如何写与兴趣爱好相关的文章
本单元的话题是兴趣爱好，要求学生能介绍自己或他人的兴趣爱好，写作时可以从以下几个方面展开：
①引出兴趣爱好是什么；
②介绍喜欢这项爱好的原因及跟此爱好相关的行为等；
③介绍这项爱好对生活和学习的影响。写作时要注意是介绍自己还是他人的兴趣爱好，确定好人称。
【抛砖引玉】
假如你是Mike，你的笔友John来信询问
你的兴趣爱好，请你从以下几个方面进行介绍：

要求：
1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，条理清楚；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 90词左右。

Dear John,
I'm glad to tell you about my hobby. My favorite hobby is playing basketball.
I play basketball with my friends after school three times a week. I love it because it can make me relaxed and strong when I feel tired after study. My role model is the great basketball player Yao Ming. Playing basketball helps me make lots of friends. My dream is to be a good basketball player when I grow up.
What about your hobby?
Yours,
Mike

【分析】首先明确写作任务：以Mike的身份给笔友John写回信介绍自己的兴趣爱好，需覆盖题目要求的要点（爱好内容、做爱好的频率、喜欢的原因、相关榜样、爱好的影响及梦想），语言通顺、要点齐全，符合书信格式。写作思路：1. 开头用书信问候语引出介绍爱好的话题；2. 依次介绍爱好具体内容、做爱好的频率、喜欢的原因、相关榜样、爱好对自己的影响；3. 最后询问对方的爱好，完成书信交流逻辑。
【解析】按照英文书信格式，开头称呼Dear John，先表达乐意分享爱好，点明爱好是打篮球；接着说明做爱好的频率（每周三次，放学后和朋友）；再阐述喜欢的原因（学习累时能放松、强身）；然后提到榜样是姚明；之后说明爱好的影响（结交很多朋友）；最后说明梦想是成为优秀篮球运动员，结尾询问对方爱好，落款正确。
【答案】Dear John,
I'm glad to tell you about my hobby. My favorite hobby is playing basketball.
I play basketball with my friends after school three times a week. I love it because it can make me relaxed and strong when I feel tired after study. My role model is the great basketball player Yao Ming. Playing basketball helps me make lots of friends. My dream is to be a good basketball player when I grow up.
What about your hobby?
Yours,
Mike
【知识点】英语应用文写作、兴趣爱好话题表达
【点评】范文符合书信格式，覆盖所有要求要点，人称正确，语言通顺流畅，逻辑清晰，准确传达了兴趣爱好相关信息，满足题目各项要求。
【难度系数】0.5

【写作构思】
段落布局
开头：引出自己的爱好 → I like/love/enjoy ... very much.
中间：根据提示详细介绍自己的爱好
频率：I often/ usually play basketball ...；I play basketball once/ twice a week/ ...
原因：I like it because .../ I think it helps me .../ It can make me feel .../ I can learn a lot from ...
榜样：My favourite ... is ... /My role model is ...
结尾：介绍自己的梦想并表达期待
梦想：I want/ hope to be ... in the future.
期待：I hope my dream can come true.

参考范文：
My Hobby
I love playing basketball very much.
I usually play basketball with my good friends after school, and I play basketball on the school basketball team three times a week. I like it because it is great fun. I think it helps me stay healthy, and it can make me feel happy when I am tired from study. My favourite basketball star is Yi Jianlian, he is my role model, and I can learn a lot about teamwork and never giving up from him.
I want to be a good basketball player like him in the future. I will practise playing basketball as often as I can, and I hope my dream can come true.

