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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
本单元围绕主题"Stories from Different Cultures"展开。请你根据以下
1. What is the story about?
2. What characters are in the story?
3. What is the main message of the story?
4. How has this story inspired(激励) you in your life?
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
In different cultures, there are many stories that teach us valuable lessons. One such story that has inspired me is
本单元围绕主题"Stories from Different Cultures"展开。请你根据以下
内
容
提
示
,从文化理解、生活智慧等方面用英语写一篇短文,描述一个来自不同文化的故事,并谈谈它给你带来的启发。内
容
提
示
:1. What is the story about?
2. What characters are in the story?
3. What is the main message of the story?
4. How has this story inspired(激励) you in your life?
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
In different cultures, there are many stories that teach us valuable lessons. One such story that has inspired me is
about Anansi, a clever spider from African tales. In the story, Anansi wanted to throw a party but had no food. He tricked other animals into bringing food by promising to tell them a secret. When they asked for the secret, he said, "Helping each other makes us strong."
This story tells us that working together is important. It taught me to help my classmates and share with others. It's a good way to make friends and solve problems.
This story tells us that working together is important. It taught me to help my classmates and share with others. It's a good way to make friends and solve problems.
答案
[参考范文]
In different cultures, there are many stories that teach us valuable lessons. One such story that has inspired me is about Anansi, a clever spider from African tales. In the story, Anansi wanted to throw a party but had no food. He tricked other animals into bringing food by promising to tell them a secret. When they asked for the secret, he said, "Helping each other makes us strong."
This story tells us that working together is important. It taught me to help my classmates and share with others. It's a good way to make friends and solve problems.
In different cultures, there are many stories that teach us valuable lessons. One such story that has inspired me is about Anansi, a clever spider from African tales. In the story, Anansi wanted to throw a party but had no food. He tricked other animals into bringing food by promising to tell them a secret. When they asked for the secret, he said, "Helping each other makes us strong."
This story tells us that working together is important. It taught me to help my classmates and share with others. It's a good way to make friends and solve problems.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们需要紧扣题目要求，围绕“不同文化的故事”展开写作，需覆盖提示的四个要点：故事内容、角色、主旨及对自身的启发。第一步，选择一个具有代表性的异域文化故事，比如非洲民间故事里的蜘蛛Anansi，这类故事自带文化特色且寓意鲜明；第二步，清晰叙述故事核心：Anansi想办派对却缺食物，用“分享秘密”为诱饵让其他动物带来食物，最后揭示互助的秘密；第三步，点明故事主旨——合作互助的重要性；第四步，联系自身校园生活，说明故事如何激励自己帮助同学、学会分享，完成从故事到个人感悟的衔接。同时要注意控制词数在80左右，语言简洁地道，不透露个人信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，引入故事：直接点明故事主角是非洲民间故事里的聪明蜘蛛Anansi，快速切入主题。
2. 叙述故事内容：用简洁的语句讲述Anansi为办派对，以“分享秘密”为借口，诱使其他动物带来食物，最后说出“互助让我们强大”的秘密，完整覆盖故事内容与角色要点。
3. 点明故事主旨：明确指出故事传递的“合作互助很重要”的核心信息。
4. 结合自身谈启发：联系校园生活，说明故事教会自己要帮助同学、学会分享，既呼应主旨，又完成“启发”这一要点的阐述。
5. 语言上，使用“tricked...into...”“promising to...”等短语，增强表达的生动性，同时保持语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
In different cultures, there are many stories that teach us valuable lessons. One such story that has inspired me is about Anansi, a clever spider from African tales. In the story, Anansi wanted to throw a party but had no food. He tricked other animals into bringing food by promising to tell them a secret. When they asked for the secret, he said, "Helping each other makes us strong."
This story tells us that working together is important. It taught me to help my classmates and share with others. It's a good way to make friends and solve problems.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；跨文化主题写作；叙事议论结合
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，内容逻辑清晰，从故事叙述到主旨提炼再到个人启发，过渡自然。语言简洁地道，用词准确，既体现了对异域文化故事的理解，又结合生活实际传递了生活智慧，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们需要紧扣题目要求，围绕“不同文化的故事”展开写作，需覆盖提示的四个要点：故事内容、角色、主旨及对自身的启发。第一步，选择一个具有代表性的异域文化故事，比如非洲民间故事里的蜘蛛Anansi，这类故事自带文化特色且寓意鲜明；第二步，清晰叙述故事核心：Anansi想办派对却缺食物，用“分享秘密”为诱饵让其他动物带来食物，最后揭示互助的秘密；第三步，点明故事主旨——合作互助的重要性；第四步，联系自身校园生活，说明故事如何激励自己帮助同学、学会分享，完成从故事到个人感悟的衔接。同时要注意控制词数在80左右，语言简洁地道，不透露个人信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，引入故事：直接点明故事主角是非洲民间故事里的聪明蜘蛛Anansi，快速切入主题。
2. 叙述故事内容：用简洁的语句讲述Anansi为办派对，以“分享秘密”为借口，诱使其他动物带来食物，最后说出“互助让我们强大”的秘密，完整覆盖故事内容与角色要点。
3. 点明故事主旨：明确指出故事传递的“合作互助很重要”的核心信息。
4. 结合自身谈启发：联系校园生活，说明故事教会自己要帮助同学、学会分享，既呼应主旨，又完成“启发”这一要点的阐述。
5. 语言上，使用“tricked...into...”“promising to...”等短语，增强表达的生动性，同时保持语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
In different cultures, there are many stories that teach us valuable lessons. One such story that has inspired me is about Anansi, a clever spider from African tales. In the story, Anansi wanted to throw a party but had no food. He tricked other animals into bringing food by promising to tell them a secret. When they asked for the secret, he said, "Helping each other makes us strong."
This story tells us that working together is important. It taught me to help my classmates and share with others. It's a good way to make friends and solve problems.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；跨文化主题写作；叙事议论结合
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，内容逻辑清晰，从故事叙述到主旨提炼再到个人启发，过渡自然。语言简洁地道，用词准确，既体现了对异域文化故事的理解，又结合生活实际传递了生活智慧，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
