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九、实验班原创 书面表达(20分)
为弘扬传统文化,校英文报发起以"A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us"为主题的征文活动。请选取一种身边的中国传统手工艺品,根据以下思维导图的内容提示,写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
要求:1.文章不得出现真实姓名和校名;2.短文必须包括上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.词数80左右。
A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us
为弘扬传统文化,校英文报发起以"A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us"为主题的征文活动。请选取一种身边的中国传统手工艺品,根据以下思维导图的内容提示,写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
要求:1.文章不得出现真实姓名和校名;2.短文必须包括上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.词数80左右。
A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us
答案
One possible version:
A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us
China is a country with a lot of traditional handicrafts. I am really interested in Chinese kites.
Kites have a long history of about 2,000 years. Most of them are made of bamboo, silk and paper. Some of them are even painted with colourful drawings. In the past, kites were used for sending messages. Nowadays, it's a good way for people to have fun and exercise. They are seen as a symbol of people's good wishes for a better life.
Do you like kites? If so, then Weifang must be a perfect place for you.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。②时态:时态主要为"一般现在时"。③提示:写作要点已给出,学生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明自己喜欢中国风筝;第二步,介绍风筝的相关信息,包括历史、制作材料、所代表的意义等;第三步,总结全文并表示潍坊是喜欢风筝的人的好去处。
[亮点词汇]
①be really interested in对……很感兴趣 ②a long history of……的悠久历史 ③be made of由……制成 ④a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
Some of them are even painted with colourful drawings. (一般现在时的被动语态)
A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us
China is a country with a lot of traditional handicrafts. I am really interested in Chinese kites.
Kites have a long history of about 2,000 years. Most of them are made of bamboo, silk and paper. Some of them are even painted with colourful drawings. In the past, kites were used for sending messages. Nowadays, it's a good way for people to have fun and exercise. They are seen as a symbol of people's good wishes for a better life.
Do you like kites? If so, then Weifang must be a perfect place for you.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。②时态:时态主要为"一般现在时"。③提示:写作要点已给出,学生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明自己喜欢中国风筝;第二步,介绍风筝的相关信息,包括历史、制作材料、所代表的意义等;第三步,总结全文并表示潍坊是喜欢风筝的人的好去处。
[亮点词汇]
①be really interested in对……很感兴趣 ②a long history of……的悠久历史 ③be made of由……制成 ④a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
Some of them are even painted with colourful drawings. (一般现在时的被动语态)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“身边的中国传统手工艺品”主题，结合思维导图的材料、用途、意义等要点写作。解题思路：首先确定写作对象为中国风筝，然后按照“点明主题→介绍风筝的历史、材料、用途、意义→总结推荐”的结构展开，注意时态以一般现在时为主，涵盖所有思维导图信息，适当增加细节使行文连贯，词数控制在80左右。
【解析】
第一步：点明自己对中国风筝的兴趣，引出写作对象；第二步：介绍风筝的相关信息，包括悠久历史、制作材料（竹子、丝绸、纸）、过去和现在的用途（过去送信，现在娱乐锻炼）、象征意义（美好生活的美好祝愿）；第三步：总结并推荐潍坊作为风筝爱好者的好去处，确保行文连贯，无语法错误。
【答案】
A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us
China is a country with a lot of traditional handicrafts. I am really interested in Chinese kites.
Kites have a long history of about 2,000 years. Most of them are made of bamboo, silk and paper. Some of them are even painted with colourful drawings. In the past, kites were used for sending messages. Nowadays, it's a good way for people to have fun and exercise. They are seen as a symbol of people's good wishes for a better life.
Do you like kites? If so, then Weifang must be a perfect place for you.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、传统文化写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整涵盖思维导图的所有要点，语言流畅自然，运用了被动语态等亮点表达，结构清晰，符合书面表达的要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“身边的中国传统手工艺品”主题，结合思维导图的材料、用途、意义等要点写作。解题思路：首先确定写作对象为中国风筝，然后按照“点明主题→介绍风筝的历史、材料、用途、意义→总结推荐”的结构展开，注意时态以一般现在时为主，涵盖所有思维导图信息，适当增加细节使行文连贯，词数控制在80左右。
【解析】
第一步：点明自己对中国风筝的兴趣，引出写作对象；第二步：介绍风筝的相关信息，包括悠久历史、制作材料（竹子、丝绸、纸）、过去和现在的用途（过去送信，现在娱乐锻炼）、象征意义（美好生活的美好祝愿）；第三步：总结并推荐潍坊作为风筝爱好者的好去处，确保行文连贯，无语法错误。
【答案】
A Traditional Chinese Art Form Around Us
China is a country with a lot of traditional handicrafts. I am really interested in Chinese kites.
Kites have a long history of about 2,000 years. Most of them are made of bamboo, silk and paper. Some of them are even painted with colourful drawings. In the past, kites were used for sending messages. Nowadays, it's a good way for people to have fun and exercise. They are seen as a symbol of people's good wishes for a better life.
Do you like kites? If so, then Weifang must be a perfect place for you.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、传统文化写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整涵盖思维导图的所有要点，语言流畅自然，运用了被动语态等亮点表达，结构清晰，符合书面表达的要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
