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Ⅳ. 书面表达(25 分)
28. [2024 浙江金华模拟]假设你是李辉, 你校英语报“Protect the Environment”专栏面向全校学生征集主题海报及宣传稿, 需要用英语向大家宣讲环保的意义及中学生应该怎样保护环境。请你根据以下海报提示, 以“Save the Earth: Let's Do Our Part!”为题, 用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。
要求：
(1)包括提示中所有的写作要点；
(2)条理清楚, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥；
(3)稿件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
(4)词数 80—100(题目和开头已给出, 不计入总词数)。
Save the Earth: Let's Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It's crying for our help now.
28. [2024 浙江金华模拟]假设你是李辉, 你校英语报“Protect the Environment”专栏面向全校学生征集主题海报及宣传稿, 需要用英语向大家宣讲环保的意义及中学生应该怎样保护环境。请你根据以下海报提示, 以“Save the Earth: Let's Do Our Part!”为题, 用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。
要求：
(1)包括提示中所有的写作要点；
(2)条理清楚, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥；
(3)稿件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
(4)词数 80—100(题目和开头已给出, 不计入总词数)。
Save the Earth: Let's Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It's crying for our help now.
As middle school students, we should make a difference and help save the earth! To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, growing more trees, and reducing pollution. We can also save animals and recycle whenever possible. We can also choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop pollution and make sure of always throwing trash in the proper bins. By doing these above, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves and generations to come.
答案
28.【参考范文】
Save the Earth: Let's Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It's crying for our help now. As middle school students, we should make a difference and help save the earth!
To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, growing more trees, and reducing pollution. We can also save animals and recycle whenever possible.
We can also choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop pollution and make sure of always throwing trash in the proper bins.
By doing these above, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves and generations to come.
Save the Earth: Let's Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It's crying for our help now. As middle school students, we should make a difference and help save the earth!
To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, growing more trees, and reducing pollution. We can also save animals and recycle whenever possible.
We can also choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop pollution and make sure of always throwing trash in the proper bins.
By doing these above, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves and generations to come.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务：以中学生身份为校英语报“Protect the Environment”专栏写宣传稿，主题为“Save the Earth: Let's Do Our Part!”，需覆盖海报中所有环保要点（节约用水、多种树、停止污染、拯救动物、回收利用、骑自行车出行、正确投放垃圾），开头已给出，词数80-100，行文连贯且无真实信息。解题思路：承接开头点明地球需要帮助，分点列举中学生可践行的环保行动（对应所有海报提示），最后总结行动的意义，确保要点全覆盖、语言符合中学生水平。
【解析】根据写作要求，将海报提示的环保措施转化为中学生可践行的英语表达，结构为：开头（已给）→ 列举具体环保行动（节约用水、多种树、减少污染、拯救动物、回收、骑车代开车、正确扔垃圾）→ 总结行动的作用，保证词数达标、行文连贯。
【答案】Save the Earth: Let's Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It's crying for our help now. As middle school students, we should make a difference and help save the earth!
To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, growing more trees, and reducing pollution. We can also save animals and recycle whenever possible.
We can also choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop pollution and make sure of always throwing trash in the proper bins.
By doing these above, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves and generations to come.
【知识点】英语书面表达、环保主题写作
【点评】本文紧扣环保主题，全面覆盖海报提示的所有要点，结构清晰，语言符合中学生表达水平，行文连贯，符合题目各项要求，有效传递了环保理念。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】根据写作要求，将海报提示的环保措施转化为中学生可践行的英语表达，结构为：开头（已给）→ 列举具体环保行动（节约用水、多种树、减少污染、拯救动物、回收、骑车代开车、正确扔垃圾）→ 总结行动的作用，保证词数达标、行文连贯。
【答案】Save the Earth: Let's Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It's crying for our help now. As middle school students, we should make a difference and help save the earth!
To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, growing more trees, and reducing pollution. We can also save animals and recycle whenever possible.
We can also choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop pollution and make sure of always throwing trash in the proper bins.
By doing these above, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves and generations to come.
【知识点】英语书面表达、环保主题写作
【点评】本文紧扣环保主题，全面覆盖海报提示的所有要点，结构清晰，语言符合中学生表达水平，行文连贯，符合题目各项要求，有效传递了环保理念。
【难度系数】0.6
