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我校英语文化节主题为 A Teen Role Model in My Heart，初三年级开展英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿介绍你心目中的当代青少年榜样。
要点提示:1. 心目中榜样人物的简介(身份、年龄、特点)；
2. 他/她面临的困难及如何克服；
3. 他/她的成就或带来的影响；
4. 你钦佩/喜欢他/她的理由。
写作要求:1. 必须包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥，条理清晰；
2. 词数:80—100 词。
要点提示:1. 心目中榜样人物的简介(身份、年龄、特点)；
2. 他/她面临的困难及如何克服；
3. 他/她的成就或带来的影响；
4. 你钦佩/喜欢他/她的理由。
写作要求:1. 必须包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥，条理清晰；
2. 词数:80—100 词。
答案
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! Today I'd like to talk about my teen role model.
My role model is Lin Yue, a 16-year-old puppet performer with amazing creativity. When she first started learning puppetry, she was nervous to perform in front of viewers, and even worried her old-fashioned hobby would make her feel left out. Instead of giving up, she practised controlling the puppet's fingers for hours every day, turned fear into power, and learned from experienced educators. Her hard work finally paid off: she won the national traditional art competition and started a puppet club at school, inspiring more teenagers to love our culture.
I admire her because she proves that teenagers can carry on traditions with independence and courage. She shows us: as long as we keep trying, nothing is impossible!
That's all. Thank you!
Good morning, everyone! Today I'd like to talk about my teen role model.
My role model is Lin Yue, a 16-year-old puppet performer with amazing creativity. When she first started learning puppetry, she was nervous to perform in front of viewers, and even worried her old-fashioned hobby would make her feel left out. Instead of giving up, she practised controlling the puppet's fingers for hours every day, turned fear into power, and learned from experienced educators. Her hard work finally paid off: she won the national traditional art competition and started a puppet club at school, inspiring more teenagers to love our culture.
I admire her because she proves that teenagers can carry on traditions with independence and courage. She shows us: as long as we keep trying, nothing is impossible!
That's all. Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求围绕“当代青少年榜样”撰写演讲稿，需覆盖四个要点且符合格式、词数要求。解题思路：1. 选同龄青少年作为榜样，贴合“当代”定位；2. 按提示要点依次组织内容：先简介榜样身份、年龄、特点，再讲其面临的困难及克服方法，接着说明成就或影响，最后阐述钦佩理由；3. 补充演讲稿的问候与致谢格式，控制词数在80-100词，用简洁准确的英语表达。
【解析】
1. 确定榜样：选16岁木偶表演者林悦，符合“当代青少年”身份；2. 按要点展开：①简介：16岁，有创造力的木偶表演者；②困难：初期表演紧张、担心爱好不合群，克服方法：每日练习操控木偶、向老师请教；③成就：获全国传统艺术奖，创办学校木偶社团，影响同龄人；④钦佩理由：证明青少年可凭勇气传承传统；3. 补充演讲稿格式：开头问候、结尾致谢，调整语句流畅，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! Today I'd like to talk about my teen role model.
My role model is Lin Yue, a 16-year-old puppet performer with amazing creativity. When she first started learning puppetry, she was nervous to perform in front of viewers, and even worried her old-fashioned hobby would make her feel left out. Instead of giving up, she practised controlling the puppet's fingers for hours every day, turned fear into power, and learned from experienced educators. Her hard work finally paid off: she won the national traditional art competition and started a puppet club at school, inspiring more teenagers to love our culture.
I admire her because she proves that teenagers can carry on traditions with independence and courage. She shows us: as long as we keep trying, nothing is impossible!
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式英语作文、英语演讲格式
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，语言简洁地道，符合初中生英语水平，既表达了对榜样的敬佩，又传递了积极向上的价值观，是一篇优秀的演讲稿范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求围绕“当代青少年榜样”撰写演讲稿，需覆盖四个要点且符合格式、词数要求。解题思路：1. 选同龄青少年作为榜样，贴合“当代”定位；2. 按提示要点依次组织内容：先简介榜样身份、年龄、特点，再讲其面临的困难及克服方法，接着说明成就或影响，最后阐述钦佩理由；3. 补充演讲稿的问候与致谢格式，控制词数在80-100词，用简洁准确的英语表达。
【解析】
1. 确定榜样：选16岁木偶表演者林悦，符合“当代青少年”身份；2. 按要点展开：①简介：16岁，有创造力的木偶表演者；②困难：初期表演紧张、担心爱好不合群，克服方法：每日练习操控木偶、向老师请教；③成就：获全国传统艺术奖，创办学校木偶社团，影响同龄人；④钦佩理由：证明青少年可凭勇气传承传统；3. 补充演讲稿格式：开头问候、结尾致谢，调整语句流畅，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! Today I'd like to talk about my teen role model.
My role model is Lin Yue, a 16-year-old puppet performer with amazing creativity. When she first started learning puppetry, she was nervous to perform in front of viewers, and even worried her old-fashioned hobby would make her feel left out. Instead of giving up, she practised controlling the puppet's fingers for hours every day, turned fear into power, and learned from experienced educators. Her hard work finally paid off: she won the national traditional art competition and started a puppet club at school, inspiring more teenagers to love our culture.
I admire her because she proves that teenagers can carry on traditions with independence and courage. She shows us: as long as we keep trying, nothing is impossible!
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式英语作文、英语演讲格式
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，语言简洁地道，符合初中生英语水平，既表达了对榜样的敬佩，又传递了积极向上的价值观，是一篇优秀的演讲稿范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
