六、书面表达(满分 20 分)
66. 2025 年春季学期起,我国多地中小学生将课间休息时间延长至 15 分钟,让学生有更多时间走出教室,走向户外,走进阳光。在课间"快乐一刻"期间,你校开展了形式多样、内容丰富的体育活动。
请以"The 15-minute Break"为题,结合自身谈谈活动的变化,并阐述延长休息时间的目的、体育活动形式以及带来的益处,向校体育栏目组投稿。
注意:
1. 必须包括所有要点,并作适当发挥;
2. 句子及篇章表述准确、连贯,书写规范;
3. 词数不少于 90,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其他任何个人相关信息。
The 15-minute Break
Our school has made a great change in the inter-class break.
In a word, the 15-minute inter-class break makes our school life more colourful and meaningful. We can really enjoy the break!
66. 2025 年春季学期起,我国多地中小学生将课间休息时间延长至 15 分钟,让学生有更多时间走出教室,走向户外,走进阳光。在课间"快乐一刻"期间,你校开展了形式多样、内容丰富的体育活动。
请以"The 15-minute Break"为题,结合自身谈谈活动的变化,并阐述延长休息时间的目的、体育活动形式以及带来的益处,向校体育栏目组投稿。
注意:
1. 必须包括所有要点,并作适当发挥;
2. 句子及篇章表述准确、连贯,书写规范;
3. 词数不少于 90,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其他任何个人相关信息。
The 15-minute Break
Our school has made a great change in the inter-class break.
In a word, the 15-minute inter-class break makes our school life more colourful and meaningful. We can really enjoy the break!
答案
六、书面表达
66. 参考范文
The 15-minute Break
Our school has made a great change in the inter-class break.
In the past, we often stayed in the classroom during the short breaks. But now, with the 15-minute break, we have more time to go outside and enjoy sports activities. The longer break has a clear purpose: to help us relax, stay healthy, and study better afterwards.
Our school now offers many fun sports for us. You can see smiles and hear laughter everywhere. These activities bring us many benefits. We feel more energetic and happier. Our eyes get a rest from books, and our bodies get exercise. It also helps us make more friends.
In a word, the 15-minute inter-class break makes our school life more colourful and meaningful. We can really enjoy the break!
解析:[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,引出主题;
第二步,根据题干的要点,阐述延长休息时间的目的、体育活动形式以及带来的益处;
第三步,肯定课间休息时间延长的意义,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①in the past 在过去
②make friends 交朋友
[高分句型]
It also helps us make more friends. (省略 to 的不定式作宾补)
66. 参考范文
The 15-minute Break
Our school has made a great change in the inter-class break.
In the past, we often stayed in the classroom during the short breaks. But now, with the 15-minute break, we have more time to go outside and enjoy sports activities. The longer break has a clear purpose: to help us relax, stay healthy, and study better afterwards.
Our school now offers many fun sports for us. You can see smiles and hear laughter everywhere. These activities bring us many benefits. We feel more energetic and happier. Our eyes get a rest from books, and our bodies get exercise. It also helps us make more friends.
In a word, the 15-minute inter-class break makes our school life more colourful and meaningful. We can really enjoy the break!
解析:[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,引出主题;
第二步,根据题干的要点,阐述延长休息时间的目的、体育活动形式以及带来的益处;
第三步,肯定课间休息时间延长的意义,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①in the past 在过去
②make friends 交朋友
[高分句型]
It also helps us make more friends. (省略 to 的不定式作宾补)
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