助其他缺粮国家；3. 说明要学习他勇敢面对困难、永不放弃的精神，表达自身努力学习、为社会做贡献的决心。
【答案】
A great Chinese scientist I admire most
This term, we learned about many great Chinese scientists.
The one I admire most is Yuan Longping, widely known as the "Father of Hybrid Rice". He devoted nearly all his life to developing high-yield hybrid rice. His research greatly lifted rice output, helping Chinese people get rid of the problem of hunger. His technology also helps many other food-short countries around the world.
I will learn from him the spirit of facing difficulties bravely and never giving up. I will study hard to make my own contribution to our society later.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、人物介绍、中国文化传播
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，要点齐全，内容具体真实，语言流畅自然，传递了科学家的奉献精神，符合“用英语讲中国故事”的要求，是一篇优秀的参赛短文。
【难度系数】
0.4
本次写作任务是围绕“我最敬佩的中国科学家”撰写英语短文，用于“用英语讲中国故事”征文比赛。需紧扣三个核心要点：①点明敬佩的科学家身份；②阐述其关键贡献；③说明要学习的品质。写作时需选取中国著名科学家的典型事迹，语言简洁，符合词数要求，不得出现真实信息，传递正能量。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接给定开头，点明最敬佩的科学家是袁隆平，介绍其“杂交水稻之父”的身份；2. 阐述其毕生致力于高产杂交稻研发，核心贡献为解决中国饥饿问题，同时帮助其他缺粮国家；3. 说明要学习他勇敢面对困难、永不放弃的精神，表达自身努力学习、为社会做贡献的决心。
【答案】
A great Chinese scientist I admire most
This term, we learned about many great Chinese scientists.
The one I admire most is Yuan Longping, widely known as the "Father of Hybrid Rice". He devoted nearly all his life to developing high-yield hybrid rice. His research greatly lifted rice output, helping Chinese people get rid of the problem of hunger. His technology also helps many other food-short countries around the world.
I will learn from him the spirit of facing difficulties bravely and never giving up. I will study hard to make my own contribution to our society later.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、人物介绍、中国文化传播
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，要点齐全，内容具体真实，语言流畅自然，传递了科学家的奉献精神，符合“用英语讲中国故事”的要求，是一篇优秀的参赛短文。
【难度系数】
0.4
跟踪演练
假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在进行关于“我敬仰的科学家”系列推送活动。请你用英语给公众号留言，介绍一个你敬仰的科学家或发明家并对其作简要介绍。
提示词语：great, helpful, invent, develop, teach
提示问题：•Who is the scientist or inventor you admire?
•Why do you admire him/her?
•What was his/her major achievement?
要求：词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
I’m Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9. I feel happy to let you know who I admire.
假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在进行关于“我敬仰的科学家”系列推送活动。请你用英语给公众号留言，介绍一个你敬仰的科学家或发明家并对其作简要介绍。
提示词语：great, helpful, invent, develop, teach
提示问题：•Who is the scientist or inventor you admire?
•Why do you admire him/her?
•What was his/her major achievement?
要求：词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
I’m Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9. I feel happy to let you know who I admire.
The person I admire is Tu Youyou. I admire her for many reasons. First, she is the first Chinese female scientist to be awarded a Nobel Prize. She and her team discovered artemisinin which has saved millions of lives. She makes a great contribution to mankind. Another reason is that she is so brave. She did research during a difficult time for science in China. She bravely volunteered to be the first human subject to test the effect of the promising chemical. Besides, I admire her because she is creative. She and her team used old wisdom and new methods to bridge the Eastern and Western worlds, saving millions of lives.
This is why she is worthy of admiration. I am deeply moved by her stories. So I will work hard and do my best to help others.
答案
写作提优练
范文：
I'm Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9. I feel happy to let you know who I admire. The person I admire is Tu Youyou. I admire her for many reasons. First, she is the first Chinese female scientist to be awarded a Nobel Prize. She and her team discovered artemisinin which has saved millions of lives. She makes a great contribution to mankind. Another reason is that she is so brave. She did research during a difficult time for science in China. She bravely volunteered to be the first human subject to test the effect of the promising chemical. Besides, I admire her because she is creative. She and her team used old wisdom and new methods to bridge the Eastern and Western worlds, saving millions of lives. This is why she is worthy of admiration.
