单元写作训练
写作赏析
【写作主题】本单元的话题是“当代青少年”，要求学生学会运用本单元所学知识写一篇介绍青少年人物的短文。
【范文赏析】
There are many great young athletes in China today. What makes them so popular isn’t just their gold medals but their hard work. They are true role models for us teenagers.（介绍当代优秀青少年）
They show us what determination and team spirit really mean. Even when they face big challenges, they never give up. They stay positive, focus on their goals and find happiness in their journey.（说明当代优秀青少年拥有的良好品质）
As young people growing up in China today, we can learn a lot from them. It’s not only about loving sports, but also about having a strong heart and a positive attitude towards life. Like them, we should face difficulties bravely, work hard in school, help our friends, and always try to do our best. By following their example, we can also build good character and contribute to our country’s future.（介绍如何成为优秀青少年）
☑体裁： ☑人称： ☑时态：
☑佳词佳句积累：
1. 榜样；楷模 2. 团队精神
3. 面对挑战 4. 放弃
5. 专注于 6. 成长
7. 积极的态度 8. 为……做贡献
9. 他们之所以如此受欢迎，不仅仅是因为金牌，更是因为他们付出的努力。

10. 这不仅关乎热爱运动，还关乎拥有坚强的内心和积极的生活态度。

☑写作提升：使用所给短语并参考其在范文中的句子，根据中文提示翻译句子。
1. 当青少年面对挑战时，他们会学到重要的人生经验，成长得也更快。（face challenge）

2. 积极的态度能让青少年变得快乐，并且对他人友好。（positive attitude）

体裁：说明文 人称：第一人称、第三人称
时态：一般现在时
佳词佳句积累：
1. role model
2. team spirit
3. face challenge
4. give up
5. focus on
6. grow up
7. positive attitude
8. contribute to
9. What makes them so popular isn't just their gold medals but their hard work.
10. It's not only about loving sports, but also about having a strong heart and a positive attitude towards life.
写作提升：
1. When teenagers face challenges, they learn important life lessons and grow up faster.
2. A positive attitude can make teenagers happy and friendly to others.

【分析】
本题为英语单元写作赏析题，需结合给定范文完成体裁、人称、时态的判断，积累对应英文短语，再运用指定短语完成汉译英。解题思路：1. 分析范文的文体特征确定体裁；2. 梳理范文使用的人称代词明确人称；3. 观察范文动词时态确定时态；4. 匹配中文释义对应的英文固定短语；5. 翻译句子时紧扣指定短语，注意语法、单复数等细节。
【解析】
1. 体裁：范文围绕“当代青少年”介绍优秀青少年的特点、品质及启示，属于说明性文体，故为说明文；
2. 人称：范文中既有指代青少年的第三人称“they”，也有指代作者及读者的第一人称“we”，故为第一人称、第三人称；
3. 时态：范文全文动词均为一般现在时（如is、show、learn等），故为一般现在时；
4. 佳词佳句积累：根据中文释义匹配范文中对应的固定英文短语；
5. 写作提升翻译：① 使用指定短语“face challenge”，“challenge”用复数表泛指，“人生经验”译为“life lessons”，故句子为When teenagers face challenges, they learn important life lessons and grow up faster；② 使用指定短语“positive attitude”，“对他人友好”译为“friendly to others”，故句子为A positive attitude can make teenagers happy and friendly to others。
【答案】
体裁：说明文 人称：第一人称、第三人称
时态：一般现在时
佳词佳句积累：
1. role model
2. team spirit
3. face challenge
4. give up
5. focus on
6. grow up
7. positive attitude
8. contribute to
9. What makes them so popular isn't just their gold medals but their hard work.
10. It's not only about loving sports, but also about having a strong heart and a positive attitude towards life.
写作提升：
1. When teenagers face challenges, they learn important life lessons and grow up faster.
2. A positive attitude can make teenagers happy and friendly to others.
【知识点】
英语写作赏析、英语短语积累、汉译英
【点评】
本题是单元写作的配套练习，旨在帮助学生巩固“当代青少年”话题的相关表达，掌握介绍人物类短文的写作要素，贴合单元学习目标，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6