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研学是一种很好的学习方式，它增加了学习的实践性和趣味性。假如你是李华，你参加了上周五的研学之旅，请根据下面内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍你的研学情况和你的研学感受。词数：80词左右。
▶▶审作文题
1. 文体：
2. 人称：
3. 时态：
4. 写作要点：①；②；③
▶▶搭建框架
（温馨提示：请先完成下面的写作提纲）
▶▶小试身手
My Study Trip
2. I had a wonderful experience.（用what感叹句升格）
【名言积累】
1. He who travels far knows much. 远行者见识广。
2. It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books. 读万卷书不如行万里路。
研学是一种很好的学习方式，它增加了学习的实践性和趣味性。假如你是李华，你参加了上周五的研学之旅，请根据下面内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍你的研学情况和你的研学感受。词数：80词左右。
▶▶审作文题
1. 文体：
2. 人称：
3. 时态：
4. 写作要点：①；②；③
▶▶搭建框架
（温馨提示：请先完成下面的写作提纲）
▶▶小试身手
My Study Trip
2. I had a wonderful experience.（用what感叹句升格）
【名言积累】
1. He who travels far knows much. 远行者见识广。
2. It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books. 读万卷书不如行万里路。
答案
▶▶审作文题
1. 记叙文
2. 第一人称
3. 一般过去时
4. ①研学目的地、交通方式及人物 ②研学活动 ③我的感受
▶▶搭建框架
Beginning: Where we went; How we went there
Body: What we did in the countryside
Ending: What I thought of the trip and what I learnt from it
▶▶小试身手
【基础版】
One possible version:
My Study Trip
Last Friday,I took a bus to the countryside with my classmates for a study trip.
The weather was sunny,perfect for our trip. We were all excited to visit the countryside. When we got there,I saw lots of colourful flowers in the fields. They were very beautiful,so we took many photos. In the morning,we walked around the farm and helped farmers pick fruit. It was really fun to pick fruit. In the afternoon,we learnt to grow and water plants. The farmers were nice,and the countryside made me think of the old-time happy life.
When it was time to leave,I was a bit sad to say goodbye. What a wonderful experience I had! It was educational and relaxing
【提升版】
One possible version:
My Study Trip
As the saying goes,"It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books."Last Friday,I went on a study trip to the countryside with my classmates by bus.
The weather was sunny and warm. Everyone was excited to visit the countryside. When we arrived,I was surprised to see thousands of colourful flowers in the fields. They were so beautiful that we took many photos. In the morning,we explored the farm and helped the farmers pick fruit. I could do nothing but focus on the work,which was really fun. In the afternoon,we learnt how to grow and water the plants. The friendly farmers and the peaceful countryside reminded me of the simple and happy life in the past.
When it was time to leave,I was a bit sad to say goodbye. The trip not only brought me pleasure but also left me many beautiful memories. How I wish to go there again!
1. 记叙文
2. 第一人称
3. 一般过去时
4. ①研学目的地、交通方式及人物 ②研学活动 ③我的感受
▶▶搭建框架
Beginning: Where we went; How we went there
Body: What we did in the countryside
Ending: What I thought of the trip and what I learnt from it
▶▶小试身手
【基础版】
One possible version:
My Study Trip
Last Friday,I took a bus to the countryside with my classmates for a study trip.
The weather was sunny,perfect for our trip. We were all excited to visit the countryside. When we got there,I saw lots of colourful flowers in the fields. They were very beautiful,so we took many photos. In the morning,we walked around the farm and helped farmers pick fruit. It was really fun to pick fruit. In the afternoon,we learnt to grow and water plants. The farmers were nice,and the countryside made me think of the old-time happy life.
When it was time to leave,I was a bit sad to say goodbye. What a wonderful experience I had! It was educational and relaxing
【提升版】
One possible version:
My Study Trip
As the saying goes,"It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books."Last Friday,I went on a study trip to the countryside with my classmates by bus.
The weather was sunny and warm. Everyone was excited to visit the countryside. When we arrived,I was surprised to see thousands of colourful flowers in the fields. They were so beautiful that we took many photos. In the morning,we explored the farm and helped the farmers pick fruit. I could do nothing but focus on the work,which was really fun. In the afternoon,we learnt how to grow and water the plants. The friendly farmers and the peaceful countryside reminded me of the simple and happy life in the past.
