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八、书面表达(本题有1小题;共计10分)
在刚刚过去的5月份,你校围绕着"宁波元素"组织了一次丰富多彩的春游。假如你是李华,请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历,写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
要求:
(1)词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)短文须包含提示内容,可适当发挥;
(3)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
An Unforgettable School Trip
Last month, we went on a school trip to some famous places in Ningbo.
It was really a day to remember!
在刚刚过去的5月份,你校围绕着"宁波元素"组织了一次丰富多彩的春游。假如你是李华,请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历,写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
要求:
(1)词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)短文须包含提示内容,可适当发挥;
(3)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
An Unforgettable School Trip
Last month, we went on a school trip to some famous places in Ningbo.
It was really a day to remember!
答案
One possible version:
An Unforgettable School Trip
Last month, we went on a school trip to some famous places in Ningbo.
In the morning, we went to Ningbo Museum. We saw many photos about the past and learned a lot about the history of Ningbo. It was meaningful. At noon, we went to Nantang Old Street to try local snacks. They were so delicious that I couldn't stop eating. We even made Ningbo Tangyuan by ourselves. How interesting it was! In the afternoon, we took a walk around the beautiful Moon Lake. After that, we went boating on the lake and had great fun. We took a lot of photos there.
The school trip was not only exciting, but also helped me to know more about Ningbo.
It was really a day to remember!
An Unforgettable School Trip
Last month, we went on a school trip to some famous places in Ningbo.
In the morning, we went to Ningbo Museum. We saw many photos about the past and learned a lot about the history of Ningbo. It was meaningful. At noon, we went to Nantang Old Street to try local snacks. They were so delicious that I couldn't stop eating. We even made Ningbo Tangyuan by ourselves. How interesting it was! In the afternoon, we took a walk around the beautiful Moon Lake. After that, we went boating on the lake and had great fun. We took a lot of photos there.
The school trip was not only exciting, but also helped me to know more about Ningbo.
It was really a day to remember!
解析
【分析】
解题思路：首先明确文章结构，开头和结尾已给出，需按时间顺序（早、中、下午）整合表格信息；其次，每个时段对应表格的地点、活动和感受，补充合理细节（如了解宁波历史、吃当地小吃）让内容更充实；最后，用一般过去时写作，控制词数80左右，确保语言流畅、符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定时态：全文采用一般过去时，描述过去的春游活动；
2. 内容填充：
上午：对应表格“宁波博物馆”“看老照片”，补充“了解宁波历史”，感受用“meaningful”；
中午：对应表格“南塘老街”“做汤圆”，补充“尝试当地小吃”，感受用“interesting”；
下午：对应表格“月湖”“划船”，补充“玩得开心”；
3. 衔接：用时间状语（In the morning/At noon/In the afternoon）串联各部分，使文章连贯；
4. 检查：确保无真实信息，词数符合要求，内容完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
An Unforgettable School Trip
Last month, we went on a school trip to some famous places in Ningbo.
In the morning, we went to Ningbo Museum. We saw many photos about the past and learned a lot about the history of Ningbo. It was meaningful. At noon, we went to Nantang Old Street to try local snacks. They were so delicious that I couldn't stop eating. We even made Ningbo Tangyuan by ourselves. How interesting it was! In the afternoon, we took a walk around the beautiful Moon Lake. After that, we went boating on the lake and had great fun. We took a lot of photos there.
The school trip was not only exciting, but also helped me to know more about Ningbo.
It was really a day to remember!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时、信息整合写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，以时间为线索清晰串联春游活动，涵盖表格所有要点，适当补充细节丰富内容，时态运用准确，语言流畅自然，符合投稿语气，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.3
解题思路：首先明确文章结构，开头和结尾已给出，需按时间顺序（早、中、下午）整合表格信息；其次，每个时段对应表格的地点、活动和感受，补充合理细节（如了解宁波历史、吃当地小吃）让内容更充实；最后，用一般过去时写作，控制词数80左右，确保语言流畅、符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定时态：全文采用一般过去时，描述过去的春游活动；
2. 内容填充：
上午：对应表格“宁波博物馆”“看老照片”，补充“了解宁波历史”，感受用“meaningful”；
中午：对应表格“南塘老街”“做汤圆”，补充“尝试当地小吃”，感受用“interesting”；
下午：对应表格“月湖”“划船”，补充“玩得开心”；
3. 衔接：用时间状语（In the morning/At noon/In the afternoon）串联各部分，使文章连贯；
4. 检查：确保无真实信息，词数符合要求，内容完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
An Unforgettable School Trip
Last month, we went on a school trip to some famous places in Ningbo.
In the morning, we went to Ningbo Museum. We saw many photos about the past and learned a lot about the history of Ningbo. It was meaningful. At noon, we went to Nantang Old Street to try local snacks. They were so delicious that I couldn't stop eating. We even made Ningbo Tangyuan by ourselves. How interesting it was! In the afternoon, we took a walk around the beautiful Moon Lake. After that, we went boating on the lake and had great fun. We took a lot of photos there.
The school trip was not only exciting, but also helped me to know more about Ningbo.
It was really a day to remember!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时、信息整合写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，以时间为线索清晰串联春游活动，涵盖表格所有要点，适当补充细节丰富内容，时态运用准确，语言流畅自然，符合投稿语气，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.3
