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Ⅳ.书面表达
假如上周六你们班组织了一次郊游，你将在英语课上与大家分享这次旅行经历。请以“Our Class Trip”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要点:1. Where did you go? 2. How was the weather? 3. What did you do? 4. How did you feel?
要求:1. 短文应包括所有写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥;2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;3. 词数70左右。
Our Class Trip
假如上周六你们班组织了一次郊游，你将在英语课上与大家分享这次旅行经历。请以“Our Class Trip”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要点:1. Where did you go? 2. How was the weather? 3. What did you do? 4. How did you feel?
要求:1. 短文应包括所有写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥;2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;3. 词数70左右。
Our Class Trip
We went on a class trip last Saturday. It was sunny and warm. We visited a farm in the countryside and it was great fun.
After we arrived at the farm, the farmer showed us around the farm. And we learned a lot about farming. We also fed the hens and sheep.
At noon, we went fishing by the river near the farm. Meanwhile, some of my classmates played games happily in the sunshine.
We also took quite a lot of photos. They were very nice.
What a great time we had there!
All in all, it was a great trip.
答案
Ⅳ. One possible version:
Our Class Trip
We went on a class trip last Saturday. It was sunny and warm. We visited a farm in the countryside and it was great fun.
After we arrived at the farm, the farmer showed us around the farm. And we learned a lot about farming. We also fed the hens and sheep. At noon, we went fishing by the river near the farm. Meanwhile, some of my classmates played games happily in the sunshine. We also took quite a lot of photos. They were very nice. What a great time we had there!
All in all, it was a great trip.
Our Class Trip
We went on a class trip last Saturday. It was sunny and warm. We visited a farm in the countryside and it was great fun.
After we arrived at the farm, the farmer showed us around the farm. And we learned a lot about farming. We also fed the hens and sheep. At noon, we went fishing by the river near the farm. Meanwhile, some of my classmates played games happily in the sunshine. We also took quite a lot of photos. They were very nice. What a great time we had there!
All in all, it was a great trip.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求以“Our Class Trip”为题分享班级郊游经历，需覆盖四个核心要点：郊游地点、天气状况、具体活动、个人感受，同时需满足词数、行文连贯、无真实信息等要求。解题时应先搭建写作框架：开头点明时间与郊游主题，中间依次阐述地点、天气、具体活动（结合要点合理发挥），结尾总结感受，确保所有要点都涵盖，语言通顺自然，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作时遵循以下步骤：1. 开头：点明上周六班级郊游，说明地点（乡村农场）与天气（晴朗温暖）；2. 中间：具体描述活动，如农民带领参观农场、学习农事、喂家禽、中午在河边钓鱼、同学玩游戏、拍照等；3. 结尾：总结此次旅行的感受，表达开心的心情，确保行文连贯，词数约70词，不出现真实人名地名。
【答案】
Ⅳ. One possible version:
Our Class Trip
We went on a class trip last Saturday. It was sunny and warm. We visited a farm in the countryside and it was great fun.
After we arrived at the farm, the farmer showed us around the farm. And we learned a lot about farming. We also fed the hens and sheep. At noon, we went fishing by the river near the farm. Meanwhile, some of my classmates played games happily in the sunshine. We also took quite a lot of photos. They were very nice. What a great time we had there!
All in all, it was a great trip.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作
【点评】
本题贴近学生校园生活，写作要求明确，既考查学生对英语词汇、句式的运用能力，又考查要点整合与篇章组织能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求以“Our Class Trip”为题分享班级郊游经历，需覆盖四个核心要点：郊游地点、天气状况、具体活动、个人感受，同时需满足词数、行文连贯、无真实信息等要求。解题时应先搭建写作框架：开头点明时间与郊游主题，中间依次阐述地点、天气、具体活动（结合要点合理发挥），结尾总结感受，确保所有要点都涵盖，语言通顺自然，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作时遵循以下步骤：1. 开头：点明上周六班级郊游，说明地点（乡村农场）与天气（晴朗温暖）；2. 中间：具体描述活动，如农民带领参观农场、学习农事、喂家禽、中午在河边钓鱼、同学玩游戏、拍照等；3. 结尾：总结此次旅行的感受，表达开心的心情，确保行文连贯，词数约70词，不出现真实人名地名。
【答案】
Ⅳ. One possible version:
Our Class Trip
We went on a class trip last Saturday. It was sunny and warm. We visited a farm in the countryside and it was great fun.
After we arrived at the farm, the farmer showed us around the farm. And we learned a lot about farming. We also fed the hens and sheep. At noon, we went fishing by the river near the farm. Meanwhile, some of my classmates played games happily in the sunshine. We also took quite a lot of photos. They were very nice. What a great time we had there!
All in all, it was a great trip.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作
【点评】
本题贴近学生校园生活，写作要求明确，既考查学生对英语词汇、句式的运用能力，又考查要点整合与篇章组织能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
