今年 5 月第五届“中国好家风”全国启动仪式在北京隆重举行。传承优秀家风是中华民族家国情怀的重要体现,为响应号召,你校校报英语专栏将举办“孝敬长辈,从我做起”的主题征文活动。请根据以下的结构图提示,结合自己的生活,写一篇不少于 80 词的短文,向该专栏投稿。

注意:
1. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文章应包含所给要点提示,可适当发挥;
3. 文章语句通顺,行文连贯;
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇:virtue (n. 美德) accompany (v. 陪伴) raise (v. 养育) educate (v. 教育)
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know,respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty.
注意:
1. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文章应包含所给要点提示,可适当发挥;
3. 文章语句通顺,行文连贯;
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇:virtue (n. 美德) accompany (v. 陪伴) raise (v. 养育) educate (v. 教育)
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know,respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty.
Growing up, I've seen my grandparents' selfless love and dedication to our family. They helped to look after me and raise me so that my parents could focus on their work. Therefore, we should love and respect our elders. We should also spend time staying with them.
To achieve this, we can help our elders with their chores. Spending time communicating with our elders is important so that they don't feel lonely. It's also necessary to take them to do exercise, such as walking in the park, to keep them healthy.
In conclusion, as everyone will grow old one day, it's important to take action now.
To achieve this, we can help our elders with their chores. Spending time communicating with our elders is important so that they don't feel lonely. It's also necessary to take them to do exercise, such as walking in the park, to keep them healthy.
In conclusion, as everyone will grow old one day, it's important to take action now.
答案
One possible version:
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty. Growing up, I've seen my grandparents' selfless love and dedication to our family. They helped to look after me and raise me so that my parents could focus on their work. Therefore, we should love and respect our elders. We should also spend time staying with them.
To achieve this, we can help our elders with their chores. Spending time communicating with our elders is important so that they don't feel lonely. It's also necessary to take them to do exercise, such as walking in the park, to keep them healthy.
In conclusion, as everyone will grow old one day, it's important to take action now.
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty. Growing up, I've seen my grandparents' selfless love and dedication to our family. They helped to look after me and raise me so that my parents could focus on their work. Therefore, we should love and respect our elders. We should also spend time staying with them.
To achieve this, we can help our elders with their chores. Spending time communicating with our elders is important so that they don't feel lonely. It's also necessary to take them to do exercise, such as walking in the park, to keep them healthy.
In conclusion, as everyone will grow old one day, it's important to take action now.
解析
【解析】
本题要求以“孝敬长辈,从我做起”为主题写英语征文,需围绕结构图的“Why(原因)”和“How(做法)”展开:先阐述长辈对我们的养育、陪伴与关爱,说明孝敬长辈的原因;再列举具体的孝敬行动,如分担家务、陪伴交流、关心健康等;最后总结升华,呼应主题。写作时需结合提示词汇,保证行文连贯,满足字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty. Growing up, I've seen my grandparents' selfless love and dedication to our family. They helped to look after me and raise me so that my parents could focus on their work. Therefore, we should love and respect our elders. We should also spend time staying with them.
To achieve this, we can help our elders with their chores. Spending time communicating with our elders is important so that they don't feel lonely. It's also necessary to take them to do exercise, such as walking in the park, to keep them healthy.
In conclusion, as everyone will grow old one day, it's important to take action now.
【知识点】
英语征文写作、孝道主题表达、情景英语写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“孝敬长辈”的主题,严格按照给定结构展开,清晰阐述了孝敬长辈的原因与具体做法,内容充实,行文连贯,合理运用了提示词汇,符合征文的写作要求,是一篇规范的主题英语作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“孝敬长辈,从我做起”为主题写英语征文,需围绕结构图的“Why(原因)”和“How(做法)”展开:先阐述长辈对我们的养育、陪伴与关爱,说明孝敬长辈的原因;再列举具体的孝敬行动,如分担家务、陪伴交流、关心健康等;最后总结升华,呼应主题。写作时需结合提示词汇,保证行文连贯,满足字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty. Growing up, I've seen my grandparents' selfless love and dedication to our family. They helped to look after me and raise me so that my parents could focus on their work. Therefore, we should love and respect our elders. We should also spend time staying with them.
To achieve this, we can help our elders with their chores. Spending time communicating with our elders is important so that they don't feel lonely. It's also necessary to take them to do exercise, such as walking in the park, to keep them healthy.
In conclusion, as everyone will grow old one day, it's important to take action now.
