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假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Peter 来信询问你学校生活的特别之处以及你对改善学校生活的建议。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件。
提示:1.学校的特色课程(如:科技课、传统文化课等)及特色活动(如:科技节、文化节等);2.你对学校特色生活的感受;3.提出至少两条改善学校生活的建议,并说明理由。
要求:1.词数90左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email. You asked about the special things in my school life and my suggestions for improving it. Now I’d like to share them with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
提示:1.学校的特色课程(如:科技课、传统文化课等)及特色活动(如:科技节、文化节等);2.你对学校特色生活的感受;3.提出至少两条改善学校生活的建议,并说明理由。
要求:1.词数90左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email. You asked about the special things in my school life and my suggestions for improving it. Now I’d like to share them with you.
My school has some great special features. We have a weekly "Hands-on Science Class". It makes science fun. Also, every term, we hold a "Cultural Festival" to show different countries' customs. These classes and activities make my school life colorful. I really like them.
For improving school life, I suggest opening an English corner so that we can practise our spoken English. And I think we should have more books in the school library.
What about the special things in your school life? Please tell me in your next email.
We have two cool special courses. In traditional culture class, we learn to make paper-cutting—it's fun and helps me love our culture more. The science and technology class is great too; we make small things like solar-powered toy cars.
Every year, our school has a science festival. We show our inventions there. There's also a culture festival. We sing traditional songs or perform short Beijing Opera acts.
These classes and activities make my school life colorful. I feel more creative and proud of our traditions.
For improving school life, I suggest adding more after-school clubs, like a photography club, because many students love taking photos. I also think we need more computers in the library so that it is easier for us to search online. I really love my school's special life. What about yours? Please tell me in your next email.
Yours,
Li Hua
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＞ 基础版范文
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. You asked about the special things in my school life and my suggestions for improving it. Now I'd like to share them with you.
My school has some great special features. We have a weekly "Hands-on Science Class". It makes science fun. Also, every term, we hold a "Cultural Festival" to show different countries' customs. These classes and activities make my school life colorful. I really like them.
For improving school life, I suggest opening an English corner so that we can practise our spoken English. And I think we should have more books in the school library.
What about the special things in your school life? Please tell me in your next email.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. You asked about the special things in my school life and my suggestions for improving it. Now I'd like to share them with you.
We have two cool special courses. In traditional culture class, we learn to make paper-cutting—it's fun and helps me love our culture more. The science and technology class is great too; we make small things like solar-powered toy cars.
Every year, our school has a science festival. We show our inventions there. There's also a culture festival. We sing traditional songs or perform short Beijing Opera acts.
These classes and activities make my school life colorful. I feel more creative and proud of our traditions.
For improving school life, I suggest adding more after-school clubs, like a photography club, because many students love taking photos. I also think we need more computers in the library so that it is easier for us to search online.
I really love my school's special life. What about yours? Please tell me in your next email.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. You asked about the special things in my school life and my suggestions for improving it. Now I'd like to share them with you.
My school has some great special features. We have a weekly "Hands-on Science Class". It makes science fun. Also, every term, we hold a "Cultural Festival" to show different countries' customs. These classes and activities make my school life colorful. I really like them.
For improving school life, I suggest opening an English corner so that we can practise our spoken English. And I think we should have more books in the school library.
What about the special things in your school life? Please tell me in your next email.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. You asked about the special things in my school life and my suggestions for improving it. Now I'd like to share them with you.
We have two cool special courses. In traditional culture class, we learn to make paper-cutting—it's fun and helps me love our culture more. The science and technology class is great too; we make small things like solar-powered toy cars.
Every year, our school has a science festival. We show our inventions there. There's also a culture festival. We sing traditional songs or perform short Beijing Opera acts.
These classes and activities make my school life colorful. I feel more creative and proud of our traditions.
For improving school life, I suggest adding more after-school clubs, like a photography club, because many students love taking photos. I also think we need more computers in the library so that it is easier for us to search online.
I really love my school's special life. What about yours? Please tell me in your next email.
Yours,
Li Hua
