一 方法指导
描述某地的地方特征,可按“三步三要素法”写作。第一步,开头,引出地点;第二步,正文,介绍某地的相关内容,包括年龄、长度、历史特征三要素;第三步,结尾,表达对某地的情感。
二 素材积累

三 以读促写(阅读范文,补全思维导图,体悟写法)
The Great Wall of China is the longest wall in the world. It is more than twenty thousand kilometres long, about 7.8 metres high and 6 metres wide on average. The Great Wall was built more than two thousand years ago. It was very difficult to build such a great wall without any modern machines. Thousands of people died while they were building the wall. Have you ever been to the Great Wall? It is very famous in the world. Many foreigners come to visit it every year. They like it very much.

描述某地的地方特征,可按“三步三要素法”写作。第一步,开头,引出地点;第二步,正文,介绍某地的相关内容,包括年龄、长度、历史特征三要素;第三步,结尾,表达对某地的情感。
二 素材积累
三 以读促写(阅读范文,补全思维导图,体悟写法)
The Great Wall of China is the longest wall in the world. It is more than twenty thousand kilometres long, about 7.8 metres high and 6 metres wide on average. The Great Wall was built more than two thousand years ago. It was very difficult to build such a great wall without any modern machines. Thousands of people died while they were building the wall. Have you ever been to the Great Wall? It is very famous in the world. Many foreigners come to visit it every year. They like it very much.
答案
1. It is more than twenty thousand kilometres long.
2. It’s more than two thousand years old.
3. It’s very famous in the world.
2. It’s more than two thousand years old.
3. It’s very famous in the world.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:需结合“三步三要素法”(三要素为年龄、长度、历史特征),从范文中提取对应关键信息补全内容。第一步定位范文中关于长度的描述,第二步定位关于年龄(历史)的描述,第三步定位关于历史特征的描述,即可得到对应答案。
【解析】
根据范文内容提取关键信息:1. 长度:范文提到“The Great Wall is more than twenty thousand kilometres long”;2. 年龄(历史):范文提到“The Great Wall was built more than two thousand years ago”,即超过两千年历史;3. 历史特征:范文提到“It is very famous in the world”,对应其著名的历史特征。
【答案】
1. It is more than twenty thousand kilometres long.
2. It’s more than two thousand years old.
3. It’s very famous in the world.
【知识点】
英语阅读信息提取,写作方法应用
【点评】
本题考查学生对英语阅读文本关键信息的提取能力,结合给定写作方法梳理内容,属于基础读写结合题型,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求:需结合“三步三要素法”(三要素为年龄、长度、历史特征),从范文中提取对应关键信息补全内容。第一步定位范文中关于长度的描述,第二步定位关于年龄(历史)的描述,第三步定位关于历史特征的描述,即可得到对应答案。
【解析】
根据范文内容提取关键信息:1. 长度:范文提到“The Great Wall is more than twenty thousand kilometres long”;2. 年龄(历史):范文提到“The Great Wall was built more than two thousand years ago”,即超过两千年历史;3. 历史特征:范文提到“It is very famous in the world”,对应其著名的历史特征。
【答案】
1. It is more than twenty thousand kilometres long.
2. It’s more than two thousand years old.
3. It’s very famous in the world.
【知识点】
英语阅读信息提取,写作方法应用
【点评】
本题考查学生对英语阅读文本关键信息的提取能力,结合给定写作方法梳理内容,属于基础读写结合题型,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
四 小试身手(参照以上范文,自己动手写一写吧)
请根据以下导图内容提示,以“My Favourite Places of Interest”为题写一篇不少于50词的小短文。

My Favourite Places of Interest
请根据以下导图内容提示,以“My Favourite Places of Interest”为题写一篇不少于50词的小短文。
My Favourite Places of Interest
Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It’s more than two thousand years old. It lies in the south of Anhui Province.
The mountain is about 40 kilometers long and 30 kilometers wide. Every year thousands of people visit the Huangshan Mountain.
You can go there by train or by plane. While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds and unique rocks around you.
Mount Huangshan is so amazing. I like it very much.
答案
四范文: My Favourite Places of Interest
Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It’s more than two thousand years old. It lies in the south of Anhui Province. The mountain is about 40 kilometers long and 30 kilometers wide. Every year thousands of people visit the Huangshan Mountain. You can go there by train or by plane. While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds and unique rocks around you. Mount Huangshan is so amazing. I like it very much.
Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It’s more than two thousand years old. It lies in the south of Anhui Province. The mountain is about 40 kilometers long and 30 kilometers wide. Every year thousands of people visit the Huangshan Mountain. You can go there by train or by plane. While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds and unique rocks around you. Mount Huangshan is so amazing. I like it very much.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My Favourite Places of Interest”为题写短文,需结合思维导图的提示要点展开:围绕名胜的年龄、位置、长宽、外观、可看/可做的事、个人情感这几个维度组织内容。解题思路是:先选定熟悉的名胜(如黄山),对应思维导图各分支补充具体信息,再用通顺的英语语句串联,确保字数不少于50词,符合写作要求。
【解析】
1. 确定写作对象:选择中国著名名胜黄山(Mount Huangshan);
2. 对应思维导图要点补充细节:①年龄:more than two thousand years old;②位置:lies in the south of Anhui Province;③长宽:about 40 kilometers long and 30 kilometers wide;④外观:amazing;⑤可看/可做:enjoy the sea of clouds and unique rocks;⑥情感:like it very much;
3. 用合适的英语句型连接细节,形成连贯完整的短文,满足字数要求。
【答案】
My Favourite Places of Interest
Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It’s more than two thousand years old. It lies in the south of Anhui Province. The mountain is about 40 kilometers long and 30 kilometers wide. Every year thousands of people visit the Huangshan Mountain. You can go there by train or by plane. While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds and unique rocks around you. Mount Huangshan is so amazing. I like it very much.
【知识点】
英语写作、名胜介绍、思维导图应用
【点评】
本题结合思维导图提示进行英语写作,既考查学生对英语基础句型、词汇的运用能力,又引导学生学会整合信息围绕主题写作,是兼顾基础与能力的写作练习题。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“My Favourite Places of Interest”为题写短文,需结合思维导图的提示要点展开:围绕名胜的年龄、位置、长宽、外观、可看/可做的事、个人情感这几个维度组织内容。解题思路是:先选定熟悉的名胜(如黄山),对应思维导图各分支补充具体信息,再用通顺的英语语句串联,确保字数不少于50词,符合写作要求。
【解析】
1. 确定写作对象:选择中国著名名胜黄山(Mount Huangshan);
2. 对应思维导图要点补充细节:①年龄:more than two thousand years old;②位置:lies in the south of Anhui Province;③长宽:about 40 kilometers long and 30 kilometers wide;④外观:amazing;⑤可看/可做:enjoy the sea of clouds and unique rocks;⑥情感:like it very much;
3. 用合适的英语句型连接细节,形成连贯完整的短文,满足字数要求。
【答案】
My Favourite Places of Interest
Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It’s more than two thousand years old. It lies in the south of Anhui Province. The mountain is about 40 kilometers long and 30 kilometers wide. Every year thousands of people visit the Huangshan Mountain. You can go there by train or by plane. While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds and unique rocks around you. Mount Huangshan is so amazing. I like it very much.
【知识点】
英语写作、名胜介绍、思维导图应用
【点评】
本题结合思维导图提示进行英语写作,既考查学生对英语基础句型、词汇的运用能力,又引导学生学会整合信息围绕主题写作,是兼顾基础与能力的写作练习题。
【难度系数】
0.5
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