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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
本周,英语课学习围绕主题“Home”展开。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文,描述你心中理想的家。
What kind of house or apartment do you dream of living in?
What special features(特征) does it have?
How are you going to decorate your dream house or apartment?
Write something more about your dream home.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
My dream home is not just a place to live, but a warm harbour(港湾).
本周,英语课学习围绕主题“Home”展开。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文,描述你心中理想的家。
What kind of house or apartment do you dream of living in?
What special features(特征) does it have?
How are you going to decorate your dream house or apartment?
Write something more about your dream home.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
My dream home is not just a place to live, but a warm harbour(港湾).
答案
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My dream home is not just a place to live, but a warm harbour. I dream of living in a big two-floor house with a large garden. There are many beautiful flowers and fruit trees in the garden. One special thing about my home is a home theatre. It has comfortable seats and a big screen, so we can enjoy great movies together. If you ask me to decorate my home, I will paint the walls with light colours. And I'll put up some nice pictures on them. The floor will be covered with soft carpets. At home, I hope to create a happy and loving family atmosphere. Everyone in my family can talk and share their feelings freely.
My dream home is not just a place to live, but a warm harbour. I dream of living in a big two-floor house with a large garden. There are many beautiful flowers and fruit trees in the garden. One special thing about my home is a home theatre. It has comfortable seats and a big screen, so we can enjoy great movies together. If you ask me to decorate my home, I will paint the walls with light colours. And I'll put up some nice pictures on them. The floor will be covered with soft carpets. At home, I hope to create a happy and loving family atmosphere. Everyone in my family can talk and share their feelings freely.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题类书面表达题，要求围绕“理想的家”展开写作，需覆盖三个核心问题：梦想的房屋类型、房屋的特殊特征、房屋的装饰方式，还需补充相关内容，词数100左右，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 确定温馨的房屋类型，如两层带大花园的房子；2. 设计体现家庭互动的特殊特征，如家庭影院；3. 规划营造温馨氛围的装饰细节；4. 补充理想的家庭氛围内容，确保结构完整、符合要求，同时注意不透露个人真实信息。
【解析】根据题目提示分模块组织内容：1. 承接给定开头，说明梦想的房屋是两层带大花园，花园里有花和果树；2. 介绍特殊特征：配备舒适座椅和大屏幕的家庭影院，适合全家一起看电影；3. 说明装饰计划：用浅色刷墙、挂好看的画、铺软地毯；4. 补充理想的家庭氛围，让家人自由交流，传递温暖主题，总词数符合要求，语言流畅自然。
【答案】My dream home is not just a place to live, but a warm harbour. I dream of living in a big two-floor house with a large garden. There are many beautiful flowers and fruit trees in the garden. One special thing about my home is a home theatre. It has comfortable seats and a big screen, so we can enjoy great movies together. If you ask me to decorate my home, I will paint the walls with light colours. And I'll put up some nice pictures on them. The floor will be covered with soft carpets. At home, I hope to create a happy and loving family atmosphere. Everyone in my family can talk and share their feelings freely.
【知识点】英语话题写作、英语书面表达
【点评】本文紧扣题目所有要求，覆盖了全部提示要点，结构清晰，语言通顺，主题积极温馨，符合初中英语书面表达的规范要求，是优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】根据题目提示分模块组织内容：1. 承接给定开头，说明梦想的房屋是两层带大花园，花园里有花和果树；2. 介绍特殊特征：配备舒适座椅和大屏幕的家庭影院，适合全家一起看电影；3. 说明装饰计划：用浅色刷墙、挂好看的画、铺软地毯；4. 补充理想的家庭氛围，让家人自由交流，传递温暖主题，总词数符合要求，语言流畅自然。
【答案】My dream home is not just a place to live, but a warm harbour. I dream of living in a big two-floor house with a large garden. There are many beautiful flowers and fruit trees in the garden. One special thing about my home is a home theatre. It has comfortable seats and a big screen, so we can enjoy great movies together. If you ask me to decorate my home, I will paint the walls with light colours. And I'll put up some nice pictures on them. The floor will be covered with soft carpets. At home, I hope to create a happy and loving family atmosphere. Everyone in my family can talk and share their feelings freely.
【知识点】英语话题写作、英语书面表达
【点评】本文紧扣题目所有要求，覆盖了全部提示要点，结构清晰，语言通顺，主题积极温馨，符合初中英语书面表达的规范要求，是优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】0.7
