写作典范
你的笔友 Jack 很好奇你早上吃什么种类的早餐及其做法。你打算明天录制一个视频，并用英语详细介绍一下你将怎么做蛋炒饭，并表达感受。

注意:1. 根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2. 词数 80 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, Jack! I sometimes eat egg fried rice for breakfast.


【审题立意】
1. 审主题:介绍做蛋炒饭的过程
2. 审体裁:说明文
3. 审人称:第一人称
4. 审时态:一般现在时

【佳作欣赏】
Hello, Jack! I sometimes eat egg fried rice for breakfast. Here I will tell you how to make it.
First, go to the nearest supermarket to buy some vegetables and eggs. Second, cut up vegetables and put them on a plate. And then, break the eggs into a bowl and stir. Next, pour some oil into the pan. When it's hot, pour the eggs into it and cook for three minutes. After that, add some cooked rice and vegetables and cook for two more minutes. Finally, add some salt and mix them together.
Now it's ready and I can enjoy it! I think cooking is very simple and it can improve my life skills.

Here I will tell you how to make it.
First, I go to the nearby supermarket to buy some vegetables and eggs. Second, I cut up the vegetables, break the eggs and cook them for 3 minutes in hot oil. Then I add rice and vegetables to the pan to cook, and put a little salt in it. Finally, I put the dish on the plate and enjoy the tasty egg fried rice. I think cooking is easy and it can improve my life skills.

【分析】
首先承接给定开头，明确要介绍蛋炒饭的制作方法；接着按照制作的先后顺序（准备食材、处理食材、烹饪操作、调味装盘），用一般现在时、第一人称进行说明；最后表达对烹饪的感受，注意控制词数在80左右，符合题目要求。
【解析】
写作时，先引出制作方法：“Here I will tell you how to make it.”；然后分步骤描述：1. 准备食材：去附近超市买蔬菜和鸡蛋；2. 处理食材：切蔬菜、打鸡蛋；3. 烹饪：热油炒鸡蛋，加入米饭和蔬菜，加少许盐；4. 装盘享用；最后表达对烹饪的看法，确保时态为一般现在时，人称用第一人称，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Here I will tell you how to make it. First, I go to the nearby supermarket to buy some vegetables and eggs. Second, I cut up the vegetables, break the eggs and cook them for 3 minutes in hot oil. Then I add rice and vegetables to the pan to cook, and put a little salt in it. Finally, I put the dish on the plate and enjoy the tasty egg fried rice. I think cooking is easy and it can improve my life skills.
【知识点】
英语写作，步骤说明
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，清晰呈现蛋炒饭的制作流程，语言简洁规范，最后点明对烹饪的感悟，完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6