五、学以致用·主题写作实战演练
[2024 徐州一模改编]亲爱的同学,你即将离开学习生活了三年的母校,请想象数日后迎着夕阳回首的那个瞬间,你一定思绪万千。请以“Goodbye, my school”为题写一篇英语短文,表达自己对于在校学习知识、学做人的收获之悦,对于老师们辛勤付出的感激之情,对于一起成长的伙伴们的不舍和对美好未来的憧憬。
注意:
1. 词数 80—100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 短文需包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
3. 短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇:knowledge, thankful, challenge
Goodbye, my school
How time flies! We have spent three years here. I am sad that I have to say goodbye to you, my school.

写作思路
主题 人与自我——学校生活与个人感受
语篇类型 记叙文
时态：以现在完成时、一般时态和将来时为主
人称：以第一人称为主
要点 1.表达自己这三年的收获之悦
2.表达对老师辛勤付出的感激之情
3.表达对伙伴的不舍和对美好未来的憧憬

Goodbye, my school
How time flies! We have spent three years here. I am sad that I have to say goodbye to you, my school.
I have got lots of knowledge here. Moreover, I know how to behave properly. I am thankful to my teachers. You have helped me so much that I often consider all of you as my parents. Whenever I am in trouble, you are always there. Goodbye, my friends. I will not only miss all of you but also remember the wonderful time with you forever. Don’t forget to keep in touch with each other.
Goodbye, my school! Hopefully, you will get better and better. I will face the future challenges bravely, and I hope I will have a brighter future.

【分析】首先明确本次写作的核心要求：主题为“人与自我——学校生活与个人感受”，语篇类型是记叙文，时态以现在完成时、一般将来时为主，人称用第一人称；必须包含三个要点：①表达三年在校的收获（知识、学做人）；②表达对老师的感激；③表达对伙伴的不舍与对未来的憧憬；词数控制在80-100，开头已给出，不得出现真实姓名和校名，可适当发挥。思考时需承接开头句，按“收获→谢师→惜友→展望”的逻辑展开，确保时态匹配内容（过去到现在的用现在完成时，未来的用一般将来时），情感连贯自然。
【解析】1. 承接开头句，用现在完成时阐述三年收获：“I have got lots of knowledge here. Moreover, I know how to behave properly.” 2. 表达对老师的感激，用现在完成时体现老师的帮助：“I am thankful to my teachers. You have helped me so much that I often consider all of you as my parents. Whenever I am in trouble, you are always there.” 3. 表达对伙伴的不舍，加入约定保持联系：“Goodbye, my friends. I will not only miss all of you but also remember the wonderful time with you forever. Don’t forget to keep in touch with each other.” 4. 展望未来，用一般将来时表达对未来的决心和对学校的祝福：“Goodbye, my school! Hopefully, you will get better and better. I will face the future challenges bravely, and I hope I will have a brighter future.” 整体符合词数要求，要点齐全，时态正确。
【答案】Goodbye, my school
How time flies! We have spent three years here. I am sad that I have to say goodbye to you, my school.
I have got lots of knowledge here. Moreover, I know how to behave properly. I am thankful to my teachers. You have helped me so much that I often consider all of you as my parents. Whenever I am in trouble, you are always there. Goodbye, my friends. I will not only miss all of you but also remember the wonderful time with you forever. Don’t forget to keep in touch with each other.
Goodbye, my school! Hopefully, you will get better and better. I will face the future challenges bravely, and I hope I will have a brighter future.

【知识点】英语记叙文写作、现在完成时与一般将来时运用、情感表达
【点评】本次写作紧扣主题，涵盖所有要求要点，时态运用准确规范，人称统一为第一人称，情感真挚自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合考试要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.5