小试身手
假如你叫Nick，开学已经一周了，你熟悉了校园，初步了解了初中生活。请你以“My first week in junior high”为主题，用英语写一篇日记，记录你一周以来的所见所闻和感受。
要点:1.介绍科目情况；
2.介绍社团情况；
3.描述自己遇到的问题；
4.表达感受。
要求:1.70词左右，日记的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
书写区域 Good writing makes your article better.
Dear Diary,
I had a great week at the beginning of this term.





Until next time,
Nick

写作指导与评价
| 步骤 | 要点 | 自评
是(√)否(×) | 他评
是(√)否(×) |
| ---- | ---- | ---- | ---- |
| 审 | 使用了一般现在时和一般过去时 | | |
| 审 | 使用了第一人称 | | |
| 审 | 采用了三段式 | | |
| 润 | 用到了介绍科目、社团、问题和感受的好词好句,如:
1. first of all
2. teach sb to do sth
3. a lot of
4. It takes (sb)＋时间＋to do sth.
... | | |
| 查 | 包含了提示中的全部要点 | | |
| 查 | 写出了自己的感受 | | |
| 查 | 在拼写、语法、标点方面都正确 | | |
| 查 | 达到了词数要求 | | |
| 查 | 书写美观、书面整洁 | | |
One possible version:
Dear Diary,
I had a great week at the beginning of this term.
First of all, my first lesson was meaningful. My teacher taught us to think more in junior high. I have more subjects. Among them, I love science most. Second, there are a lot of clubs, such as the dance club and the history club. I joined the history club because I wanted to learn more about Chinese culture out of class. However, I also met some problems in my first week. There were so many tasks and it took a long time to finish them. Luckily, I got help after I wrote to the Students' Union and all my teachers are very nice to me. Now I'm sure I can manage my study and life in junior high.
Now I'm looking forward to the following weeks.
Until next time,
Nick

【分析】
本题要求以Nick的身份写英语日记，主题为“My first week in junior high”，需覆盖科目情况、社团情况、遇到的问题、感受四个要点，词数70左右，开头结尾已给出，不得透露个人信息。解题思路：1. 确定时态：描述过去一周的经历用一般过去时，表达当下感受用一般现在时；2. 结构串联：用first of all、second、however等连接词，将四个要点有序衔接，使逻辑清晰；3. 语言把控：用简单易懂的词汇和句型，控制词数，确保语法正确。
【解析】
1. 时态选择：主体时态用一般过去时记录过去一周的经历，一般现在时表达当下感受；2. 要点组织：①科目：说明初中科目增多，最喜欢科学，老师注重培养思考能力；②社团：加入历史俱乐部，想了解中国文化；③问题：作业任务多，花费时间长；④感受：得到帮助，能适应初中生活，期待未来；3. 连接词运用：用first of all引出科目，second引出社团，however引出问题，使内容连贯；4. 格式与词数：遵循日记格式，词数约70，符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Diary,
I had a great week at the beginning of this term.
First of all, my first lesson was meaningful. My teacher taught us to think more in junior high. I have more subjects. Among them, I love science most. Second, there are a lot of clubs, such as the dance club and the history club. I joined the history club because I wanted to learn more about Chinese culture out of class. However, I also met some problems in my first week. There were so many tasks and it took a long time to finish them. Luckily, I got help after I wrote to the Students' Union and all my teachers are very nice to me. Now I'm sure I can manage my study and life in junior high.
Now I'm looking forward to the following weeks.
Until next time,
Nick
【知识点】
英语日记写作、一般过去时、要点式英语写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖所有要求要点，时态运用准确，连接词使文章逻辑清晰，语言通顺自然，符合日记格式，词数达标，真实表达了初中第一周的经历与感受，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5