When it was time to leave,I was a bit sad to say goodbye. The trip not only brought me pleasure but also left me many beautiful memories. How I wish to go there again!
解析
【分析】
拿到英语写作题，按以下步骤思考：1.审题：确定文体为记叙文（记叙个人经历），人称用第一人称（以“我”的视角），时态用一般过去时（描述上周五的过去事件），写作要点需覆盖研学基本情况、研学活动、个人感受三部分；2.搭建框架：开头交代研学的时间、地点、同行人员及交通方式，中间描述具体的研学活动，结尾抒发研学的感受与收获；3.写作时注意用what感叹句升格表达，可结合积累的名言提升文采，控制词数在80左右。
【解析】
根据审题结果，先明确各写作要素：文体为记叙文，人称第一人称，时态一般过去时，写作要点为①研学基本情况（上周五和同学乘公交去乡村）；②研学活动（探索农场、帮农民摘水果、学习种浇植物）；③个人感受（愉悦、难忘）。搭建框架后，开头引用名言引出研学，中间描述活动细节，结尾用what感叹句表达感受，形成符合要求的短文，确保语言通顺、要点齐全。
【答案】
My Study Trip
As the saying goes,"It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books."Last Friday,I went on a study trip to the countryside with my classmates by bus.
The weather was sunny and warm. Everyone was excited to visit the countryside. When we arrived,I was surprised to see thousands of colourful flowers in the fields. They were so beautiful that we took many photos. In the morning,we explored the farm and helped the farmers pick fruit. I could do nothing but focus on the work,which was really fun. In the afternoon,we learnt how to grow and water the plants. The friendly farmers and the peaceful countryside reminded me of the simple and happy life in the past.
When it was time to leave,I was a bit sad to say goodbye. The trip not only brought me pleasure but also left me many beautiful memories. How I wish to go there again!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语感叹句运用、英语写作要点梳理
【点评】
本题以研学为主题考查英语应用文写作，既考查学生的审题能力，又考查语言组织与表达能力，要求学生结合实际经历完成写作，同时注重句式的灵活运用，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，能引导学生关注实践学习的意义。
【难度系数】
0.5
拿到英语写作题，按以下步骤思考：1.审题：确定文体为记叙文（记叙个人经历），人称用第一人称（以“我”的视角），时态用一般过去时（描述上周五的过去事件），写作要点需覆盖研学基本情况、研学活动、个人感受三部分；2.搭建框架：开头交代研学的时间、地点、同行人员及交通方式，中间描述具体的研学活动，结尾抒发研学的感受与收获；3.写作时注意用what感叹句升格表达，可结合积累的名言提升文采，控制词数在80左右。
【解析】
根据审题结果，先明确各写作要素：文体为记叙文，人称第一人称，时态一般过去时，写作要点为①研学基本情况（上周五和同学乘公交去乡村）；②研学活动（探索农场、帮农民摘水果、学习种浇植物）；③个人感受（愉悦、难忘）。搭建框架后，开头引用名言引出研学，中间描述活动细节，结尾用what感叹句表达感受，形成符合要求的短文，确保语言通顺、要点齐全。
【答案】
My Study Trip
As the saying goes,"It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books."Last Friday,I went on a study trip to the countryside with my classmates by bus.
The weather was sunny and warm. Everyone was excited to visit the countryside. When we arrived,I was surprised to see thousands of colourful flowers in the fields. They were so beautiful that we took many photos. In the morning,we explored the farm and helped the farmers pick fruit. I could do nothing but focus on the work,which was really fun. In the afternoon,we learnt how to grow and water the plants. The friendly farmers and the peaceful countryside reminded me of the simple and happy life in the past.
When it was time to leave,I was a bit sad to say goodbye. The trip not only brought me pleasure but also left me many beautiful memories. How I wish to go there again!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语感叹句运用、英语写作要点梳理
【点评】
本题以研学为主题考查英语应用文写作，既考查学生的审题能力，又考查语言组织与表达能力，要求学生结合实际经历完成写作，同时注重句式的灵活运用，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，能引导学生关注实践学习的意义。
【难度系数】
0.5
