四、书面表达。
校英文报正在开展以“My Role in
the Family”为主题的征文活动。请你结
合自身经历,写一篇短文投稿,回顾你在
家务劳动和家庭沟通两方面的表现,并
阐述改进计划。不少于80词,开头已给
出,不计入总词数。
There is a famous saying, "East or
west, home is best."
校英文报正在开展以“My Role in
the Family”为主题的征文活动。请你结
合自身经历,写一篇短文投稿,回顾你在
家务劳动和家庭沟通两方面的表现,并
阐述改进计划。不少于80词,开头已给
出,不计入总词数。
There is a famous saying, "East or
west, home is best."
答案
It makes me think about my role in the family.
I should do more for my family. At home, I am sometimes lazy. I often leave my room in a mess and seldom help with housework. Also, when my parents talk to me, I feel bored easily and don't listen carefully.
However, I have realized my mistakes. From now on, I will clean my room and help wash the dishes. I will listen to my parents and share my feelings with them. I hope I can make my home a warmer place.
I should do more for my family. At home, I am sometimes lazy. I often leave my room in a mess and seldom help with housework. Also, when my parents talk to me, I feel bored easily and don't listen carefully.
However, I have realized my mistakes. From now on, I will clean my room and help wash the dishes. I will listen to my parents and share my feelings with them. I hope I can make my home a warmer place.
解析
【分析】本题是英语书面表达题,主题为“My Role in the Family”,要求结合自身经历,从家务劳动、家庭沟通两方面阐述表现,并说明改进计划,开头已给出。解题思路:首先承接开头的名言,引出对自身家庭角色的思考;接着具体描述当前在做家务和与父母沟通上的不足;然后提出明确的改进措施;最后升华主题,表达让家更温暖的愿望,同时确保词数不少于80词。
【解析】写作需遵循“引入-现状反思-改进计划-总结”的结构:1. 承接开头的名言,自然过渡到对家庭角色的思考;2. 分两点写现有不足:家务上的懈怠(房间杂乱、很少帮忙做家务),沟通上的问题(对父母谈话易不耐烦、不认真倾听);3. 提出具体改进方案:家务方面主动打扫房间、帮忙洗碗,沟通方面认真倾听父母、分享自身感受;4. 结尾表达对家庭的美好期望,保证内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【答案】It makes me think about my role in the family.
I should do more for my family. At home, I am sometimes lazy. I often leave my room in a mess and seldom help with housework. Also, when my parents talk to me, I feel bored easily and don't listen carefully.
However, I have realized my mistakes. From now on, I will clean my room and help wash the dishes. I will listen to my parents and share my feelings with them. I hope I can make my home a warmer place.
【知识点】英语应用文写作,家庭主题英语表达,英语写作结构
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题,结构清晰,先反思自身不足再提出具体改进计划,内容真实具体,语言通顺,符合初中英语书面表达的要求,适合投稿。
【难度系数】0.4
【解析】写作需遵循“引入-现状反思-改进计划-总结”的结构:1. 承接开头的名言,自然过渡到对家庭角色的思考;2. 分两点写现有不足:家务上的懈怠(房间杂乱、很少帮忙做家务),沟通上的问题(对父母谈话易不耐烦、不认真倾听);3. 提出具体改进方案:家务方面主动打扫房间、帮忙洗碗,沟通方面认真倾听父母、分享自身感受;4. 结尾表达对家庭的美好期望,保证内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【答案】It makes me think about my role in the family.
I should do more for my family. At home, I am sometimes lazy. I often leave my room in a mess and seldom help with housework. Also, when my parents talk to me, I feel bored easily and don't listen carefully.
However, I have realized my mistakes. From now on, I will clean my room and help wash the dishes. I will listen to my parents and share my feelings with them. I hope I can make my home a warmer place.
【知识点】英语应用文写作,家庭主题英语表达,英语写作结构
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题,结构清晰,先反思自身不足再提出具体改进计划,内容真实具体,语言通顺,符合初中英语书面表达的要求,适合投稿。
【难度系数】0.4
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