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同学们,守株待兔是我们非常熟悉的古代寓言故事。请你试着用英语写下来,寄给《21世纪英语》杂志社,传播中国故事,让世界上更多的人了解中国文化。
do farm work
ran by ...
pick up
wait
要求:(1)根据提示写句子,可适当发挥,使故事流畅;(2)不要出现学生本人信息;(3)80词左右。
参考词汇:农作物 crops
【思路点拨】
第一步:定基调
1.主题:寓言故事
2.人称:第三人称
3.时态:一般过去时为主
第二步:列提纲
【范文展示】
Long long ago, there was a farmer. He did farm work in his field every day to grow food for his family.
One day, while he was digging the field, a small rabbit ran by quickly. It was so careless that it hit a big tree and died. The farmer was very happy. He picked up the rabbit and took it home for a delicious dinner. After that, the farmer changed. Instead of working in the field, he sat under the tree all day and waited. He thought, "If another rabbit comes, I will get something to eat and won't need to work!" But no more rabbits came. At last, all the crops in his field died because no one took care of them.
From this story, we know it's important for us to work hard. Don't be lazy.
(139 words)
【话题好句】
同学们,守株待兔是我们非常熟悉的古代寓言故事。请你试着用英语写下来,寄给《21世纪英语》杂志社,传播中国故事,让世界上更多的人了解中国文化。
do farm work
ran by ...
pick up
wait
要求:(1)根据提示写句子,可适当发挥,使故事流畅;(2)不要出现学生本人信息;(3)80词左右。
参考词汇:农作物 crops
【思路点拨】
第一步:定基调
1.主题:寓言故事
2.人称:第三人称
3.时态:一般过去时为主
第二步:列提纲
【范文展示】
Long long ago, there was a farmer. He did farm work in his field every day to grow food for his family.
One day, while he was digging the field, a small rabbit ran by quickly. It was so careless that it hit a big tree and died. The farmer was very happy. He picked up the rabbit and took it home for a delicious dinner. After that, the farmer changed. Instead of working in the field, he sat under the tree all day and waited. He thought, "If another rabbit comes, I will get something to eat and won't need to work!" But no more rabbits came. At last, all the crops in his field died because no one took care of them.
From this story, we know it's important for us to work hard. Don't be lazy.
(139 words)
【话题好句】
答案
Long long ago, there was a farmer. One day, he was doing farm work in his field when a rabbit ran by fast. It hit a big tree and died. The farmer was very happy, he picked up the rabbit and took it home for a nice dinner.
After that, he stopped working on his farm. He sat under the tree all day and waited for more rabbits. But no more rabbits came, and all his crops died soon. The story tells us we must work hard for our life.
After that, he stopped working on his farm. He sat under the tree all day and waited for more rabbits. But no more rabbits came, and all his crops died soon. The story tells us we must work hard for our life.
解析
【分析】
本题要求用英语讲述中国寓言故事《守株待兔》，需遵循以下思路：1. 确定写作基调：以第三人称、一般过去时为主，符合寓言故事的叙事特点；2. 梳理故事核心脉络：引出农夫、兔子撞树死亡、农夫捡兔、放弃劳作等兔、庄稼枯死、点明寓意；3. 结合提示词汇（do farm work、ran by、pick up、wait）和参考词汇（crops），适当发挥使故事流畅，控制词数在80词左右，且不出现个人信息。
【解析】
首先设定时态为一般过去时，按故事发展顺序叙述：开头交代农夫的日常劳作，接着写兔子跑过撞树死亡，农夫捡兔回家，之后农夫放弃劳作在树下等兔子，最终庄稼枯死，最后点明故事寓意。写作时紧扣提示词汇，确保内容完整、逻辑连贯。
【答案】
Long long ago, there was a farmer. One day, he was doing farm work in his field when a rabbit ran by fast. It hit a big tree and died. The farmer was very happy, he picked up the rabbit and took it home for a nice dinner. After that, he stopped working on his farm. He sat under the tree all day and waited for more rabbits. But no more rabbits came, and all his crops died soon. The story tells us we must work hard for our life.
【知识点】
英语寓言故事写作；一般过去时运用；核心词汇使用
【点评】
本题结合中国传统文化，考查学生用英语叙事的能力，既要求掌握寓言故事的写作结构，又需准确运用时态和提示词汇，同时传递故事寓意，符合传播中国文化的任务要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求用英语讲述中国寓言故事《守株待兔》，需遵循以下思路：1. 确定写作基调：以第三人称、一般过去时为主，符合寓言故事的叙事特点；2. 梳理故事核心脉络：引出农夫、兔子撞树死亡、农夫捡兔、放弃劳作等兔、庄稼枯死、点明寓意；3. 结合提示词汇（do farm work、ran by、pick up、wait）和参考词汇（crops），适当发挥使故事流畅，控制词数在80词左右，且不出现个人信息。
【解析】
首先设定时态为一般过去时，按故事发展顺序叙述：开头交代农夫的日常劳作，接着写兔子跑过撞树死亡，农夫捡兔回家，之后农夫放弃劳作在树下等兔子，最终庄稼枯死，最后点明故事寓意。写作时紧扣提示词汇，确保内容完整、逻辑连贯。
【答案】
Long long ago, there was a farmer. One day, he was doing farm work in his field when a rabbit ran by fast. It hit a big tree and died. The farmer was very happy, he picked up the rabbit and took it home for a nice dinner. After that, he stopped working on his farm. He sat under the tree all day and waited for more rabbits. But no more rabbits came, and all his crops died soon. The story tells us we must work hard for our life.
【知识点】
英语寓言故事写作；一般过去时运用；核心词汇使用
【点评】
本题结合中国传统文化，考查学生用英语叙事的能力，既要求掌握寓言故事的写作结构，又需准确运用时态和提示词汇，同时传递故事寓意，符合传播中国文化的任务要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