I am deeply moved by her stories. So I will work hard and do my best to help others.
范文：
I'm Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9. I feel happy to let you know who I admire. The person I admire is Tu Youyou. I admire her for many reasons. First, she is the first Chinese female scientist to be awarded a Nobel Prize. She and her team discovered artemisinin which has saved millions of lives. She makes a great contribution to mankind. Another reason is that she is so brave. She did research during a difficult time for science in China. She bravely volunteered to be the first human subject to test the effect of the promising chemical. Besides, I admire her because she is creative. She and her team used old wisdom and new methods to bridge the Eastern and Western worlds, saving millions of lives. This is why she is worthy of admiration.
I am deeply moved by her stories. So I will work hard and do my best to help others.
解析
【分析】
这是一道提示性英语写作题，要求给学校英语社团公众号留言介绍敬仰的科学家。解题思路：首先确定要介绍的科学家（选屠呦呦，符合正能量且有明确成就）；接着紧扣提示问题，依次点明人物、说明敬佩的原因、阐述主要成就；然后运用提示词语保证内容贴合要求，同时保证词数达标；最后结尾表达自身感悟，呼应主题。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头句，明确指出敬仰的科学家是屠呦呦；2. 分层次阐述敬佩原因：① 她是首位获诺贝尔奖的中国女科学家，团队发现青蒿素拯救数百万生命，贡献巨大；② 科研条件艰苦时勇敢做人体实验，品质可贵；③ 结合东西方智慧研发，富有创造力；3. 最后表达受其鼓舞，决心努力帮助他人，完成写作。
【答案】
I'm Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9. I feel happy to let you know who I admire. The person I admire is Tu Youyou. I admire her for many reasons. First, she is the first Chinese female scientist to be awarded a Nobel Prize. She and her team discovered artemisinin which has saved millions of lives. She makes a great contribution to mankind. Another reason is that she is so brave. She did research during a difficult time for science in China. She bravely volunteered to be the first human subject to test the effect of the promising chemical. Besides, I admire her because she is creative. She and her team used old wisdom and new methods to bridge the Eastern and Western worlds, saving millions of lives. This is why she is worthy of admiration.
I am deeply moved by her stories. So I will work hard and do my best to help others.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、人物介绍类作文、提示性作文
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整回答了所有提示问题，合理运用提示词语，结构清晰，内容具体，情感真挚，符合初中生英语写作的要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.3
这是一道提示性英语写作题，要求给学校英语社团公众号留言介绍敬仰的科学家。解题思路：首先确定要介绍的科学家（选屠呦呦，符合正能量且有明确成就）；接着紧扣提示问题，依次点明人物、说明敬佩的原因、阐述主要成就；然后运用提示词语保证内容贴合要求，同时保证词数达标；最后结尾表达自身感悟，呼应主题。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头句，明确指出敬仰的科学家是屠呦呦；2. 分层次阐述敬佩原因：① 她是首位获诺贝尔奖的中国女科学家，团队发现青蒿素拯救数百万生命，贡献巨大；② 科研条件艰苦时勇敢做人体实验，品质可贵；③ 结合东西方智慧研发，富有创造力；3. 最后表达受其鼓舞，决心努力帮助他人，完成写作。
【答案】
I'm Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9. I feel happy to let you know who I admire. The person I admire is Tu Youyou. I admire her for many reasons. First, she is the first Chinese female scientist to be awarded a Nobel Prize. She and her team discovered artemisinin which has saved millions of lives. She makes a great contribution to mankind. Another reason is that she is so brave. She did research during a difficult time for science in China. She bravely volunteered to be the first human subject to test the effect of the promising chemical. Besides, I admire her because she is creative. She and her team used old wisdom and new methods to bridge the Eastern and Western worlds, saving millions of lives. This is why she is worthy of admiration.
I am deeply moved by her stories. So I will work hard and do my best to help others.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、人物介绍类作文、提示性作文
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整回答了所有提示问题，合理运用提示词语，结构清晰，内容具体，情感真挚，符合初中生英语写作的要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.3
