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梁启超先生曾经告诉我们“少年强则国强”。为了充分发挥优秀少年的榜样和引领作用，学校英语杂志社正开展“最美少年”的评选活动。假设你是李华，请你写一封推荐信推选同学Millie参加本次评选，要点如下：
（1）介绍Millie的优秀品质；
（2）介绍Millie的具体事迹；
（3）介绍Millie带来的积极影响。
注意：（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】（以下
部分仅供参考，希望同学们可以多开动脑筋、发散思维）
【实战演练】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to recommend Millie in our class as “The Most Beautiful Youth” in our school.
I think Millie is the most suitable person for this award. Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作评价】（评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页）
（1）介绍Millie的优秀品质；
（2）介绍Millie的具体事迹；
（3）介绍Millie带来的积极影响。
注意：（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】（以下
部分仅供参考，希望同学们可以多开动脑筋、发散思维）【实战演练】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to recommend Millie in our class as “The Most Beautiful Youth” in our school.
In my opinion, she is the best choice for this honour.
First of all, Millie has many excellent qualities. On the one hand, she is kind and warm-hearted to others. She always treats everyone with respect and patience. On the other hand, she is responsible and hard-working in doing things.
Meanwhile, she always shows good qualities in daily small acts. She volunteers to help the elderly in the community every Sunday.
She also helps classmates with their studies. Last week, she spent two afternoons helping Tom with his maths problems.
Millie has a positive influence on us. She sets a good example for all of us.
Because of her, more and more classmates have begun to take part in volunteer activities.
I think Millie is the most suitable person for this award. Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作评价】（评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页）
答案
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to recommend Millie in our class as "The Most Beautiful Youth" in our school. In my opinion, she is the best choice for this honour.
First of all, Millie has many excellent qualities. On the one hand, she is kind and warm-hearted to others. She always treats everyone with respect and patience. On the other hand, she is responsible and hard-working in doing things.
Meanwhile, she always shows good qualities in daily small acts. She volunteers to help the elderly in the community every Sunday. She also helps classmates with their studies. Last week, she spent two afternoons helping Tom with his maths problems.
Millie has a positive influence on us. She sets a good example for all of us. Because of her, more and more classmates have begun to take part in volunteer activities.
I think Millie is the most suitable person for this award. Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to recommend Millie in our class as "The Most Beautiful Youth" in our school. In my opinion, she is the best choice for this honour.
First of all, Millie has many excellent qualities. On the one hand, she is kind and warm-hearted to others. She always treats everyone with respect and patience. On the other hand, she is responsible and hard-working in doing things.
Meanwhile, she always shows good qualities in daily small acts. She volunteers to help the elderly in the community every Sunday. She also helps classmates with their studies. Last week, she spent two afternoons helping Tom with his maths problems.
Millie has a positive influence on us. She sets a good example for all of us. Because of her, more and more classmates have begun to take part in volunteer activities.
I think Millie is the most suitable person for this award. Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
写这封推荐信需紧扣题目要求的三个核心要点：优秀品质、具体事迹、积极影响。首先承接已给开头，先介绍Millie的优秀品质；接着列举具体的日常事迹支撑品质；最后说明她带来的积极影响，同时要注意语句连贯、词数符合要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
按照推荐信的写作逻辑，先承接开头点明推荐意向，再分三部分展开：1. 阐述Millie的优秀品质（善良热心、有责任心）；2. 列举具体事迹（每周日去社区帮助老人、帮同学补习数学）；3. 说明积极影响（带动更多同学参与志愿活动），最后收尾呼应开头，完成推荐信。
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to recommend Millie in our class as "The Most Beautiful Youth" in our school. In my opinion, she is the best choice for this honour.
First of all, Millie has many excellent qualities. On the one hand, she is kind and warm-hearted to others. She always treats everyone with respect and patience. On the other hand, she is responsible and hard-working in doing things.
Meanwhile, she always shows good qualities in daily small acts. She volunteers to help the elderly in the community every Sunday. She also helps classmates with their studies. Last week, she spent two afternoons helping Tom with his maths problems.
Millie has a positive influence on us. She sets a good example for all of us. Because of her, more and more classmates have begun to take part in volunteer activities.
I think Millie is the most suitable person for this award. Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语语句连贯、英语词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“最美少年”评选主题，要点齐全，结构清晰，事例具体，语言连贯，符合推荐信的写作要求，充分展现了推荐理由。
【难度系数】
0.5
写这封推荐信需紧扣题目要求的三个核心要点：优秀品质、具体事迹、积极影响。首先承接已给开头，先介绍Millie的优秀品质；接着列举具体的日常事迹支撑品质；最后说明她带来的积极影响，同时要注意语句连贯、词数符合要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
按照推荐信的写作逻辑，先承接开头点明推荐意向，再分三部分展开：1. 阐述Millie的优秀品质（善良热心、有责任心）；2. 列举具体事迹（每周日去社区帮助老人、帮同学补习数学）；3. 说明积极影响（带动更多同学参与志愿活动），最后收尾呼应开头，完成推荐信。
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to recommend Millie in our class as "The Most Beautiful Youth" in our school. In my opinion, she is the best choice for this honour.
First of all, Millie has many excellent qualities. On the one hand, she is kind and warm-hearted to others. She always treats everyone with respect and patience. On the other hand, she is responsible and hard-working in doing things.
Meanwhile, she always shows good qualities in daily small acts. She volunteers to help the elderly in the community every Sunday. She also helps classmates with their studies. Last week, she spent two afternoons helping Tom with his maths problems.
Millie has a positive influence on us. She sets a good example for all of us. Because of her, more and more classmates have begun to take part in volunteer activities.
I think Millie is the most suitable person for this award. Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语语句连贯、英语词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“最美少年”评选主题，要点齐全，结构清晰，事例具体，语言连贯，符合推荐信的写作要求，充分展现了推荐理由。
【难度系数】
0.5