【知识点】
英语征文写作、孝道主题表达、情景英语写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“孝敬长辈”的主题,严格按照给定结构展开,清晰阐述了孝敬长辈的原因与具体做法,内容充实,行文连贯,合理运用了提示词汇,符合征文的写作要求,是一篇规范的主题英语作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
学校英文校刊发起了主题为“What Does Music Bring to Me?”的征文。你和同学就此进行了讨论。请综合下图所示的笔记内容,并作适当拓展,写一篇短文投稿。
写作要求:
1. 80 词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。

What Does Music Bring to Me?
Music is like a key,which opens a door to the world for me.
写作要求:
1. 80 词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
What Does Music Bring to Me?
Music is like a key,which opens a door to the world for me.
Music brings me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life's challenges. Music helps me build a good relationship. When I was young, I used to be shy. As I took up playing the guitar to deal with my shyness, I made lots of friends. Besides, music opens my eyes. Through music, I can broaden my horizons, sharpen my mind, and deepen my understanding.
Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. It makes me remember the love and care my teachers and friends have given me. It tells me the best things in life are free.
Overall, music enriches my life, making it more meaningful and fulfilling. I hope all of us will value music and make it a part of our life.
Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. It makes me remember the love and care my teachers and friends have given me. It tells me the best things in life are free.
Overall, music enriches my life, making it more meaningful and fulfilling. I hope all of us will value music and make it a part of our life.
答案
One possible version:
What Does Music Bring to Me?
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me. Music brings me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life's challenges. Music helps me build a good relationship. When I was young, I used to be shy. As I took up playing the guitar to deal with my shyness, I made lots of friends. Besides, music opens my eyes. Through music, I can broaden my horizons, sharpen my mind, and deepen my understanding.
Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. It makes me remember the love and care my teachers and friends have given me. It tells me the best things in life are free.
Overall, music enriches my life, making it more meaningful and fulfilling. I hope all of us will value music and make it a part of our life.
What Does Music Bring to Me?
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me. Music brings me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life's challenges. Music helps me build a good relationship. When I was young, I used to be shy. As I took up playing the guitar to deal with my shyness, I made lots of friends. Besides, music opens my eyes. Through music, I can broaden my horizons, sharpen my mind, and deepen my understanding.
Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. It makes me remember the love and care my teachers and friends have given me. It tells me the best things in life are free.
Overall, music enriches my life, making it more meaningful and fulfilling. I hope all of us will value music and make it a part of our life.
解析
【解析】
首先承接给定开头,结合图示要点展开:先阐述音乐在困境中带来希望与力量,接着通过自身学吉他交友的例子说明音乐助力建立良好人际关系,再说明音乐能开阔眼界,之后拓展音乐唤起美好回忆的内容,最后总结音乐对生活的意义,全文紧扣主题,符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
What Does Music Bring to Me?
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me. Music brings me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life's challenges. Music helps me build a good relationship. When I was young, I used to be shy. As I took up playing the guitar to deal with my shyness, I made lots of friends. Besides, music opens my eyes. Through music, I can broaden my horizons, sharpen my mind, and deepen my understanding.
Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. It makes me remember the love and care my teachers and friends have given me. It tells me the best things in life are free.
Overall, music enriches my life, making it more meaningful and fulfilling. I hope all of us will value music and make it a part of our life.
【知识点】
英语征文写作、话题类英语写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,涵盖图示所有要点并适当拓展,内容连贯完整,语言表达流畅自然,用词准确恰当,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的话题类英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先承接给定开头,结合图示要点展开:先阐述音乐在困境中带来希望与力量,接着通过自身学吉他交友的例子说明音乐助力建立良好人际关系,再说明音乐能开阔眼界,之后拓展音乐唤起美好回忆的内容,最后总结音乐对生活的意义,全文紧扣主题,符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
What Does Music Bring to Me?
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me. Music brings me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life's challenges. Music helps me build a good relationship. When I was young, I used to be shy. As I took up playing the guitar to deal with my shyness, I made lots of friends. Besides, music opens my eyes. Through music, I can broaden my horizons, sharpen my mind, and deepen my understanding.
Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. It makes me remember the love and care my teachers and friends have given me. It tells me the best things in life are free.
Overall, music enriches my life, making it more meaningful and fulfilling. I hope all of us will value music and make it a part of our life.
【知识点】
英语征文写作、话题类英语写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,涵盖图示所有要点并适当拓展,内容连贯完整,语言表达流畅自然,用词准确恰当,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的话题类英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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