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→审时态：一般现在时 →审人称：第一、三人称
八年级新学期开始了，假如你是李华，你被分到了一个新的班级，在这里认识了很多新的同学和老师。请你给你的笔友David写一封80词左右的信，描述一下你在新班级的生活和感想。
→审要点 →审词数 →审主题
提示：1.新的朋友：外貌、性格等（至少展开描述某一种品质）；2.新的老师：工作上……（至少描述两个方面）；3.新的班级生活：课堂上……，课间……，课后……；4.你的感受。
Dear David，
Thanks for your last letter. The new term began. I'm now in a new class.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
写作支架
开头 — 介绍背景 — Thanks for your last letter. The new term began. I'm now in a new class.
中间 — 介绍新结交的朋友、新老师以及新的班级生活 — My new classmates are . I've made many new friends. One of them is . She is very and she is always help others. Our teachers are also . They are . In class, the teach
and actively.（高分句式1） During breaks, I enjoy and . After school, I often .
结尾 — 阐述你在新班级的感受 — In a word, I in this .（高分句式2） I love my .
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智慧
Education is simply the soul of a society as it passes from one generation to another.
→审时态：一般现在时 →审人称：第一、三人称
八年级新学期开始了，假如你是李华，你被分到了一个新的班级，在这里认识了很多新的同学和老师。请你给你的笔友David写一封80词左右的信，描述一下你在新班级的生活和感想。
→审要点 →审词数 →审主题
提示：1.新的朋友：外貌、性格等（至少展开描述某一种品质）；2.新的老师：工作上……（至少描述两个方面）；3.新的班级生活：课堂上……，课间……，课后……；4.你的感受。
Dear David，
Thanks for your last letter. The new term began. I'm now in a new class.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
写作支架
开头 — 介绍背景 — Thanks for your last letter. The new term began. I'm now in a new class.
中间 — 介绍新结交的朋友、新老师以及新的班级生活 — My new classmates are . I've made many new friends. One of them is . She is very and she is always help others. Our teachers are also . They are . In class, the teach
and actively.（高分句式1） During breaks, I enjoy and . After school, I often .结尾 — 阐述你在新班级的感受 — In a word, I in this .（高分句式2） I love my .
0
智慧
Education is simply the soul of a society as it passes from one generation to another.
答案
完整参考范文：
Dear David,
Thanks for your last letter. The new term began. I'm now in a new class.
My new classmates are all friendly. I've made a good friend called Millie. She is tall and outgoing, and she is always ready to help me when I meet problems. Our teachers are very kind, they are careful with our study and always make classes lively and interesting. In class, the teachers explain knowledge clearly and we take part in all kinds of activities actively. During breaks, I enjoy chatting with friends and playing small games. After school, I often do after-school activities with my classmates.
In a word, I have a wonderful time in this new warm class. I love my new class so much.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作支架填充参考：
1. friendly 2. Millie 3. kind and outgoing 4. ready to 5. very nice 6. patient with us and make their classes interesting 7. give clear lessons 8. we join in discussions 9. talking with my deskmate 10. playing games with other classmates 11. finish homework together with friends 12. feel very happy 13. new class 14. new class
Dear David,
Thanks for your last letter. The new term began. I'm now in a new class.
My new classmates are all friendly. I've made a good friend called Millie. She is tall and outgoing, and she is always ready to help me when I meet problems. Our teachers are very kind, they are careful with our study and always make classes lively and interesting. In class, the teachers explain knowledge clearly and we take part in all kinds of activities actively. During breaks, I enjoy chatting with friends and playing small games. After school, I often do after-school activities with my classmates.
In a word, I have a wonderful time in this new warm class. I love my new class so much.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作支架填充参考：
1. friendly 2. Millie 3. kind and outgoing 4. ready to 5. very nice 6. patient with us and make their classes interesting 7. give clear lessons 8. we join in discussions 9. talking with my deskmate 10. playing games with other classmates 11. finish homework together with friends 12. feel very happy 13. new class 14. new class
解析
本题要求写一封80词左右的书信向笔友介绍新学期新班级的生活，指定使用一般现在时，人称以第一、第三人称为主，写作时需要覆盖全部指定要点：1. 介绍新朋友的外貌性格，突出其乐于助人的品质；2. 从两个不同维度描述新老师的工作特点；3. 分别说明课堂、课间、课后的班级日常；4. 表达自己在新班级的真实感受，语言要贴合八年级所学的词汇和句式难度。
