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七、书面表达。
假如你是七年级学生李华，你学校的英文校刊正在举行“My School Life”的主题征文活动。请你根据下面的思维导图写一篇短文投稿，介绍你的校园生活。
要求:1. 文中应包含所提示的信息，内容积极向上，可适当发挥，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 将题目补充完整；
3. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名与校名。
My School Life Is
My name is Li Hua. I'm a student of Class 1, Grade 7. I'm glad to tell you something about my school life.
假如你是七年级学生李华，你学校的英文校刊正在举行“My School Life”的主题征文活动。请你根据下面的思维导图写一篇短文投稿，介绍你的校园生活。
要求:1. 文中应包含所提示的信息，内容积极向上，可适当发挥，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 将题目补充完整；
3. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名与校名。
My School Life Is
Interesting
My name is Li Hua. I'm a student of Class 1, Grade 7. I'm glad to tell you something about my school life.
My home is close to the school, so I walk to school every day. In school, I mainly study Chinese, Maths, English, Music and so on. I like these subjects very much. I think they are very interesting.
After class, I usually play football and basketball with my classmates because I think they are good for our health.
Teachers and students are very friendly.
I like my school life very much.
答案
One possible version:
My School Life Is Interesting
My name is Li Hua. I'm a student of Class 1, Grade 7. I'm glad to tell you something about my school life.
My home is close to the school, so I walk to school every day. In school, I mainly study Chinese, Maths, English, Music and so on. I like these subjects very much. I think they are very interesting. After class, I usually play football and basketball with my classmates because I think they are good for our health. Teachers and students are very friendly. I like my school life very much.
My School Life Is Interesting
My name is Li Hua. I'm a student of Class 1, Grade 7. I'm glad to tell you something about my school life.
My home is close to the school, so I walk to school every day. In school, I mainly study Chinese, Maths, English, Music and so on. I like these subjects very much. I think they are very interesting. After class, I usually play football and basketball with my classmates because I think they are good for our health. Teachers and students are very friendly. I like my school life very much.
解析
【分析】
首先需根据思维导图的五个核心要点（上学方式、所学科目、老师与同学、课后活动、个人感受）补充完整题目，结合已给的自我介绍开头，依次将各要点融入短文，确保内容积极向上、条理清晰、行文连贯，满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 补充题目：结合积极的感受类词汇，如“Interesting”，完善题目“My School Life Is Interesting”；
2. 依次写作：
上学方式：说明家离学校近，步行上学；
所学科目：列举语文、数学、英语、音乐等，表达对科目的喜爱；
课后活动：写与同学进行足球、篮球等运动，说明对健康有益；
老师与同学：描述他们很友好；
个人感受：表达喜欢校园生活，收束全文。
【答案】
My School Life Is Interesting
My name is Li Hua. I'm a student of Class 1, Grade 7. I'm glad to tell you something about my school life.
My home is close to the school, so I walk to school every day. In school, I mainly study Chinese, Maths, English, Music and so on. I like these subjects very much. I think they are very interesting. After class, I usually play football and basketball with my classmates because I think they are good for our health. Teachers and students are very friendly. I like my school life very much.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、校园话题写作、思维导图运用
【点评】
本文紧扣思维导图所有要点，内容积极向上，结构清晰，语言连贯，符合七年级学生写作要求，满足征文活动各项标准。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先需根据思维导图的五个核心要点（上学方式、所学科目、老师与同学、课后活动、个人感受）补充完整题目，结合已给的自我介绍开头，依次将各要点融入短文，确保内容积极向上、条理清晰、行文连贯，满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 补充题目：结合积极的感受类词汇，如“Interesting”，完善题目“My School Life Is Interesting”；
2. 依次写作：
上学方式：说明家离学校近，步行上学；
所学科目：列举语文、数学、英语、音乐等，表达对科目的喜爱；
课后活动：写与同学进行足球、篮球等运动，说明对健康有益；
老师与同学：描述他们很友好；
个人感受：表达喜欢校园生活，收束全文。
【答案】
My School Life Is Interesting
My name is Li Hua. I'm a student of Class 1, Grade 7. I'm glad to tell you something about my school life.
My home is close to the school, so I walk to school every day. In school, I mainly study Chinese, Maths, English, Music and so on. I like these subjects very much. I think they are very interesting. After class, I usually play football and basketball with my classmates because I think they are good for our health. Teachers and students are very friendly. I like my school life very much.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、校园话题写作、思维导图运用
【点评】
本文紧扣思维导图所有要点，内容积极向上，结构清晰，语言连贯，符合七年级学生写作要求，满足征文活动各项标准。
【难度系数】
0.7
