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假设你最喜欢的艺术家是文森特·梵高（Vincent van Gogh），请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文介绍他，并说明你喜欢他的原因。
提示：
1. 基本信息：1853年出生于荷兰；27岁决心成为画家并开始学习美术。
2. 艺术经历：1886年前往巴黎，形成独特画风（色彩明亮、笔触粗短）；1888年到1889年，创作《向日葵》；1889年创作《星月夜》。
3. 你喜欢他的原因：他的作品充满热情与活力；他热爱自然并描绘自然之美。
要求：1. 语言流畅、条理清晰，可适当发挥；2. 100词左右；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。
假设你最喜欢的艺术家是文森特·梵高（Vincent van Gogh），请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文介绍他，并说明你喜欢他的原因。
提示：
1. 基本信息：1853年出生于荷兰；27岁决心成为画家并开始学习美术。
2. 艺术经历：1886年前往巴黎，形成独特画风（色彩明亮、笔触粗短）；1888年到1889年，创作《向日葵》；1889年创作《星月夜》。
3. 你喜欢他的原因：他的作品充满热情与活力；他热爱自然并描绘自然之美。
要求：1. 语言流畅、条理清晰，可适当发挥；2. 100词左右；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。
My favourite artist is Vincent van Gogh. He was born in Holland in 1853. He made up his mind to be a painter at the age of 27 and started to learn painting. Van Gogh went to Paris in 1886. There, he experienced the bright colours of famous French painters. This was when Van Gogh developed his famous style—using short brushstrokes of thick paint and bright colours. From 1888 to 1889, he finished his famous work Sunflowers. Later in 1889, he created another great painting The Starry Night. His paintings are full of strong feelings and special beauty. Sadly, he died in 1890.
I like Van Gogh because he showed passion and energy in his paintings. Besides, he loved nature and painted all the beauty of nature.
答案
写作提优练
范文:
My favourite artist is Vincent van Gogh. He was born in Holland in 1853. He made up his mind to be a painter at the age of 27 and started to learn painting.
Van Gogh went to Paris in 1886. There, he experienced the bright colours of famous French painters. This was when Van Gogh developed his famous style—using short brushstrokes of thick paint and bright colours. From 1888 to 1889, he finished his famous work Sunflowers. Later in 1889, he created another great painting The Starry Night. His paintings are full of strong feelings and special beauty. Sadly, he died in 1890.
I like Van Gogh because he showed passion and energy in his paintings. Besides, he loved nature and painted all the beauty of nature.
范文:
My favourite artist is Vincent van Gogh. He was born in Holland in 1853. He made up his mind to be a painter at the age of 27 and started to learn painting.
Van Gogh went to Paris in 1886. There, he experienced the bright colours of famous French painters. This was when Van Gogh developed his famous style—using short brushstrokes of thick paint and bright colours. From 1888 to 1889, he finished his famous work Sunflowers. Later in 1889, he created another great painting The Starry Night. His paintings are full of strong feelings and special beauty. Sadly, he died in 1890.
I like Van Gogh because he showed passion and energy in his paintings. Besides, he loved nature and painted all the beauty of nature.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务是介绍梵高并说明喜欢他的原因，需按提示的三个要点（基本信息、艺术经历、喜欢的原因）展开。先开篇点明最喜欢的艺术家是梵高，接着按时间顺序梳理他的基本情况与艺术经历，最后结合自身感受说明喜欢的理由，注意语言简洁流畅，控制在100词左右，确保所有提示要点都涵盖，适当发挥即可。
【解析】按照写作思路，先介绍梵高的基本信息：1853年生于荷兰，27岁决心成为画家并开始学画；再叙述艺术经历：1886年赴巴黎形成独特画风（色彩明亮、笔触粗短），1888-1889年创作《向日葵》，1889年创作《星月夜》；最后说明喜欢的原因：作品充满热情与活力，热爱自然并描绘自然之美，语言连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】My favourite artist is Vincent van Gogh. He was born in Holland in 1853. He made up his mind to be a painter at the age of 27 and started to learn painting. Van Gogh went to Paris in 1886. There, he experienced the bright colours of famous French painters. This was when Van Gogh developed his famous style—using short brushstrokes of thick paint and bright colours. From 1888 to 1889, he finished his famous work Sunflowers. Later in 1889, he created another great painting The Starry Night. His paintings are full of strong feelings and special beauty. Sadly, he died in 1890. I like Van Gogh because he showed passion and energy in his paintings. Besides, he loved nature and painted all the beauty of nature.
【知识点】英语人物介绍写作、应用文写作
【点评】范文紧扣题目提示要点，条理清晰，语言流畅，准确传达了梵高的基本信息、艺术经历及喜欢他的原因，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】按照写作思路，先介绍梵高的基本信息：1853年生于荷兰，27岁决心成为画家并开始学画；再叙述艺术经历：1886年赴巴黎形成独特画风（色彩明亮、笔触粗短），1888-1889年创作《向日葵》，1889年创作《星月夜》；最后说明喜欢的原因：作品充满热情与活力，热爱自然并描绘自然之美，语言连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】My favourite artist is Vincent van Gogh. He was born in Holland in 1853. He made up his mind to be a painter at the age of 27 and started to learn painting. Van Gogh went to Paris in 1886. There, he experienced the bright colours of famous French painters. This was when Van Gogh developed his famous style—using short brushstrokes of thick paint and bright colours. From 1888 to 1889, he finished his famous work Sunflowers. Later in 1889, he created another great painting The Starry Night. His paintings are full of strong feelings and special beauty. Sadly, he died in 1890. I like Van Gogh because he showed passion and energy in his paintings. Besides, he loved nature and painted all the beauty of nature.
【知识点】英语人物介绍写作、应用文写作
【点评】范文紧扣题目提示要点，条理清晰，语言流畅，准确传达了梵高的基本信息、艺术经历及喜欢他的原因，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】0.7