【分析】本题要求围绕“爱好”进行英语写作，需按照给定的三段式段落布局展开：第一步用指定句式引出自己的爱好；第二步从频率、原因、榜样三个方面详细介绍爱好；第三步表达自己的梦想并说明期待，写作时需结合具体内容填充，使文章连贯合理。
【解析】1. 开头：使用指定句式“I love playing basketball very much.”引出爱好，直接点题；2. 中间：依次介绍频率（和好友放学后打篮球，加入校队一周打三次）、原因（有趣、帮助保持健康、缓解学习疲惫）、榜样（篮球明星易建联，学习团队精神和坚持），内容充实；3. 结尾：表达梦想（未来成为优秀篮球运动员），并以“希望梦想实现”作结，符合要求。
【答案】My Hobby
I love playing basketball very much.
I usually play basketball with my good friends after school, and I play basketball on the school basketball team three times a week. I like it because it is great fun. I think it helps me stay healthy, and it can make me feel happy when I am tired from study. My favourite basketball star is Yi Jianlian, he is my role model, and I can learn a lot about teamwork and never giving up from him.
I want to be a good basketball player like him in the future. I will practise playing basketball as often as I can, and I hope my dream can come true.
【知识点】英语写作（爱好类），英语常用句式
【点评】范文严格遵循给定的段落布局，结构清晰完整，内容具体贴合要求，语言表达准确流畅，符合初中英语写作的标准。
【难度系数】0.3

【实战演练】
许多人都喜欢阅读，从阅读中人们可以学到许多东西。请以“I Love Reading”为题，根据以下提示介绍你的阅读爱好。
内容提示：
1. 喜欢阅读的原因；
2. 阅读频率、地点及最喜欢的书；
3. 表达与阅读相关的愿望。
要求：
1. 不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
I Love Reading
Good books are good friends.

单元写作指导
【写作提示】
1. 主题:介绍爱好——阅读
2. 人称:以第一人称为主
3. 时态:以一般现在时为主
4. 要点:喜欢阅读的原因;阅读频率、地点及最喜欢的书;与阅读相关的愿望
5. 写作思路:开篇点明喜欢阅读的原因,然后再介绍与阅读相关的情况(如阅读频率、地点、最喜欢的书),最后表达与阅读相关的愿望。
【参考范文】
I Love Reading
Good books are good friends. I love reading very much because it can make me relaxed and I can learn much knowledge from books.
When I was very young, I was interested in reading books. Now I read them every day. On weekends, I spend more time reading. I often go to the library in my free time. Sometimes I also go to the bookstore to buy some books. I have a big bookshelf at home. There are all kinds of books on it. Books on history are my favourite. Why? Because I can learn a lot of interesting historical stories from them. I think reading is a good way to improve myself.
I hope I will become a writer in the future. I hope my dream can come true one day.

【分析】
本次写作任务为以“I Love Reading”为题的英语短文，已给出开头，需覆盖三个核心要点：1. 喜欢阅读的原因；2. 阅读频率、地点及最喜欢的书；3. 与阅读相关的愿望。写作思路：先承接开头点明喜欢阅读的原因，再介绍日常阅读的频率、常去的地点，以及最喜欢的书籍类型和理由，最后表达相关愿望；需用第一人称、一般现在时，适当补充细节使文章连贯，控制词数80左右，避免出现真实人名、校名等信息。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，说明喜欢阅读的原因：I love reading very much because it can make me relaxed and I can learn much knowledge from books.（对应要点1）；
2. 介绍阅读频率、地点及最喜欢的书：Now I read them every day. On weekends, I spend more time reading. I often go to the library in my free time. Sometimes I also go to the bookstore to buy some books. I have a big bookshelf at home. There are all kinds of books on it. Books on history are my favourite. Because I can learn a lot of interesting historical stories from them.（对应要点2）；
3. 表达与阅读相关的愿望：I hope I will become a writer in the future. I hope my dream can come true one day.（对应要点3）；
整体采用第一人称、一般现在时，内容连贯，符合词数要求，未出现真实信息。
【答案】
I Love Reading
Good books are good friends. I love reading very much because it can make me relaxed and I can learn much knowledge from books.
When I was very young, I was interested in reading books. Now I read them every day. On weekends, I spend more time reading. I often go to the library in my free time. Sometimes I also go to the bookstore to buy some books. I have a big bookshelf at home. There are all kinds of books on it. Books on history are my favourite. Why? Because I can learn a lot of interesting historical stories from them. I think reading is a good way to improve myself.
I hope I will become a writer in the future. I hope my dream can come true one day.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、要点式写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，人称与时态使用准确，内容连贯且有合理细节，符合词数要求，未出现真实信息，是一篇符合要求的单元写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.5